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5th June 2011, 12:19 PM
Kya hai ye jeet aur kya haar hai
In sab se pare mera pyar hai
Dil todna unke liye koi apraadh nahi
Pyar ka woh magar gunahgaar hai
Fitrat mein dhoka shamil hai uski
Par yaado me meri wafadaar hai
Hai uske bhi dil pe beawafaiee ka bojh
Toote iss dil ko mere yeh aitbaar hai
Koi pal to sukoo.N ka layegi zindagi
Us pal ka Pari ko ab intezaar hai
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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5th June 2011, 12:53 PM
Koi pal to sukoo.N ka layegi zindagi
Us pal ka Pari ko ab intezaar hai
Maqtaa bahut khoobsurat likha hai ... Praneeta Ji !
Saath hi ghazal ka matlaa bhi asardaar raha .... vaise aur ashaar ke khayaal bhi acche lage mujhe .... dil se daad qubuul kareN ... !
aise hi aati rahen aur likhti rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !
duaaoN ke saath ... !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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6th June 2011, 10:52 AM
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Originally Posted by Praneeta
Kya hai ye jeet aur kya haar hai
In sab se pare mera pyar hai
Dil todna unke liye koi apraadh nahi
Pyar ka woh magar gunahgaar hai
Fitrat mein dhoka shamil hai uski
Par yaado me meri wafadaar hai
Hai uske bhi dil pe beawafaiee ka bojh
Toote iss dil ko mere yeh aitbaar hai
Koi pal to sukoo.N ka layegi zindagi
Us pal ka Pari ko ab intezaar hai
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Ji nice creation..........
Kya hai ye jeet aur kya haar hai
In sab se pare mera pyar hai
Koi pal to sukoo.N ka layegi zindagi
Us pal ka Pari ko ab intezaar hai
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com
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6th June 2011, 10:54 AM
Good one Praneeta..................................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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27th August 2011, 05:30 PM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Koi pal to sukoo.N ka layegi zindagi
Us pal ka Pari ko ab intezaar hai
Maqtaa bahut khoobsurat likha hai ... Praneeta Ji !
Saath hi ghazal ka matlaa bhi asardaar raha .... vaise aur ashaar ke khayaal bhi acche lage mujhe .... dil se daad qubuul kareN ... !
aise hi aati rahen aur likhti rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !
duaaoN ke saath ... !
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aap ka bahot bahot shukriya Naresh ji
har baar aap likh ne ka hausla bada dete hai
thanks a lot sir ji
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_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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27th August 2011, 05:32 PM
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Originally Posted by Radhika_2
Ji nice creation..........
Kya hai ye jeet aur kya haar hai
In sab se pare mera pyar hai
Koi pal to sukoo.N ka layegi zindagi
Us pal ka Pari ko ab intezaar hai
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thanks Radhika ji
thanks for reading
Regards
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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27th August 2011, 05:34 PM
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Good one Praneeta..................................
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thanks a lot zainy...thanks for reading
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Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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27th August 2011, 05:36 PM
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Originally Posted by Praneeta
Kya hai ye jeet aur kya haar hai
In sab se pare mera pyar hai
Dil todna unke liye koi apraadh nahi
Pyar ka woh magar gunahgaar hai
Fitrat mein dhoka shamil hai uski
Par yaado me meri wafadaar hai
Hai uske bhi dil pe beawafaiee ka bojh
Toote iss dil ko mere yeh aitbaar hai
Koi pal to sukoo.N ka layegi zindagi
Us pal ka Pari ko ab intezaar hai
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wah praneet jee
saare hi ashar khoob rahe daad kubul karen
duaon ke saath
radhe radhe
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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28th August 2011, 06:37 AM
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wah praneet jee
saare hi ashar khoob rahe daad kubul karen
duaon ke saath
radhe radhe
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Ishk sahab
radhe radhe
shukriya padhne ke liye
daad dil se qabul hai sir ji
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Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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28th August 2011, 01:54 PM
Woh hata rahe hain Parda,
Sar-e-Aam Chupke Chupke,
Koi qatal ho raha hai,
Dar-e-baam Chupke Chupke,
Ye jhuki jhuki Nigahein,
Ye haseen haseen Ishare,
Kahein Le Na jayen Shayad,
Meri jaan Chupke Chupke,
Kabhi Shokhiyan dikhana kabhi Unka Muskurana.
Ye Adayen kar Na dalein Mera Kaam
Chupke Chupke,
Ye jo Hichkiyan Musalsal Mujhe Aa rahi hen yaro,
Koi Le raha hai Shayad, , , ,
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28th August 2011, 04:47 PM
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Originally Posted by Praneeta
Kya hai ye jeet aur kya haar hai
In sab se pare mera pyar hai
Dil todna unke liye koi apraadh nahi
Pyar ka woh magar gunahgaar hai
Fitrat mein dhoka shamil hai uski
Par yaado me meri wafadaar hai
Hai uske bhi dil pe beawafaiee ka bojh
Toote iss dil ko mere yeh aitbaar hai
Koi pal to sukoo.N ka layegi zindagi
Us pal ka Pari ko ab intezaar hai
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V V Good PRANEETA G! Ghazal bhaut asardaar rahee!
Thanks for sharing with us all!
On a diff note: itnay dino bad yaad aaya aapko jawab dena madame?? But better late than never. We let u off this time as aap Teacher G han hor BZ BZ rehdi han!But some people never reply ..ye snobbery nahi hai..especially when someone tuk time out to praise their work? And another thing......aap bhi kuch kije ye opar ki gayee mish mashing posting by mr D Kumar k baray mein!
Thanks G!
Honaa Hai Fenaah Yaad Rakh Aye Shams Tujhko Bhi,
Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee!
Ajnabi
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28th August 2011, 05:27 PM
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Originally Posted by dikumar2000
Woh hata rahe hain Parda,
Sar-e-Aam Chupke Chupke,
Koi qatal ho raha hai,
Dar-e-baam Chupke Chupke,
Ye jhuki jhuki Nigahein,
Ye haseen haseen Ishare,
Kahein Le Na jayen Shayad,
Meri jaan Chupke Chupke,
Kabhi Shokhiyan dikhana kabhi Unka Muskurana.
Ye Adayen kar Na dalein Mera Kaam
Chupke Chupke,
Ye jo Hichkiyan Musalsal Mujhe Aa rahi hen yaro,
Koi Le raha hai Shayad, , , ,
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bahot khub likha hai aap ne dikumar ji par ye galat thread par likha hai
you need to post this as your own thread
read about how to post
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Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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28th August 2011, 05:31 PM
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V V Good PRANEETA G! Ghazal bhaut asardaar rahee!
Thanks for sharing with us all!
On a diff note: itnay dino bad yaad aaya aapko jawab dena madame?? But better late than never. We let u off this time as aap Teacher G han hor BZ BZ rehdi han!But some people never reply ..ye snobbery nahi hai..especially when someone tuk time out to praise their work? And another thing......aap bhi kuch kije ye opar ki gayee mish mashing posting by mr D Kumar k baray mein!
Thanks G!
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ji haan AJNABI ji zara der ho gayi reply karte karte
par reply kiya toh zarur
shukriya aap ka ise padhne ke liye aur apni kimti waqt reply karne mein use karne ke liye.........thanks a lot
ji dikumar ji seekh jayenge dheere dheere ke kya kaha post karna hai...
Regards
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Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
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28th August 2011, 06:56 PM
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Originally Posted by Praneeta
Kya hai ye jeet aur kya haar hai
In sab se pare mera pyar hai
Dil todna unke liye koi apraadh nahi
Pyar ka woh magar gunahgaar hai
Fitrat mein dhoka shamil hai uski
Par yaado me meri wafadaar hai
Hai uske bhi dil pe beawafaiee ka bojh
Toote iss dil ko mere yeh aitbaar hai
Koi pal to sukoo.N ka layegi zindagi
Us pal ka Pari ko ab intezaar hai
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wah bahut khoob praneeta ji...aapki ye peshkash bahut khoob rahi....
daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega....
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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4th January 2012, 07:16 PM
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Originally Posted by vikramjethi
wah bahut khoob praneeta ji...aapki ye peshkash bahut khoob rahi....
daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega....
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shukriya Vikram ji
daad qabul hai sahab
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_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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