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25th September 2004, 01:55 PM
Hi Guys,
Ever met some shayars to whom u just wanna say Tum shayri kartay hue lagtay ho aisay Ek daal pay do kawwe lar rahe ho jaisay (my lil bro) Atak pay phatak, phatak pay totey Tere jaise shayar raste pay sotey (Unknown) Aur kuch apni taareef aur unki burayi Hum woh shayar hai jo dil ko lubha te hai Tum woh shayar ho jo kutto ko rulate hai Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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25th September 2004, 04:39 PM
hai salim bhai....
lol aage paro... kisi din ham kutto k bhi din badlenge.. ho na ho...tere dil me ham bhi utrenge.. tu mane na mane shayer koi baat nahi.. hame tu parta jaroor hai..bas yahi baat sahi.. main kahi.n aau..main kahi.n jaau...teri nazer to jaroor hai.. main acchha likhu..main bura likhu...tere views bhi jaroor hai.. meri shayri pe vo dekho wah wah kiye jaate hai.. samajh kuchh aaya nahi aur (angrezo ki tareh) yah yah kiye jate hai..  urs-di ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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26th September 2004, 12:51 PM
Hi Meri pyari udas behna,
hahahahaha Kaafi acchha laga aapka reply. Chalo behna, aapkay kisi kalam say hume hassi to aayi.  Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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27th September 2004, 07:45 PM
lollll
aaap dono k hi likhe huye sher bohot hi mazedar the but speciallly udas k kyunki woh issse pehle meri nazar mein nahin aaaye the lekin jo salim ne likhe the woh itttefaq se pehle bhi pad rakhe the....but phir se pad kar bhi utni hi hansi aaayi jitni pehle aayi thiplzzzzz keep on posting take care smile n make others also smile those sparkling eyes A 100 watt smile the majestic walk the cheerful talk truly charming personality Guess,thats enough abt me :D |
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27th September 2004, 07:53 PM
kabhi kandhon pe apni laash uthai hoti
kabhi shehnaiyon me mayyat jo sajai hoti zubaan-e-dard tere samajh me aayi hoti poochte haal-e-dil us kutte (shayar) ka kabhi wo to kutta tha tu ne to insaaniyat dikhai hoti zubaan-e-dard tere samajh me aayi hoti aag jo ghar me apne daaman ne lagai hoti tere angan me maut se pehle shehnai hoti zubaan-e-dard tere samajh me aayi hoti Ppl just write what the feel here.. No preaching... In the last --------> Kisi ke dard me bhi sath dekar dekho na ye murjhaye hue gul zindagi ke rote hein mere sathi kisi ke dil ko dukhaya na karo kahin kuch log tanhai me aksar rote hein Regards इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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28th September 2004, 01:48 PM
Hi Khushiii ji,
Aap ko post pasand aayi, is ke liye bohot shukriya. Par janaab aakhir waali to hum ne khud banayi hai to woh aapne kaha parda??? Khair koi gila nahi. Agey say koshish rahegi naya material post karney kiSalim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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28th September 2004, 01:50 PM
Hi Dard e sush Ji,
Aji janaab yeh aapney yaha kaha post kar diya. Yeh to shayri e dard section ki shaan hona chaahiye. Umeed hai aap issey waha post karenge. Khayal rakhiye Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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Re: Rebutting some shayars -
29th September 2004, 02:15 PM
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lol tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon (NM) |
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29th September 2004, 02:16 PM
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29th September 2004, 02:25 PM
Hi Roopali ji,
Shukr hai aap thoda hassi to sahi. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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salim ji -
30th September 2004, 09:26 AM
hi salim ji waki kafi achi shayriya likhi hai aapne dil se tarf karne ka man ho rha hai aage ase hi likhte rhyega
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30th September 2004, 12:53 PM
Hi Chandni Ji,
Shukriya jo aapney yaha aakey issay parha aur saraha. Koshish rahegi aapke liye aur bhi acchha pesh kar sakay. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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