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Love Kya yeh Pyaar ka izhaar tha??? - 7th October 2009, 11:38 PM


Kuch ranjisho.n ka ranj tha
Kuch apni chahato.n pe naaz tha
Har baar aaine ne mere mujhse
Puchha teri chahato.n ka raaz tha
Har zulm tera ha.ns ke saha
Sehma sa mai.n umm'eed ka talabgaar tha
Kuch ishq tera mere sar chad' bola
Kuch vaado.n pe tere aitbaar tha
Thukraata raha duniya ko mai.n
Har aarzoo ko meri sirf tera intzaar tha
Di hoti saza mujhe mere har jurm ki
Mai.n to kab se hi khatawaar tha
Muskurate hue tum chale gaye aise
Kya 'ik baar' ka mai.n aisa gunahgaar tha
Bulaya to bahut tujhe lekin tu na aayaa
Samjha mai.n Shayad yehi tere pyaar ka izhaar tha......


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Smile Very Nice Post..... - 19th October 2009, 04:55 PM

Vikram ji,

Yeh aapki ghazal mujhe dil ko chu gayi.....

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19th October 2009, 05:02 PM

Kuch ranjisho.n ka ranj tha
Kuch apni chahato.n pe naaz tha

Har baar aaine ne mere mujhse
Puchha teri chahato.n ka raaz tha

Har zulm tera ha.ns ke saha
Sehma sa mai.n umm'eed ka talabgaar tha

Kuch ishq tera mere sar chad' bola
Kuch vaado.n pe tere aitbaar tha

Thukraata raha duniya ko mai.n
Har aarzoo ko meri sirf tera intzaar tha

Di hoti saza mujhe mere har jurm ki
Mai.n to kab se hi khatawaar tha

Muskurate hue tum chale gaye aise
Kya 'ik baar' ka mai.n aisa gunahgaar tha

Bulaya to bahut tujhe lekin tu na aayaa
Samjha mai.n Shayad yehi tere pyaar ka izhaar tha

Vikram jIi...........

Bahut khoob, achchi lagi aapki nayi koshish aur sabi sher .., Orange highlighted sher bahut khoob lage.. Daad kabool kijiye..

Likhate rhaiye..
Khush rhaiye..
Khuda hafez.....


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Thanks Vibhuti ji.....
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Smile Thanks Vibhuti ji..... - 19th October 2009, 08:13 PM

Thanks Vibhuti aapko meri ek koshish pasand aayee...
Vaise bhi jahaa.n aap jaise, Khwahish ji, Zidd, Mayus saaheb, Ajay Nidaan ji aur Parinita jaise qadar daan hoN toh wahan likhne ka Maza hi Kuch aur hai........

Aap bhi apni ek aadh post daal hi deejiye KyoN hmsab logoN ko vanchit kar rakha hai......

Zaroor likhiye aur post kijiye

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Thumbs up Khwahish ji bahut bahut Shukriya......... - 19th October 2009, 08:54 PM

Khwahish ji,

Aapka bahut bahut Shukriya, apni tareeff se juda ek aur cheez mujhe samajh me aa gayee.

Jis tarha aapne mere shabdo'n ko ek khoobsurat dhancha diya hai, vo ek bahut behtar tariqa mana jaata hai kisi ko samjhane ka.

Jis manin'd aapne meri post ka jawaab mere betarteeb ash'aar'on ko saleeke se sajja kar diya.......
Samjhne ka bhi Maza aa gaya........


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19th October 2009, 09:24 PM

Vikram jee,
SDC parivaar meiN aapka Swagat hai
pahli bar aapki rachna se ru-ba-ru hui
bahot hi khubsoorat nazm kahi hai aapne
Dil ki baat bakhubi bayaan hui hai nazm meiN
ehesaas apnasa laga

Umiid hai aapki kalam se jald hi nayi nazm dekhne ko milegi
Youn hi kahte rahiye
khus rahiye

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Shukriya aapka!!!
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Smile Shukriya aapka!!! - 20th October 2009, 02:34 AM

Diya ji,

Aapka bahut bahut Shukriya, ek aap haiN jinhoNe mujhe iss mehfil me shareek hone ka mauka diya........

Aur ek maiN hu ke bina kisi rasam ya riwayat ko nibhaaye, bina Kuch bataaye aur sune be-baaki aur badtamizi se iss parivaar me ghus gaya......

Mera istkbaal karne ke liye MaiN Aapka tahe dil se shukrguzaar hu...

Agar aap kahiN bhi koi kami lage to yeh guzaarish hai ki ussi Waqt mujhe tok de....

MaiN to Yaha'N seekhne aur dost banaane aaya hu....

Umm'eed Karta hu ki ye silsila chalta rahega......

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Kuch ranjisho.n ka ranj tha
Kuch apni chahato.n pe naaz tha
Har baar aaine ne mere mujhse
Puchha teri chahato.n ka raaz tha

Har zulm tera ha.ns ke saha
Sehma sa mai.n umm'eed ka talabgaar tha

Kuch ishq tera mere sar chad' bola
Kuch vaado.n pe tere aitbaar tha

Thukraata raha duniya ko mai.n
Har aarzoo ko meri sirf tera intzaar tha

Di hoti saza mujhe mere har jurm ki
Mai.n to kab se hi khatawaar tha

Muskurate hue tum chale gaye aise
Kya 'ik baar' ka mai.n aisa gunahgaar tha

Bulaya to bahut tujhe lekin tu na aayaa
Samjha mai.n Shayad yehi tere pyaar ka izhaar tha......

Ye teeno sher bahut achy hai .

Kuch ishq tera mere sar chad' bola
Kuch vaado.n pe tere aitbaar tha

Thukraata raha duniya ko mai.n
Har aarzoo ko meri sirf tera intzaar tha

Di hoti saza mujhe mere har jurm ki
Mai.n to kab se hi khatawaar tha

baki ke bas aise hi ki do l;ine jod di ho
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acha likhte ho
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20th October 2009, 02:28 PM

Vikram Jii,,

Aik beautiful composition pesh karnay per
dil se daad qabool kijiye,,,,,,

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Take care,,


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Vikram jee ,
is pareevar meiN har koi apne marzi se hi samil hota hai
yeh mahfil hi aisa ki jo ek bar aagaya toh fir isika hoke rah jata hai
gustakhi to humse hui jee
aap itne din se pareevar mein ho magar humne swagat karne mein der kar diye
ab to chhoti moti bate bazi nok jhok chalta rahega
umiid hai aapki safar achhi rahegi

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Smile Bahut Shukriya aapka...... - 20th October 2009, 07:53 PM

[QUOTE=janumanu;370477]Ye teeno sher bahut achy hai .

Kuch ishq tera mere sar chad' bola
Kuch vaado.n pe tere aitbaar tha

Thukraata raha duniya ko mai.n
Har aarzoo ko meri sirf tera intzaar tha

Di hoti saza mujhe mere har jurm ki
Mai.n to kab se hi khatawaar tha

baki ke bas aise hi ki do l;ine jod di ho
akele misre(line) ka matlab doosri se alag sa laga

Janaab,

Aapko meri koshish ka hissa pasand aaya, main aapka tahe dil se shukrguzaar
Hu...

Baaki to aap ki sohbat me jald seekh jaunga...

Vikram Jethi





acha l


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Smile Thanks a ton...... - 20th October 2009, 08:06 PM

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Ye teeno sher bahut achy hai .

Kuch ishq tera mere sar chad' bola
Kuch vaado.n pe tere aitbaar tha

Thukraata raha duniya ko mai.n
Har aarzoo ko meri sirf tera intzaar tha

Di hoti saza mujhe mere har jurm ki
Mai.n to kab se hi khatawaar tha

baki ke bas aise hi ki do l;ine jod di ho
akele misre(line) ka matlab doosri se alag sa laga

acha likhte ho
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Janumanu ji,
Aap jaise shayar ko agar meri ek pankti bhi bha jaaye to main Khud ko Kuch naseeb samjhta hu....

Jo teen sher aapko achhe lage uske liye Shukriya baaki aap ki sohbat meiN Kabhi na Kabhi to seekh hi jaunga....

Aap aise hi dil se apni rae dete rahiye aur mujhe yakeeN hai ki mujh jaisa tedhi medhi line likhne wala bhi Kuch seekh jayega....

Thanks a lot...

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Aik beautiful composition pesh karnay per
dil se daad qabool kijiye,,,,,,

Rep +++,

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Rasheed saaheb,

Aapki hausla afzai ka tahe dil se Shukriya kabool kare.n...

Sach me aap jaise shayar se tareeff mili, soch kar achha lagta hai....

Reps ka bhi sukriya....

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Vikram jee ,
is pareevar meiN har koi apne marzi se hi samil hota hai
yeh mahfil hi aisa ki jo ek bar aagaya toh fir isika hoke rah jata hai
gustakhi to humse hui jee
aap itne din se pareevar mein ho magar humne swagat karne mein der kar diye
ab to chhoti moti bate bazi nok jhok chalta rahega
umiid hai aapki safar achhi rahegi

Diya

Diya ji,

Thanks a lot,
Aapne jis tarah se baat kar apna hone ka ehsaas krvaya hai uska Shukriya, dil se achha laga Aapka aNdaaz....

Bilkul theek kaha hai aapne, aage to kai aisi mulaqateN hoNgi aur hm aapas me kisi cheez par sehamat ya asehamat honge....

Maza toh issi baat meiN aata hai, jee to koi bhi jaata hai....

Shukriya......
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Kuch ranjisho.n ka ranj tha
Kuch apni chahato.n pe naaz tha

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Puchha teri chahato.n ka raaz tha

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Kuch vaado.n pe tere aitbaar tha

Thukraata raha duniya ko mai.n
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Mai.n to kab se hi khatawaar tha

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Kya 'ik baar' ka mai.n aisa gunahgaar tha

Bulaya to bahut tujhe lekin tu na aayaa
Samjha mai.n Shayad yehi tere pyaar ka izhaar tha......
Vikram ji...aapki yeh koshish mujhe achi lagi....kuch sher ke ehsaas mujhe bahut pasand aaye...aise hi likhte rahiye....aur bhi acha likhne lagoge....aapki soch aur subject ache hai...khush rahiye....

dil se daad...kabul kare..

duaaon ke saath...




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Vikram ji...aapki yeh koshish mujhe achi lagi....kuch sher ke ehsaas mujhe bahut pasand aaye...aise hi likhte rahiye....aur bhi acha likhne lagoge....aapki soch aur subject ache hai...khush rahiye....

dil se daad...kabul kare..

duaaon ke saath...

Naresh ji,
Aapka bahut bahut dhayavaad
Ke aapko meri yeh koshish kabile daad lagi...
Mujhe ab afsos bhi hota hai ki main Pehle sdc meiN KyoN nahi aaya. Aap sabhi ka pyaar aur hausla mujh meiN zaroor ek achha badlaav layega...

Pehle maine Kabhi kisi forum pe nahi likha issliye adab bhi Kuch kam hai mujhme lekin Pehle ki tarah ab main likh kar fadta nahi hu.....

Aap agar Aise hi mera hausla buland karte rahe toh zaroor ek na ek din main Kuch achha likh jaunga......

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Vikram Jethi


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