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Azad nazm - 21st May 2002, 08:36 PM

Main jab tary yaad ki shidat main ro parun gi
Tum cupkay say maray kamray main aa kar
Mujhay tasly day jana
Mary har aah ko nam kar dayna
Mary har sans ko muytar kar dana
Tum maray pass to na hu ga
Par bhir bhi
Taray vajude ki khusbo say
Mehak si jayun gi
Jub main taray Galay lag kar ro pary thi:::
Us lamhay ko Judayi main mary dharus bana dan


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Love Kyoun Rona - 21st May 2002, 09:12 PM

Dear Noureen Shahibah
Another nice poem i like it very much. My fav line is:
"Main jab tary yaad ki shidat main ro parun gi"

But why, why do you cry. Mujai lagtha hai kai tumaha koi dard hai jis ko tum ansoon main nikaal rahi ho.

Kyoun kai is sher mein, apni qismat ko kos rahe haiN app, jis ne Tumaha mehroomi ke sivaa aur kuchh naheen bakhsha. magar mere khayaal meiN yahaan rona qismat ka naheen balke apni kam himmati ka hai!

Anyway that is what I think.

Carry on writing.

Please read my last post and tell me what you think

Faisal


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