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"RAAH" dekhti hai "NIGHAAYEIN" meri -
24th November 2005, 08:35 PM
''DIL'' ki gehraayiyon mein...
base na jaane kitne ''GAM'' hai inhi ''SAWAALON" se aaj..... ye meri "AANKHEIN" nam hai jisne ''DARD'' diya kya.... de paayega wo ''KHUSHI'' mujhe inhi "SAWAALON" mein aaj.. phansi meri "DHADKAN" hai "RAAH" dekhti hai..... ye "NIGHAAYEIN meri shayad aaj "USI" ke liye.... zinda "HUM" hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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26th November 2005, 07:43 PM
nice......................
.  . Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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27th November 2005, 03:13 PM
thanx Chand si
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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27th November 2005, 03:29 PM
Kuhulika ji
Bahut accha likha hai aapne. Khusnaseeb hoon jo yeh parhne ko mila. Aise hee likhtey rahiyega 
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27th November 2005, 03:40 PM
accha laga jaanker apko pasand aaya Vipin ji
or mera naam SHWETA hai KUHU... nahi aate rahiyega.... jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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27th November 2005, 06:12 PM
so sweet jaanu.......!!!
very cute.....intezaar!!! do keep writing.... urs, KasaK....... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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27th November 2005, 07:21 PM
nice... shweta ... nicely written...
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Re: "RAAH" dekhti hai "NIGHAAYEIN" meri -
28th November 2005, 04:46 AM
Originally posted by kuhulika
''DIL'' ki gehraayiyon mein... base na jaane kitne ''GAM'' hai inhi ''SAWAALON" se aaj..... ye meri "AANKHEIN" nam hai jisne ''DARD'' diya kya.... de paayega wo ''KHUSHI'' mujhe inhi "SAWAALON" mein aaj.. phansi meri "DHADKAN" hai "RAAH" dekhti hai..... ye "NIGHAAYEIN meri shayad aaj "USI" ke liye.... zinda "HUM" hai Intazaar ke ghadi khat.te hote hein magar isske phal meethe hote hein...! Very nicely written...Shweta Ji ! Thanks Take care  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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28th November 2005, 05:31 AM
accha likkha hai shweta....keep writing...take care...bye
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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28th November 2005, 01:29 PM
hi Kasak, accha laga jaankar tumhe pasand aaya
or intezar hi to hai uska.... jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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28th November 2005, 01:30 PM
hi Rohin ji,
aapko pasand aaya mujhe accha laga..... waise kafi time baad dekha apko apni post per.... aate rahiyega jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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28th November 2005, 01:32 PM
Danny ji,
aapko pasand aaya khushi huyi.... or intezar ka phal meetha hi hota hai.. dekhte hai kab tak karna padega intezar... aate rahiyega jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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28th November 2005, 01:33 PM
hi Farru,
yaar accha lagta hai tumhe apni post per dekh kar.... aati raha karo.... pasand aaya uske liye thanx... jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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28th November 2005, 09:14 PM
"RAAH" dekhti hai.....
ye "NIGHAAYEIN meri shayad aaj "USI" ke liye.... zinda "HUM" hai Namaskar Kuhulika Bahut kum shabdon mein bahut kuch khas likha hay tumney......I liked it.......yuun hi likhtey rehna meri daad kabul karna Sada kush raho |
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29th November 2005, 12:04 AM
''DIL'' ki gehraayiyon mein...
base na jaane kitne ''GAM'' hai inhi ''SAWAALON" se aaj..... ye meri "AANKHEIN" nam hai Hmmmmmm....Nice words...! jisne ''DARD'' diya kya.... de paayega wo ''KHUSHI'' mujhe inhi "SAWAALON" mein aaj.. phansi meri "DHADKAN" hai Waaaaahh....! "RAAH" dekhti hai..... ye "NIGHAAYEIN meri shayad aaj "USI" ke liye.... zinda "HUM" hai Hmmmmmmmm......! Dear Shveta, Bahut hi pyaara likha hai tume... Expressed urself really nicely.... I loved reading it... Do keep writing...TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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29th November 2005, 07:04 PM
Sukanya ji,
aapki daad sar aankhon per...... or mera naam Shweta hai Kuhu.... nahi jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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29th November 2005, 07:09 PM
hey Pulkit,
bahut accha laga tum yaahan aaye or isay padaa.... mujhe accha lagaa.. bahut accha lagaa...... aate rehna.... or plz dont forget to insert "W" in my name baba........ jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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