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From the Beginning...To Forever--Warda and Karthik - 27th December 2005, 11:32 PM

Wow! It just seems like yesterday when, in march, warda and karthik became official members of this site……..and also a part of this family…then….they were complete ajnabees….to themselves and the rest of the family….but now….we are very close friends…..and so today….we both have completed 1000 posts….and to celebrate tht together….we have put together a small thread for the whole shayri.com family…..we want to thank u….and to do tht…we have come up with two poems…together…..
And we hope to stay with this family for quite a while….together

I still remember the first time,
Your hand wiping away my tears, keeping the rhyme
You kept my heart from shattering to pieces
You kept my pain from breaking my soul
Your love showed me the right way
Your kindness helped me with what I had to say
Without you, I am sure to have died
I would have been a living corpse away shied
But, God shined his sunlight towards me
With that light, I caught your angelic face,
Ready, oh so ready, to stand by me
I still remember the days when I struggled
I thought I was a failure, I was so troubled
No one wanted to stand by my side
No one wanted to get caught helping
But you, you were there from the beginning
Just when I thought “I’ve had it!”
You came as my savior
My angel
My knight in shining armor
I will always be grateful
Thank you…


and this is to u all............

The first time on this site
I was a stranger, with a little fright
Not knowing if I would be welcomed
I was a bit timid, a bit hesitant
But all of you showered me with love
And helped me express how I felt
As time went on, I grew to love this family
I grew to trust this family
And now I want to say thanks to you all
For being so kind and considering
For being there in the good time and bad times
I have found brothers, sisters, and a mother
I have found life-long friends
No matter where I go,
I hope to see u with me
My onli wish is to see this family…
Always by my side
A thanks to you all from two young members of this site: karthik, and warda



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Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…

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Warda


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27th December 2005, 11:42 PM

hey warda n karthik...
congratulation my dearest angels on completing your 1000 posts...
may god bless you my sweethearts.....
keep posting n may god bless u forever n alwaz...
keep smiling..take care...bye

luv,
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28th December 2005, 02:22 AM

Dear warda & karthik,

Both of you congrulation on your 1000th post. keep writting and posting your such a wonderful creations. Like reading you and looking forward to read more from you. My heartiest wishes are both for you. be happy always and take good care of yourself. aur tum dono ne jo likha hai yaha yeh bhi bahut pasand aaya.


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28th December 2005, 08:00 AM

DEar kartik and warda
i really do agree with ur thoughts .when u come this site for first time u feel afraid ,feel stranger.but this site like a sea soon will take u in and u wont feel like a guest or out sider.i really love ur thoughts and thnx to both of u to express feelings of new comer . congrulation for completion of 1000 post .i really like ur writing way ,ur expression use of word .seems u choose words like a pearl. Keep posting like this .


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28th December 2005, 10:39 AM

1stly congratulations to both of u wardha and karthik i pray that u post ur 2000 also very quickly.............................
now getting to these poem they r very good nice choice of words as u both always use 2....................


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. - 28th December 2005, 08:04 PM

congrats to both of u

keep it up...


SHWETA


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wo waqt suhana hota hai

uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai

kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai

jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
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28th December 2005, 08:22 PM

kya kahoon shabd kam hain.to behtareen shakhsiyat do behtareen shayar,dono ne aaj apni 1000 wi post poori ki hai,bahut hi sundar coincidence hai.bas main dil se dono ko iski badhayi deta hoon.aur umeed karta hoon ki dono bas yunhi humare saath bane rahenge humesa humesha ke liye.

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28th December 2005, 08:52 PM

hello friends...as warda has already mentioned...we have reached a point where we have become so close to u all...
found so many friends...brothers n sisters...its a pleasure to come here and is irresistable...as the love that exists drags us here even if we want to keep away for some reason or the other...
it seems only like the day before when we came here...
coincidence or vat...both warda n myself came here at the same time...n now we r celebrating 1000 posts...at the same time...
i'm happy for that...
we would like to thank all the members and administrators...who were with us in this journey and i hope they all will give their support in the same fashion...
we thought we got to address some members to show our grattitude...
so here it goes...

meena chheda - maa...thanks for always being there for us...i'm sure u will be with us in future too...take care

parastaar- paras di...u r a wonderful person and its a pleasure for both of us to meet u...n i still have ur pm...n i will keep it with me...take care

shimul - shimul di...thanks a lot for ur encouragement n wishes...take care

jasleen- heyy buddy ur nt comin here...ur not comin online...what happ...u were such a nice friend of us...stay tht way...take care

farhana- heyy dear...thanks for always bein there for us...we had great time with u...take care

parul- heyy sweet parul...u r such a lovely person...thanks for bein there...take care

priya- hey sis...u r sweet n wonderful...have always been with us n pampered...thank u...take care

garima- heyy sis...u r wonderful with a beautiful heart...keep it up...take care

palak- heyy stupid lol...u r such a nice kid sorry ...sorry jus kiddin..thanks a lot..we miss u...take care

pallavi- pallooooo....vere r u....we r missing ur heheheh on our post...make this post complete ...take care

shweta- thanks buddy...we look forward for your company...take care

srdh- shradha ji...u have entered this family very recentlyy...i'm sure u will be a nice friend for us...take care

kasak- hello sis...been a long time ...thanks for bein with us...take care

sukanya- sukanya di...genius...u really r one...thanks for all the love n affection...take care

amanush (danny)- heyy amanspeare as warda often calls u...u r such a nice person...u r an inspiration for us...a class poet...brilliant...take care

rohin- hey buddy...vat shld we say abt u noww...wonderful poet...n wonderful person... as i told u...refreshin...tht is the way u think...

pulkit- heyy bro always encouraged us n helped a great deal...
thanks...take care

aman ji- aman bhai...u r a wonderful person...good at heart...take care

kunal- hey bro...smart intelligent and a versatile writer...really... take care

lucky- heyy bro...u r a nice guy...stay like tht...take care

mehuljain- gald tht ur back here...u r a nice poet...take care

rajat- rajat ji...havent talked much but came to knw tht ur a good friend of warda...take care

vipin- vipin ji...u r an amazin writer...take care

chand- emotions often expressed brilliantly... u r great
take care

mayank - bhai...u r a nice person...be happy alwayss take care

akant - akant ji u r a wonderful writer n a wonderful kind hearted person...take care

musharrafhussain- musharraf ji...u r a wonderful writer n a very nice person...take care

manojkureel- manoj bhai...brilliant writer...very nice person...take care

we are really sorry if we missed out on any one...very very sorry...
thanks for every thin friends...thanks for the love and concern...we will always remember u...
take care
luv u all


Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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28th December 2005, 08:58 PM

hey bro this was gr8 from ur behalf that u gave a place in this post to a person like me.just cant say nething,but wud only say that i wud always try to b what i m for me n for all frnz of mine like u.just keep posting dear.just keep posting.

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29th December 2005, 10:18 PM

hey warda n karthik...
congratulation my dearest angels on completing your 1000 posts...
may god bless you my sweethearts.....
keep posting n may god bless u forever n alwaz...
keep smiling..take care...bye

luv,


hey farhana...thanks a lot for always bein there with us...take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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30th December 2005, 10:40 PM

heyy parul...thanks so much buddy....we r really gald to c ur replyy...we'll keep writin...n hope u will keep readin us n giv ur valuable opinion...thank u take care
warda n karthik


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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2nd January 2006, 06:55 PM

hello shradha ji...
thanks a lot for comin...it was nice to c ur replyy...
hope u will be with us till the very end extendin ur support...
take care
warda n karthik


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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15th March 2006, 02:00 PM

hey mehul
thanks for the reply...
the reply is a super quick one ...i knw...but cant help it yaar
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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15th March 2006, 02:01 PM

hello shweta ji...
really nice to hav u here...
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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