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Sad my sad story :( - 6th June 2012, 08:29 PM

sari rat hum unki badolat rote rahe
chup krwane ki wjaye wo subha uthkr hal puchte hain
kya yahi tak tha unka pyar humse
wo koi jawab na denge fir bhi unse ye swaal puchte hain

unse pyar kiya rat din unke naam kiya
humne unke pairo me dil apna daal diya
humse karke pyar bhari baten din rat
maine pucha or bs dost hain hum keh ke taal diya
kyu apne dil ko kabu me na rkha mene
kyu apna pyar me aesa haal kiya

kisi ne roka bhi ta mujhe
har baat pe toka bhi tha mujhe
par mera ye dil nahi tha mana
jis gali me roka tha khud ko jane se
fir kyu hua mera usi gali me jana

kya khe ab or apne bare me
hum na samajh hain thode se
dukh to bohot hua hai hume
hmesha k liye unke khone se


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6th June 2012, 09:53 PM

Gazzal ji,

ehsaas acche hain.......dard se bharpur......umeed karta hoon in ehsaasoN ka aapke jeevan se koi nata na ho......!!!

aapka.


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ehsaas acche hain.......dard se bharpur......umeed karta hoon in ehsaasoN ka aapke jeevan se koi nata na ho......!!!

aapka.
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7th June 2012, 07:12 AM

gazzal jee, ehsaas behad pasand aye mujhe. Yun hee likhti rahiye.



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7th June 2012, 07:30 AM

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sari rat hum unki badolat rote rahe
chup krwane ki wjaye wo subha uthkr hal puchte hain
kya yahi tak tha unka pyar humse
wo koi jawab na denge fir bhi unse ye swaal puchte hain

unse pyar kiya rat din unke naam kiya
humne unke pairo me dil apna daal diya
humse karke pyar bhari baten din rat
maine pucha or bs dost hain hum keh ke taal diya
kyu apne dil ko kabu me na rkha mene
kyu apna pyar me aesa haal kiya

kisi ne roka bhi ta mujhe
har baat pe toka bhi tha mujhe
par mera ye dil nahi tha mana
jis gali me roka tha khud ko jane se
fir kyu hua mera usi gali me jana

kya khe ab or apne bare me
hum na samajh hain thode se
dukh to bohot hua hai hume
hmesha k liye unke khone se
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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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