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ashq bahaane se kya haasil ? -
1st July 2006, 01:29 PM
doob kar gam-e-saagar mein ashq bahaane se kya haasil ?
roshni ke shehron mein dil jalane se kya haasil ? chod kar apni jamin kaun jaye sehra* mein naukri karne apnon se jo kar de juda aise kamane se kya haasil ? kaali kamaai karne wale siyaasatdaanon* se koi yeh keh de ujli safed poshakein pehan kar muskurane se kya haasil ? ishq ki jami par bane mehal mausam badle dheh jayenge tufaanon ki jadd mein gharonde banane se kya haasil ? sehra = desert (gulf country) siyaasatdaanon = leaders,neta -MANOJ KUREEL karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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1st July 2006, 02:44 PM
doob kar gam-e-saagar mein ashq bahaane se kya haasil ?
roshni ke shehron mein dil jalane se kya haasil ? chod kar apni jamin kaun jaye sehra* mein naukri karne apnon se jo kar de juda aise kamane se kya haasil ? true.. so true manoj bhai.... apnmon se door rehkar kaami ka kya faayda.... kaali kamaai karne wale siyaasatdaanon* se koi yeh keh de ujli safed poshakein pehan kar muskurane se kya haasil ? ishq ki jami par bane mehal mausam badle dheh jayenge tufaanon ki jadd mein gharonde banane se kya haasil ? well said... Manoj bhai, Kaise ho? hope acche hi honge.... Bahut accha likha hai bhai humesha ki tarah is baar bhi aapne... acch laga yeh padhkar... likhte rahiye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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bhut khub -
1st July 2006, 04:04 PM
manoj ji lajabaab bhut acha likha hai.....app ki kalam yu hee rawa rahay,jab tay shayri ka bakki nisha rahay........meri daad kabool karain.......kasam say mazza aa gaya...........appka dost raj.....
ishq ki jami par bane mehal mausam badle dheh jayenge tufaanon ki jadd mein gharonde banane se kya haasil ? yeh share bhut pyara hai....... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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1st July 2006, 08:07 PM
waah waah...bohat khoob
roshni ke shehron mein dil jalane se kya haasil ? bilkul sahi likha hai aapne,dil ko choo gaya pura kalaam... aik mutthi main kaid kar loon, yeh aasman hai jitna!" |
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2nd July 2006, 04:39 PM
bahut khoob manoj
AISA HI KOI KHWAB HAMARA BHI KOI THA |
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2nd July 2006, 07:41 PM
ishq ki jami par bane mehal mausam badle dheh jayenge
tufaanon ki jadd mein gharonde banane se kya haasil ? Namaskar Manoj ji Nice poetry with beautiful words......hamare daad kabul kijeyega... keep writing |
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4th July 2006, 03:55 PM
pulkit bhai
dil ki gehraiyon se shukrguzar hoon aapka ki aapne mujhe padha aur samjha....hauslaafzai ke liye shukriya. take care MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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Re: bhut khub |
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Re: bhut khub -
4th July 2006, 03:56 PM
RAJVEER SAHEB
tahe dil se shukrguzar hoon aapki izzatafzai ka..take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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4th July 2006, 03:57 PM
RUCHIKA JI
bahoot acha laga ki aapne mujhe padha aur saraha....hauslaafzai ke liye aabhari hoon aapka. -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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hi -
4th July 2006, 04:00 PM
manoj ji aap ka ye kalaam bahut hi pasand aaya,aise hi likhte rahiyega
take care manu |
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5th July 2006, 02:19 PM
hi
apka har kalam lajawab hota he maine apke kuch kalam hi padhe magar jo padhe usse apki qabiliyat ba khubi wazah hoti he padhkar lagta he doob kar gam-e-saagar mein ashq bahaane se kya haasil ? roshni ke shehron mein dil jalane se kya haasil ? bahut hi meaning ful sher he chod kar apni jamin kaun jaye sehra* mein naukri karne apnon se jo kar de juda aise kamane se kya haasil ? apni apni thinking he no comments (q ki jo door jate hain wo bhi apno ke roshan mustakbil ke liye hi jate hain) kaali kamaai karne wale siyaasatdaanon* se koi yeh keh de ujli safed poshakein pehan kar muskurane se kya haasil ? (kash apke ye alfaz kuch netaon ko samajha sakeN ameen) ishq ki jami par bane mehal mausam badle dheh jayenge tufaanon ki jadd mein gharonde banane se kya haasil ? really bahut pyara sher he lajawab........... thanx for writing wonderful ghazal take care bye Zindagi ko tumne mohbbat bana diya |
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5th July 2006, 02:50 PM
bahut door ki baat keh gaye aap bhaiya.bahut ahcha laga ek baar fir se aapko padh kar.aapne ek kalaam v likha hai aur kaafi kuch sandesh v diya jo kaafi kathin kaam hota hai.to umeed hai ki aap aage v yunhi mehfilrn sajate rahiyega.taki hum jaise nacheez kuch seekhte rahen.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Re: ashq bahaane se kya haasil ? -
5th July 2006, 03:22 PM
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bahut khoob likha hai appney, aur jo message appne diya hai, dua karti hu ki sab esko padey aur eski gahrai mai janey ki kosish karey. mubarakbaad kabool kijiye.  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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6th July 2006, 09:14 AM
manoj jee.......
mera salaam kuboolei.N......... aaj ek baat zeheN me aayi ki duniya me jitne bhi dard haiN wo sab aapke qalaamoN me jhalakte haiN...... duniyaa itni nahi dekhi....magar jitnaa aap dikhaate haiN usse pataa chalta hai ki dard ka naam hi duniya hai aur duniya ka doosra naam hi dard hai...... ye sher khaas pasand aaye...... chod kar apni jamin kaun jaye sehra* mein naukri karne apnon se jo kar de juda aise kamane se kya haasil ? ishq ki jami par bane mehal mausam badle dheh jayenge tufaanon ki jadd mein gharonde banane se kya haasil likhte rahiyega... dua go, KasaK...... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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6th July 2006, 03:09 PM
Pyare Manoj Bhai,
Its so nice 2 read u're work again. It always carries along a new freshness with u're trademark feelings of deep pain. Always goes straight 2 the heart and evokes so many emotions. Do keep blessing us with moreso. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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6th July 2006, 03:26 PM
chod kar apni jamin kaun jaye sehra* mein naukri karne
apnon se jo kar de juda aise kamane se kya haasil waah manoj ji,kya baat hai.bilkul sahi likha apne,maangaye aapko.bahut acha laga aapki yeh rachna padhkar.har sher sacchayi se bhar poor gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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8th July 2006, 05:32 PM
tabassum sahiba
aapki hauslaafzai ke liye tahe dil se shukrguzar hoon....take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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8th July 2006, 05:33 PM
SUKANYA JI
ek lambe arse baad aapki nazar ki dhoop meri gazal ki jamin par padi hai..bahoot khushi hui aapko yahan dekh kar..aapki hausalafzai ke liye tah-e-dil se shukrguzar hoon...take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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Re: hi -
8th July 2006, 05:34 PM
ACHARYA SAHEB
naacheez ki koshish ko pasand karne ke liye yeh banda tah-e-dil se aapka shukrguzar hai...take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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9th July 2006, 12:32 PM
Manoj bhaii,
Namaskaar, Kaisi haiN aap? aaj bohat dino ke baad aap ko paRhna naseeb huaa.. har sher dar Haqiiqat bayaaN kar raha ahai.. Ek jagah typo hai.. theek kar leejiyega...( Gham e saagar>>>>> Saagar e gham) yuuN to puuri kalaam he behtariin hai par is sher kee baat hee niraali hai.... Mujeh behad behad pasand aaya aap ka yeh kalaam.. Mere jaanib se daad ke saath mubaarak baad qabool kareN.. kaali kamaai karne wale siyaasatdaanon* se koi yeh keh de ujli safed poshakein pehan kar muskurane se kya haasil ? -Mayank |
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25th August 2006, 06:41 PM
rubina sahiba
aap ne is naacheez ke kalaam ki jamin par apne anmole alfaazon ke gauhar bikhere ,,,,iske liye mein aapka tah-e-dil se shukrguzar hoon....apna khayal rakhiye.. -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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25th August 2006, 06:42 PM
GHAYAL BHAI
aap beshaq ghayal hai..magar yeh banda aapka kaayal hai...!!! aapki izzatafzai ka dil ki gehraiyon se shukrguzar hoon....take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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Re: Re: ashq bahaane se kya haasil ? -
25th August 2006, 06:44 PM
SUNITA JI
NAMASHKAR AAPKI mubaaraqbaad ke liye shayad meri jholi bhi choti pad jayegi,..,..behad khushi hui ki aap ne meri koshish ko padha aur saraha...aapka tah-e-dil se shukrguzar hoon....apna akhayal rkahiye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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25th August 2006, 07:02 PM
KASAK JI
NAMASHKAR KAISI HAI AAP>>>> sahi kaha hai aapne.....dard ke kai roop hote hai....jaisa ki Sahir saheb ne kaha hai..... JINDAGI SIRF MOHABBAT NAHIN KUCH AUR BHI HAI JUL-O-RUKHSAAR KI JANNAT NAHIN KUCH AUR BHI HAI BHOOKH AUR DARD SE MAARI HUI IS DUNIA MEIN ISHQ HI SIRF EK HAQEEQAT NAHIN KUCH AUR BHI HAI bahoot kuch hui ki aap jaisi suljhi hui shayra ne mujhe padha aur apne jazbaaton ka izhaar kiya.....dil ki gehraiyon se apaka shukrguzar hoon....apna khayal rakhiye..... -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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25th August 2006, 07:04 PM
PRIYE SALIM BHAI
bahoot khushi hoti hai aapko is site par jab bhi dekhta hoon....aapka daad dene ka andaaz aur saaafgoi bahoot pasand aati hai mujhe...mein khushkismat samjhta hoon khud ko jab aapka jawab aata hai meri gazal par....mein dil ke har kone se aapka shukrguzar hoon....apna khayal rkahiye...khush rhaiye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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26th August 2006, 12:46 AM
Manoj ji,
Bht khoob likha hai aapne.Always keep it up. |
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aate raha kijiye....aapki tazza poetry ka intzaar hai. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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