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Khuda Se Ru-ba-Ru Hua... -
23rd September 2008, 02:37 AM
BahuT Samay baad is bazm meiN Likhne jaa Raha hooN... KucH Galti Ho To KhaakSaaR ko MaaF KariiyeGa!...
DostoN.. Is Se Pehle Mein Apani Ghazal Pesh Karuu... aaP se Kuch KahNa ChahuGa! Ek Din MeiN Khuda Se Ru-ba-Ru Hua Khuda Ne Mujhse Kaha!! meiN Tumare Aur Tumari MohabbaT Ke Liye Ek-Ek Tohfe Laya hooN.Phir Us Ne Mujhko Vo Dono Tohfe Bataye. Aur Kaha Khud ChuN Tu ApaNa TohFa auR Mujhe BaTa.. Ek Hai "Zindagi" aur Ek Hai "Maut" Sunkar Mein Sochne Lega To Khuda Ne Poocha Kis Soch Mein DhooB Gaye Ho Tum. In meiN se ek Tohfa ChuN aur Bata KauN sa Tu LeGa! Sochne Ke BaaD Meine Kaha Khuda Se MauT Ye SunkaR Khuda Ne Mujh se Kaha Zindagi Ke JagaH MauT Aaisa KyoN.. Meine Khuda Se Kaha.............. DaasTaaN-E-MohabbaT Mein Ab aur kya ChaahunGa Duniya meiN us ke AakaR naa LautNaa ChaahunGa Duniya ko us se pehle maiN jaan Naa Paya thaa Ab Uske Har ek Rang meiN Doobnaa ChaahunGa Apani Mohabbat Ke har Saaz’o SamaaN Juta Kar Aamad se us ke Pehle ek AashiyaNa ChaahunGa Jab Ghum Simat ke Aayenge AaNchal meiN us ke HaathoN meiN Haath us ke aur ek Rishta ChaahunGa UsKe Gum-E-ishQ meiN Aasq na Bah jayeiN PalkoN Pe Inhe maiN Gauhar saa ChaahunGa ZindaGi ko Bech kar Maut kharidega "Sharad" Mar kar Bhi Uske Liye Zindagi Jeena ChaahunGa AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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23rd September 2008, 02:26 PM
dear amrit
apki gajal bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut achi lagi thankssssssssssss a lotsssssssssssssssssssss ravi. |
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23rd September 2008, 02:53 PM
Sharad bhai,
Bahut khoobsurati se aapne khuda ko jawaab diya hai... Mar kar bhi uske liye zindagi jeena chahoonga... bahut khoob... daad kubool karna ek khoobsurat bayaani ke liye... yun hi likhte raho... khayal rakhna apna... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd September 2008, 06:29 PM
achcha laga apka jawab,bahut achche ahsaas rahe,sukriya,share karte rahe
khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai. |
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23rd September 2008, 06:32 PM
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Sharad ji ....Bahot achha laga aap ke nagme ...daad hajir hai kabool kijiye .. Younhi likhte rahiye ...hume padhne ki mouka dete rahiye..... ZindaGi ko Bech kar Maut kharidega "Sharad" Mar kar Bhi Uske Liye Zindagi Jeena ChaahunGa __kis keliye  Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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23rd September 2008, 08:01 PM
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Sharad jee, ek ruhaani nazm... paDh kar khushi huii.. pyaar aur pyaar ki intahaa... aur pyaar ki intahaa kab paagalpan aur junuun ban jaata hai yeh kabhi pata nahii.n chalta... mai.n isay 'madness' hii kahuu.ngaa.... isi khayaal se behad milta julta qalaam kabhii ham ne bhi likhaa thaa.. aaj aap ka likha huaa paDha to hame khud ka likha huaa qalaam dubaara yaad aa gaya.. aap ne beshaq khuub likha hai.. daad haazir hai! qubuul keejiye...likhte rahiye.. Mayank |
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25th September 2008, 01:57 PM
Ravinder SahiB...
Tahedil Se aaP ki TareeF Qabool Karte hai.. Meine To Bus Khuda Se Apane Dil Ke JazbaaT Bayan kiye the aur vo hi aaP Sabhi ko ! Bhi... Shukriya AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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25th September 2008, 05:00 PM
ZindaGi ko Bech kar Maut kharidega "Sharad"
Mar kar Bhi Uske Liye Zindagi Jeena ChaahunGa bahut khub amritji..........pyar main pagalpan na ho to pyar kaha hua????daad! mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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26th September 2008, 01:06 AM
PulKit Bhai!! ...
Kaise Ho Bhai aaP Aur Kya Life Kaisi chal rahi hai... Bhai Meine To sirF Vo kiya jo is Dil ne Mujh se Kaha dil jo kahta gaya vo mein Khuda ko sunaata gaya .. Ek Tamanaa hai ki Marne Ke baad bhi Hum Jee Sake!! aur jate jate Apani Zindagi Kisi Ke Naam Kar Sake!... Daad TahediL se QabooL Hai! AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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26th September 2008, 01:08 AM
Baagi Sahib...
behad Khushi Huyi aur SakooN mila!! Ki aaP ko Hamare ChanD LazF PasanD aaye! Humarri Aage Bhi koshish RaheGi Ki Is Bazm mein aur Bhi Accha Aur GahRe QalaaM Pad Sake!.. Dard Ke ShaaT Ek Naya RishTa Kaayam Kar Sake! AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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27th September 2008, 01:58 AM
sharad bhai !
badi jaldi ru ba ru ho gaye khuda se .. yahaN to dhoondh kar thak gaye ! bahut achhe jaa rahe haiN janaab ! tumhaari ghazal pe mujhe mayank bhai kaa hi kuch yaad aa gaya ! mohabbat asar laayegi dhire dhire idhar dhire udhar dhire dhire ... khair ... behad zahar farosh alfaazoN kaa istemaal kiya hai aapne apni ghazal meiN ... maiN kuch waQt ke liye kaaNp saa gayaa ! bahut achha likha hai ! tareef ke saath ! |
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27th September 2008, 01:56 PM
Diya SahiiBa...
Shukriya aaP ka ki Khaaksaar Ko Pada... tahe dil se aap Ki tareef wabool karTe hai ... BahuT see Cheeze hai jo shayaD mein yeha Kisi Se Share NahiN kaR Sakta HooN aur Shayad Na hi Kar PaauGa! Bus Ye Hi kahNa ChahuGa AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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27th September 2008, 02:06 PM
Mayank Jee...
Pehle To ye ki aaP Apani Jagah Sahi hai! .. Kabhi kabhi Aaisa Hota hai ... Pyar Jab Had se Jayda Bad jata To insaaN JaanwaR bhi Ban Jata hai.. Mayank Bhai Vo pyar Kya JisMeiN PagalPaN na Ho???? Vo pyar Kya Jis Mein Dard Na Do??? Vo pyar Kya Jis MeiN AasooN na Ho??? Aur Vo pyar Kya JunooN na Ho??? Khayal Sirf Khayal aur Kuch nahiN .. sirf itna hi KahuGa Insaan Har Cheez ka HakdaaR nahiN hota Shukriya! AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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28th September 2008, 12:05 AM
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kush rahiye god bless u  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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2nd October 2008, 01:48 AM
mausam Jee!
Shukriya aaP ka Bus aaP sab isi tarah Padte rahe ... aur hum koshish karte rahege Likhne Ki! AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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2nd October 2008, 01:50 AM
Kshitiz Sahib!....
Andaaz Accha Hai aaPka Tareef karne ka!! ... Shukriya! Bus isi tarah Aate rahe! aur Padte rahiiye! AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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2nd October 2008, 10:49 PM
sarad ji bhaut kush naseeb hoga jis eapne pyar kiya hoga....
bhaut acha jawab diya hai khuda ko...bas dua hai apa khush arhe..maut s edoor jindagi ki chav tale sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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7th October 2008, 11:06 PM
sunita virender jii
Shukriya Aap Ka jo is nacheez ko aap ne pada! AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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7th October 2008, 11:07 PM
Sakhi Jee...
KhushNaseeB Mein kyoki usne Humko Pyar Kiya .. aur sirf yehi Aasha Karta hoon ki vo jaha ho Khush Rahe! Tareef ke Liye Shukriya! AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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7th October 2008, 11:11 PM
Amrit ji acha likha hai aapne aapke ahsasaat pasand aye likhte rahiye yunhi.......
apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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11th October 2008, 12:36 AM
koi to ho
Sukarguzar hoon aap ka Jo Is QalaaM par Nazar Padii Aap Ki! Shukriya! AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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11th October 2008, 12:45 AM
SALAM
KYA BAAT HA AMRIT.BOHAT KHOOB.BOHAT DINO BAD KOI GHAZAL LIKHE MAGAR BOHAT KAMAL KI LIKHIBOHAT BOHAT ACHI LIKHE HA KA SAMJH NAHI ARAHA KA TAREEF KISE TARHAN KI JAYA.NICE.AISA KI LIKHTA RAHYA.BEST OF LUCK. TAKECARE ALLAHHAFIZ JO CHEEN LAITA HAI ANSOO MERAY RONE SE PEHLE, PHIR REHTA HAI WOH RAAT BHAR AISAY SAMNE, MAIN AKSAR CHAL PARTI HON USKA HAATH THAMNE, AB NEEND BHI AYE TO MAIN SONA NAHI CHATI, KISI QEEMAT PE BHI MAIN USKO KHONA NAHI CHATI, HO JAYE WOH KASH MERA MUJHE KHONE SE PEHLE, JO ATA HAI YAAD BOHUT SONE SE PEHLE. |
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14th October 2008, 01:09 AM
MuskaaN jee!
Kabhi kabhi Aaisa hota hai ki padne ke baad alfaz nahi milte ... mein samaj sakta hooN kyoki kai baar Aaisa hamare Shaat bhi hua hai.. Aur bahuT accha Lega ki aap ko Ghazal pasanD aayi! aage Bhi Koshish karuga accha likhne ki... AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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