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Post bina dard ke pyar mein panaah nahi hota - 21st April 2003, 10:54 AM

Welcome you all here...

pyar ka har laFz pahchaana gaya,
pyar kerne vala apani baato se jana gaya,
pyar kerna gunaah nahi hota,
bina dard ke pyar mein panaah nahi hota,
jindagi ko samjhana ek vihangam hai,
dard aur pyar ka raha hamehsa ek sangam hai,
khushnasiib ve hain jinko ki pyar mein manjilein mil jaati,
vaise bahoot hain es duniya mein jinki aarjoo nahi khil paati.



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21st April 2003, 10:57 AM

waah akant saahab!
bahot hi behtareen tareeqe se aapne jazbaat beyaan kiye haiN..
paD kar dard jaag gaya hai dil meiN.. waaqaye bahot khoob hai

ummeed hai ki isi taraH aage bhi mehfil sajaate raheN ge!

taareef ke saath,
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23rd April 2003, 11:09 AM

Aman Bhai jee

Shayri pasand fermane ka shukriyaH aapko. kuchh samay na mil paane ke karan main reply nahi de pa raha tha. der se reply dene ke liye mujhe khed hai. phir bhi main adhik se adhik shayri padhane ki koshis kerta hoon.apane vicharo se aap protsahit kerte rahenge enhi ashaoN ke sath,


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23rd April 2003, 10:40 PM

Hello Akantji,
likhawat se aap to koi "patrakar" ya "hindi kavi" sound karte hai. Hindi bahot atchha likh lete hai. Waise aapne jis andaaj me Aman ko Bhai jee kaha hai to lag raha hai jaise kisi "dada" ko bula rahe hai.(hehe)
well, aapne jo likha hai wo to kabeele tareef hai hi magar muje jo lines sabse jiyada atchhi lagi wo ye hai

khushnasiib ve hain jinko ki pyar mein manjilein mil jaati,
vaise bahoot hain es duniya mein jinki aarjoo nahi khil paati.

its a truth...vastavikta hai.
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24th April 2003, 11:18 AM

Hello Sanam jee,

comment ke liye dhanyavaad aapko. vaise na main koi patrkaar hoon na hi main koi Hindi kavi. mere likhe hue shabd yadi aapko es tarah ke sound karate hain, to yah ek etfaak hi hai. ho sakta hai ki meri hindi achchhi ho. ab yah to sunne aur padhane vaale hi bata sakte hain.

aapne meri lines ko padha aur apane vichar prakat kiye.yah mera shaubhagy hai ki aapko line pasand aayi. asha kerta hoon ki aap aage bhi esi tarah haushala badhati rahengi.

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7th May 2003, 11:40 PM

pyar kerna gunaah nahi hota,
bina dard ke pyar mein panaah nahi hota,
jindagi ko samjhana ek vihangam hai,
dard aur pyar ka raha hamehsa ek sangam hai,


bohat achcha likha hai bandhu aapne...
aur aapne likha bhi bilkul sach hai...
aasha hai aap aise hi likhte rahenge...

badhaai aur shubkaamnayeiN....

likhte rahiye aur muskuraate rahiye...


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Hi - 8th May 2003, 11:11 AM

bedilmusafir ji,

aap ka naam nahi maloom esliye aapki id se hi aapko sambodhit ker raha hoon. sheyr padhane aur pasand fermane ka shukriyah. bandhu mera pryaas jaari hai. ummid hai ki aage bhi aap mera hausla badhate rahenge.

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8th May 2003, 11:40 AM

namste sirkar....

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thank you - 8th May 2003, 03:37 PM

mein_aur_tanhai jee

aapka naam nahi maloom hone se id se hi sambodhit ker raha hoon. aapko mere lafz pasand aaye. tahedil se shukriyaa.


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hi - 8th May 2003, 04:36 PM

pyar kay lafz apnie misaal hain.
pyar karnaay walay bemisaal hain

pyar karna kisnay kehaa hai gunaah hota hai
pyar karnaa wala ibaadat ka khudaa hota hai

zindagi koe samjanaa hai agar tum ko
tum bhee kisee say pyar kar ke dekho

duniya mein kush naseeb woe hai
jin ka pyar un kay kareeb hai

hope you like it .

akant gee i had given u ur answer

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hi - 8th May 2003, 04:57 PM

ek line kuchh es tarah se hai...nida jee...

humne dekhi hai un ankho ki mahakti khushbu,
hath se chhuker ese risto ka eljaam na do
sirf ehsaas hai ye ruh se mahsoos kero,
pyar ko pyar hi rahane do koi naam na do.


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hi - 8th May 2003, 05:08 PM

ek line kuchh es tarah se hai...akant jee...

humne dekhein hai badey pyar karna waley
joe bina chuwaay he khudaa hojateey hain
hai yeh ehsaas agar pyar hai tumko
to taod kar meray sapnoo ko door kiun chalay jatey hain.

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hi - 8th May 2003, 05:51 PM

hello nida,

dekha nahi tumane sachcha pyar kerne vaala
verna kabhi nahi totata tere biswas ka pyala..


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