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baalpan ni yaad [gujrati] -
9th April 2003, 01:04 AM
Baalpan ni yaad
Baalpan ni yaad manae Kemae kari na aawe re Ghanuy mathhu chhu Yaad karwa….. Khati - mithhi Koi madhuri Nani moti waat Kemae kari na aawae re. Wadilo ne nadi farazo Bhai-bhandu ne…. Aemna mitro Ekalta ma atwaayu Baalpan Ghanuy mathhu chhu Yaad karwa… Baalpan na laad Kemae kari na aawae re Bhanta-bhanta Ramwu-bhamwu.. Santakukdi ne Fairfudardi… Sakhio na sangaath Bhawe toi… Kori hathheli ma Laagni… Kemae kari na aawae re Khuli aankho na Ajwaale shodhu Ne… Bhandh kari aankho Ne… Dhyaan lagaawu toi Baalpan ni yaad manae Kemae kari na aawae re. |
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5th February 2005, 02:35 PM
Bachpan ki yaad muje nahi aa rahi...
Bahot koshish karti hu Koi chhoti moti.. Kadwi mithhi yaad Par nahi........ Bachpan ki yaad muje nahi aa rahi... Maa pitaji aur oonki apni majbooriya Bhai bahen aur oonke apne dost Tanhaai maie ghujarta chala mera bachpan Bahot koshish karti hu Yaad aaye koi bachpan k mile huae dulaar Par nahi....... Bachpan ki yaad muje nahi aa rahi Woh sathh padhna khelna Woh lipna chhipna Khil khilana..... Bahot sare dosto k sathh rahna Aur fir bhi khud ko akela hi pana Bahot koshish karti hu Par nahi....... Bachpan ki yaad muje nahi aa rahi Khuli aankho k oojalae maie To kabhi kar k bandh aankho ko Dhyaan lagaaati hu Par nahi....... Bachpan ki yaad muje nahi aa rahi... |
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5th February 2005, 02:47 PM
Didi...
saras lakhhyu cche tamae... manae bahu j gami chhe....  aano bhaav bahu j sundar cche... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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5th February 2005, 03:03 PM
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pulkit, tane mari kavita ane aeno bhav gamyo, jaani aanand thhayo. chal ! tane aa kavita lakhi tyaarno maro bhav kahu... ek wakhat mane kahewa ma aavyu ke baalpan par kai k lakho. tyaare maie vicharyu k badha j +ve lakshae... aetlay maie -ve lakhyu. ne mari kavita aam badha thhi alag hati ae divse. didi |
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5th February 2005, 06:59 PM
mane lil gujrathi avadthi par tamhe hindinmein translate kare chhhe neways bahut accha likha aaps sabko bachpan mein le kar chali gayi aapki post ka hamesha iontezar hota hain likhhte rahe
" Deewana parwana mastana hoon Ashiyana mera naam hain dil ka mehmaan hoon ishq mera kaam hain" |
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6th February 2005, 05:34 PM
Hi Meenu Di,
As always, very beautifully written in u're unique style. Aap ka toh pata nahi, mujhe mera bajpan toh bohot yaad aagaya  Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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6th February 2005, 08:19 PM
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meri rachna pasand karne k liye aapki aabhari hu. meena |
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6th February 2005, 08:21 PM
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salim, tumhara bachpan tumhe yaad aaya aur tum khush huae .... to muje bhi khushi hai......... didi |
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6th February 2005, 08:29 PM
bhai jaan
bachpan ki yaad aapko kaise aa sakti hai ab to aap itne bade ho gaye ho .. arre hume hi abhi apne bachpan ki yaad nahi aati jab ki abhi to hum chote haiN to aapko kaise aayegi .. hi hi hi likha bahut achha hai padh ke achha laga aise hi likhte rahiye apna khyaal rakhiye |
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6th February 2005, 08:35 PM
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mere chhote bachae, kuch yaade saanso k sath hi chalti hai.... shayed yah oonhi maie se hai....... tumhari didi |
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7th February 2005, 12:39 PM
meena di.....
bachpan ki yaadon ko sahi bayan kiya hai aapne..... mere dost gujrati hain....unse matlab samjha..... sahi kaha aapne ki bachpan phir se nahi aata..... vo doston ke saath ghoomna....vo meetha phal khana.....bus yaaden reh jaati hain..... aapka baccha..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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wah wah -
7th February 2005, 01:16 PM
MEENA
WAH MAZA AAVI GAYI, EK KAAM KAR AAJ PAR EK LAKH KADACH HUN MANE TO MALI LAV. |
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7th February 2005, 05:12 PM
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mere bachae, aman......... tumhare dosto ne arth samajaya to achhi baat hai waise isi post par maine hindi maie bhi anuwaad kiya hai .. chaho to padh lena waise shukria....... tumhari di |
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Re: wah wah -
7th February 2005, 05:14 PM
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mita, hahaahahahhahahahahaahaha ha jaroor aaj par lakhu to ae ahesaas ma tu pan hoi j ema koi shak nathhi. meena |
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7th February 2005, 07:38 PM
Meena Ji,
Ghanij praktisha pachi farithi Gujarati bhasha maa tamara tarafthi vancva madyu!! Khubaj saras rachna chey! Prasnsa matey shabdo j jadta nathi. Khuli aankho na Ajwaale shodhu Ne… Bhandh kari aankho Ne… Dhyaan lagaawu toi Baalpan ni yaad manae Kemae kari na aawae re. Wah! Asha rakhi shakun key tamey avarnavar amoney aavi aavi sunder rachna o vanchvano labh aapta rahesho! Rajan |
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7th February 2005, 08:17 PM
Maasi...?
vaat kidhi tau khali bachpan ni..ane saathe saathe kehta gaya ke bachpan ni yaad mane nathi aavti...saras bovvaj saras.... Talib. |
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7th February 2005, 08:32 PM
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kavita ekdam saras che..... Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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7th February 2005, 08:50 PM
sabkuch bhai jaan ,
aap kuch bhi kabhi bhi likhe uska hit hona to lazmi hai ... aaj ki ye kavita bhi kuch kam nahi ,,... sach ek sacchai si hai ... jise padh ke apni hi likhi kuch lines yaad aa gayi ... jo maine udas ji ki kisi kavita ke reply maiN likhi thi .... aapko pesh kar raha hai ... umeed hai pasand aayeNgi... mera bachpan -------------------- ek kahani hai jo haqeeqat ki... mera bachpan nam hai uska.. rakh ke gaya aanko pe sapne.. mera bachpan nam hai uska... shararat ke nishan hai jo badan pe mera bachpan nam hai uska... maa ki gaud main jo beeta ... mera bachpan naam hai uska... jab milta tha 'saccha_pyar' sabka... mera bachpan naam hai uska... jawani dehleez pe lake jisne chora mera bachpan nam hai uska... jo khatam hua nahi ab tak dil main... mera bachpan nam hai uska ... lautega nahi chahte hue bhi kabhi.. mera bachpan naam hai uska... yaad hai jo bhulayi na ja sakegi... mera bachpan naam hai uska....  kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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8th May 2005, 09:57 AM
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rajan, pahela to maafi maangu chhu k jawaab aapwanu bhuli gayi ...... aabhar .... mari rachna pasand karwa badal khush rahe..... tari bahen |
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8th May 2005, 10:00 AM
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mujhe guj. bilkul samajh me nahi aati.. lekin yes hindi .. maa .. bachapan ki yaad aati hai na.. jab kisi ka bachapana dikhata hai.. koi bachha khelata huwa... koi bachi apani maa ko "mujhe bhi god me le lo" aisa kehkar usake pichhe duudati hai to.. koi bacha bhhid se dur tanha sa baitha hota hai.... us waqt bachapan ki yaad aati hai.. bahut baar aati hai. aur kya kahu.... aapka bacha |
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8th May 2005, 10:00 AM
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talib, ek to taru ahi aawwu swapnvat hoi, ne ae pal hu chuki gayi... ae mara maate sharam ni waat chhe..... maafi mangu chhu k dhyan n rahyu.......... ha..... baalpan ni waat kari ne sathe kaheti gayi k yaad nathhi aawti.. shu karu... bahu mathhu chhu yaad karwa ne chhataay yaad nathhi aawti.... lol masi |
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8th May 2005, 10:05 AM
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mere anu, der se jawaab dene aayi hu . maafi chhati hu. aabhar..... tane mari kavita gami . lol tumhari di |
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8th May 2005, 10:09 AM
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mere kunu, tumhe jawaab dete der ho gayi....... aur itni achhi kavita par jawaab der se de rahi hu... maafi chahti hu. tumahre bachpan se mil kar achah laga. SBJ |
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8th May 2005, 10:13 AM
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priy garima, kuch na kaho.... kuch bhi na kaho... bas ... maa k gale lag jaao. khush raho maa |
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