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waahhh mast saahab waahh kamaal ki adaaygee huii hai is baar to bas ke waah hi waahhhh baarish ki boondon par jo kalaam pesh kiya hai wo bahut khoob hai.... meri taraf sse dili daad is muqammal ghazal ke liye..... likhte rahen.... bahut rawaan gahzal huii hai is baar behad mubaarkbaad aapko.... Shaad.... |
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yoon hee likhte rahiye..aur mahfil me raunak bikherte rahiye.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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Madhu aapka saath hamesha se ek inspiration ki tarah saath chala hai, sahi kaha lafz ki rumaniyat hi sar chadh kar bol rahi hai...har baar ki tarah saath dene ka shukriyaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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Bhai baarish shabd hi aisa he ki ruka hi nahi jata aur meri to sab se pakki saheli jaisi hai baarish jise har baat kehne aur bataane ko jee chahta hai. Ek kavita usi saheli ke naam. Bol ri baarish, bol na tu... bol kahan se aayi hai? Kyun? cham cham cham baras ke tuune dil mein aag lagaayi hai jhoolon par udate rehna aur pee ka dena peeng mujhe barson ke sooye armaanon ne aaj to lee angdaayi hai bol ri baarish......................... Dil ka dard, piya ki yaadein, garm chaai ki ye chuski ye sab jaane kahan se tu phir apne saath le aayi hai bol ri baarish............ baadal ka aanchal odhe lagti hai mujhko tu dulhan itnaa tu jo roti hai kya aaj teri bidaayi hai? bol ri baarish.................... sakhi ri teri boondon mein dikhta hai mujhko aks apna kya tere piya ne bhi tujhko koi chubhti baat sunaayi hai? bol ri baarish............... chod de ab tu laaj sharam aur odh le aanchal masti ka keh de saagar se jaaker gar ussey milne aayi hai bol ri baarish ....................... Sarika |
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Bhai baarish shabd hi aisa he ki ruka hi nahi jata aur meri to sab se pakki saheli jaisi hai baarish jise har baat kehne aur bataane ko jee chahta hai. Ek kavita usi saheli ke naam. Bol ri baarish, bol na tu... bataa kahan se aayi hai? Kyun? cham cham cham baras ke tuune dil mein aag lagaayi hai jhoolon par udate rehna aur pee ka dena peeng mujhe barson ke sooye armaanon ne aaj to lee angdaayi hai bol ri baarish......................... Dil ka dard, piya ki yaadein, garm chaai ki ye chuski ye sab jaane kahan se tu phir apne saath le aayi hai bol ri baarish............ baadal ka aanchal odhe lagti hai mujhko tu dulhan itnaa tu jo roti hai kya aaj teri bidaayi hai? bol ri baarish.................... sakhi ri teri boondon mein dikhta hai mujhko aks apna kya tere piya ne bhi tujhko koi chubhti baat sunaayi hai? bol ri baarish............... chod de ab tu laaj sharam aur odh le aanchal masti ka keh de saagar se jaaker gar ussey milne aayi hai bol ri baarish ....................... Sarika |
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dil se daad aapki is behatreen kavita par.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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bahut khoob koshish rahi aapki is baar Sarika ji...... bahut dil se bahut gahre aur sacche khayaal likhe hain apnne..... eek baat aur khayaal itne naazuq hain ke lagtaa hai baarih ki boondon par baadal ki kalam se likhaa gaya ho..... waahhhhhhhhhhhhhh likhtee rahiye khuhs rahye..... "Allah kare ho zore kalam aur ziyaadah..." |
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29th June 2015, 08:05 AM
Bahut khoob doston, mehfil mein ab tak ek kavita ek ghazal aur chand sher haazir huye hai baarish lafz ke istemaal ke saath.
Umeed hai aur dost bhi is mehfil ko aage badhaayenge aur is lafz ke saath apni shirkat karenge Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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Sarika ji namaste, Bohot hi sundar kavita sunai aapne.........aaur aapka barish se baat karne ka andaz to dil ko choo gaya.....bohot hi achhi....bohot masoom aur bohot surili lagi ye peshkash......yoon hi likhti rahen...duaon k sath Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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doston...barish ke mausam mein barish lafz ko aapke nagmo ka intzaar hai....mahfil ko apne khyalon se raushan karein...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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namskaar doston..
yoon to barish ka mausam muhabbat ka roomaniyat ka mausam hai..har taraf hariyali sab kuch khila khila sa mahsoos hota hai...par kabhi kabhi yoon bhi hota hai ki meet jab bahot door ho to yahi barish kisi dushman se kam nahi lagti jiski fuhare dil ko sukoon nahi deti balki aur tadpati hain...aise hee kuch khyaal aapse baant rahi hoon...bataiyega kaise lage.. kuch boonde barishon ki kuch yaad sanam teri sab mil ke aaj dil ko mere jala rahi hain.. jab se chale gaye ho tum mujhko yoon satakar dil mera ro raha hai ye geet ga rahi hain.. sab mil ke aaj dil ko mere jala rahi hain.. har koi yahaan khush hai ulfat bhara sama hai bas ek aankhein meri aansoo baha rahi hain.. sab mil ke aaj dil ko mere jala rahi hain.. aa jao ab ke tum bhi sawan chala na jaye hans hans ke sabhi sakhiyaan mujhko sata rahi hain.. sab mil ke aaj dil ko mere jala rahi hain.. pairon me baandh payal sang me thirak loon tere madhu se mila doon inko jo ye aajmaa rahi hain.. sab mil ke aaj dil ko mere jala rahi hain... madhu अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Madhu behad umdaa nazm huyi hai is baar aur ek alag sa roop diya hai aapne, shayad kabhi barsaat dil ka har gham aur karoch kar ubhaar bhi deti hai.... aapki is nazm ko mera salaam Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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10th July 2015, 02:22 PM
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amazing madhu jii..... i cant utter a word to praise its beauty...... lovely just fantabulous....................... keep writing shaad..... |
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aate rahein....  अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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13th July 2015, 10:26 PM
Chaliye baarish lafz par sabne behad umdaa ghazal/nazm aur kavitaaein bhi rakhi aap sabko doston ka shukrguzaar hoon ki aap is mehfil ko aage badhaate rehte hai....Waqt aa gaaya hai ki mehfil ek nazm alfaaz ke rang mein doob jaayein...
Doobne ki baat huyi hai to lafz bhi wazn se bhara hona chahiye, to is baar ka lafz hai 'saaqi' Jaleel Manikpuri ka ek sher zehan mein aa raha hai aataa hai jii me.n saaqi-e-mah-vash pe baar baar lab chuum luu.n tiraa lab-e-paimaana chho.D kar Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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adaab doston...
lafz saqi par pesh hai ek chhoti si koshish.... lagta hai ishq ka nasha dil se utar gaya saqii sharaab ab yahi bhate hain yaar ko. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Hmmm asardaar aage suniyee jhuki palkon se barasti hai aafat pyaar ki dekhiye vo is qadar jalaate hai yaar ko Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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doston....lafz saqi par aapke kalaam ka intzaar hai mahfil ko......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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6th August 2015, 08:44 PM
Saqi ne apni aankho.N se itni pilaii hei
Ab kya majal haath mei.N ik aur jaam lei.N Fakhri |
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7th August 2015, 04:04 AM
Shukria Madhuji aap ne pasand kiya.
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7th August 2015, 04:05 AM
ik aur sher Saqi per:
साक़ी न दे शराब तो कोई फिक़र नही मे पी लून्ग उस्की आन्खो से उस्को खबर नही |
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ek sher ye bhi dekhiye...... saaqii hame.n sharaab se hotaa nahii nashaa, ashqo.n ki chaar boo.nd milaa de sharaab me.n.. Shaad.... |
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7th August 2015, 10:12 PM
Bohot khoobehfil sajai hai...shaad sahab aur fakhri sahab ne....waaah kya baat hai
Janchne parakhne ka koi paymana raha hoga.. Darkinaar muzhe kya soch kar saaki ne kar diya.. Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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8th August 2015, 06:43 PM
Shukria zarra nawazi ka Madhuji, Shaad saheb, Bhushan bhai aur Mastsaheb. Ashk milane se sharab ka nashaa badh jata hei - koshish ker ke daikhei.Nge. Wah Shaadsaheb kya baat hei.
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9th August 2015, 12:10 AM
Saaqi na dey sharab na dey per subu to dey
Peene ki kon kehta hei per iski bu to dey Fakhri |
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Aate rahein.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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ik sher hai jo mujhe bahut pasand hai, shayar shayad Adam saahib haiN, par main sure nahi huN...
Halka-halka suroor hai saaqi, Baat koi juroor hai saaqi.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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9th August 2015, 02:25 PM
Ek sher shayri e sharab me post kiya tha, par yahan wo jyada fit lag raha hai...isliye fir se post kar raha hoon..
"Ishk khuda hai, yaar koi saaqi nahi mera. Uski aankhooN me may nahi, aab-e-hayaat hai" Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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10th August 2015, 11:44 AM
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Bahut khoob taish ji.... Bhushan ji...........waaah! अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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10th August 2015, 06:20 PM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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11th August 2015, 02:59 AM
Here is a parody to Ghalib's famous sher:
Ishq ne Ghalib nikamma ker diya Verna hum bhi aadmi they kaam ke Kal talak jo molvi masjid mei.N they Aaj bun bethe bhagat woh Raam ke Din dhale jub woh mileNge aan ker Muntazir hei.N hum to bus us shaam ke AaNsoo nikal padey hei.N aaNkho.N se baarha Hansna bhi agar chaha is dil ko thaam ke Her aahato.N pe tere aane ka woh dhoka Aaey hei.N aesey lamhe bhi meri shaam ke Kal talak baahosh ik insaan they Aaj diwaney hei.N tere naam ke Raho.N mei.N woh milna neechi nigah kiye Dil muntazir hey ab bhi tere salam ke Zindagi bher piyaar mei.N tadpa kiye Kub mileNge din hamei.N aaram ke Yaad tujhko kiyo.N kare Fakhri koii Jub aaya na kaam tou kisi khaas-o-aam ke Hope you all like it. |
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11th August 2015, 10:40 AM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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