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vikas bhai
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aapka interview bahut badhia chal raha hai maza aa raha hai padhne me tumhaara apne gaon se prem dekhkar bahut achha laga
ab prashan mere man me uthta hi nahi to kya poochhun lekin jo sab poochh rahen hain padhkar uska ras le raha hoon

RAJINDER JI.... zaruri nahi hai ke aap yahaan sawaal hi kare, bas guftagu ka hissa bhi ban sakte hain....

Is thread ka naam isiliye tou "interview" se badalker "guftagu" rakha gaya hai.....jo bhi aapke mann me ho baat kijiye ...

Yeh thread kisi bhi member ko behtar tarah se jaane aur samajhne ka ek zariya hai bas....

No need to be very formal.....




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ye to keo baat nahi huee...............

tum bhi kaagzi sher nikli

Yeh accha hai..ek tou saamne cockroach rakh diya hai aapne, us per keh rahe ho ke meter me sher likho...

Mujhse nahi hoga....

Woh ek dialogue hai na"thappad se dar nahi lagta sahab pyar se darr lagta hai"...

usi tarah mujhe bhi sher se darr nahi lagta cockroaches se dar lagta hai....





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Ok meri taraf se ek sawaal......

Khoon ka rishta bada hota hai ya dosti ka
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dosti aur khoon ke riste mai fark hota hai...........dosti ka rishtaa tab tak jab tak nibhate hai......... aur binaa swarth ke bhi nibhtaa hai.... ye man'ne pe hai. maano to sab hai, na mano to kuch nahi.........


lekin khoon ka ristaa........ na nibhane pe bhi rahtaa hai. usko jhutlaya nahi ja saktaa......... woh kaise na kaise ......... samne aa hi jata hai, haan aksar ye ek ke.. mar jane ke bad hi samne aata dekha hai.........
jo aksar do bhayioN mai dekha hai maine, shaahro mai aisa kam hota hai, gaoN mai ye aksar hota hai, do bhayioN mai man-mutaab itnaa badh jata hai... ki woh umr bhar bat nahi karte, jhadgte bhi hai, par jab koe bhayee guzar jata hai, to use bilakh bilakh ke rote dekha hai maine.. aur ye bahut baar dekhaa hai.........

ek kahani papa ne sunayee thi............. uski kuch line hai... wo share kar raha hun

maa dard .. ( maa kabhi bedard nahi hoti.......... beta kitna bhi dard de use)
pita bedard ( pitaa ..... kathor ho jata hai............. )

bhayee saath ka ( bhayee wahi jo saath deta ho.............)
paisa gaanth ka ( paisa utna hi rumhara haui jo tumhare palle hai)

joru (wife) zor ki
nahi to kisi aur ki ( .. u need to fulfill every need of ur wife .. contentiously)

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Yeh accha hai..ek tou saamne cockroach rakh diya hai aapne, us per keh rahe ho ke meter me sher likho...

Mujhse nahi hoga....

Woh ek dialogue hai na"thappad se dar nahi lagta sahab pyar se darr lagta hai"...

usi tarah mujhe bhi sher se darr nahi lagta cockroaches se dar lagta hai....

isliye to.. meter mai sher maaro.......cockroaches pe
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vikash bhai guftugu ka hissa bante hue pahle to yahi jaanna chahunga ki naye mehmaan ka naam kya rakha hai aur aarti kaisi hai meri taraf se dono ko ashirwaad aur shubhkaamnaayen


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vikash bhai guftugu ka hissa bante hue pahle to yahi jaanna chahunga ki naye mehmaan ka naam kya rakha hai aur aarti kaisi hai meri taraf se dono ko ashirwaad aur shubhkaamnaayen
uskaa naam, actualy maine aapse salah lene ke liye call kiya tha apko do baar, ek baar apne pic nahi kiyaa ek baar baat hote hi, shayed mujhe kisi ne bulaa liaya aur aapse baat kiye binaa phone rakhna padaa....

fir kuch yun hua ki... baat na ho payee... waise uska naam Sahaj .. rakha hai.... pyaar se use hum soofi kahte haiN
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aapke ashirwaad, aur subhkaamnaoN ke liyee aapka abhaari hun..........
hum teeno hi
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SAHAJ naam bahut sundar hai pasand aaya tum uski date of birth aur time likh kar dena mai astrologicy se chek bhi kar loonga ek baar agar tum chaho to


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20 april...... 2:15 min........ day time ........
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wow............Vikas jii ka interview...gud.

Vikas jii..........ham bahut late ho gye aapka welcome karne meiN...

koe nahi, der ayad durust aayad......
par aapne abhi bhi welcome nahi kiyaa ...

aaj bahut dino baad sdc login kiya to dekha aapka interview chal rha hai...bahut accha laga, abhi just 2-3 post hi padi hain, aaj baith kar poori guftagu padti hoon..lag rha hai kaafi sawaal jawaab ho rhe hain...3 page complete hone ko hai aaj yehi kaam karungi padne ka...baaki baate phir....!

ji zaroor ........... jaisa aapko acha acha lage

ghar mein aarti aut aapka chutku kaise hain ??

dono hast-pust tandrust hai. duaayeN hai apno ki.......


Vikas ji, dekho zara gaur se hamne title hi "Warm Welcome" diya hai.....aapki interview padkar bahut accha laga, kal hamne 2 page apd liye thy....baaki ka ab chal rha hai...!


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Vikas ji, dekho zara gaur se hamne title hi "Warm Welcome" diya hai.....aapki interview padkar bahut accha laga, kal hamne 2 page apd liye thy....baaki ka ab chal rha hai...!

oho, wo kya hai na .......... ki aajtak title padha hi nahi post ka yto dhyaan nahi gaya, waise apne hi gahr mai welcome ki zaroort nahi hoti hai....... par ... koe bat nahi karta hai to buraa sa to lagta hai

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Vikash Bhai...

Aap ko iss thread main Khush Aamdeed.Aap ne boaht achchha andaaz main apna taaruf karaaya hai.. aap se mazeed baate.n hogii...

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Vikash Bhai...

Aap ko iss thread main Khush Aamdeed.Aap ne boaht achchha andaaz main apna taaruf karaaya hai.. aap se mazeed baate.n hogii...

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ji zaroor janaab ... par .. der na ho jaye kahiN der na ho jaye

Vikash Bhai...

aap ne sahii farmaaya kahii.n der na ho jaaye, jaisa ki aksar mere saath hota hai... chaliye, is se pahle der ho jaaye, is se pahle ki aap ke guftaguu ki miyaad puuri ho jaaye, aap se kuchhh baate.n kar lii jaaye...

pahle sawaal hai ki:

aap ki ID 'Janumanu' , yeh id aap ne kyun banaayi, koiii khaas lagaav ya koii khaas wazah ya history ho is naam ka to bataaiyegaa....

aur duusra sawaal, mujeh lagta hai ki aap ek natural Poet hain, kyaa aap ko bhi aisa lagta hai.. agar aap ko aisa lagta hai to, main jaan,na chaahunga ki aap ko aisa kyun lagta hai....

tisra sawal:- aap ko jo log aap ko napasand hai, aap un ke satah kis tarah pesh aate hai.n... aur aap ko jab sab se zyaadah gussa aata hai to kya karte hain....

mere kahyaal main sawaal itne zyaadah ahem nahii.n, par jaise bhi hai.n haazir hai..

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[QUOTE=Mayank;426338]Vikash Bhai...

aap ne sahii farmaaya kahii.n der na ho jaaye, jaisa ki aksar mere saath hota hai... chaliye, is se pahle der ho jaaye, is se pahle ki aap ke guftaguu ki miyaad puuri ho jaaye, aap se kuchhh baate.n kar lii jaaye...

ji zaroor, meri kismat


pahle sawaal hai ki:

aap ki ID 'Janumanu' , yeh id aap ne kyun banaayi, koiii khaas lagaav ya koii khaas wazah ya history ho is naam ka to bataaiyegaa....

are bhaye.e . kuch jydaa khaas baat nahi hai........ bas aisa naam chahiye tha ...... jisko poora karne ke liye koe caste sir name majhab wagairaa sath na lagana pade..... bas kuch yun hi.. waise iska jabaab pahle de chukaa hun detail maiN

aur duusra sawaal, mujeh lagta hai ki aap ek natural Poet hain, kyaa aap ko bhi aisa lagta hai.. agar aap ko aisa lagta hai to, main jaan,na chaahunga ki aap ko aisa kyun lagta hai....

pahle lagtaa tha bhayee. ab nahi lagtaa. ab lagta hi nahi poet hun........ par aisa lagtaa haipahle sa fir ho jaungaa............. isi umeed mai aap sabke beech rahtaa hun ........

aur pahle isliye lagtaa tha, ki mere aas pas kahin bhi shayri naam ki koe ceez nahi thi, even is cheez ka majaak banaya jata hai humme, ye ek tarah se chichore ladko ka kaam hai..
aas-pas ke dost majaak banate thye bahut mera par ab dheere dheere....... woh meri thodi si kadr karne lage haiN

kabhi kisi se radeef kafiyee kya hia.. gahzal kaise kahte hai kuch bhi nahi seekha na poochaa..... ghazlen suntaa tha. fir sochtaa tha hota kya hia isne... kaise misre .. judte hai gerah ... kya hai... kis tarah ki soch honi chahiye....... ye sab khud hi samjhaa...... jo kuch aayaa andar se hi aayaa................ bahut si baateN jo ustaad log ya tazrube wale bande batate hai, unkaa ahsaas khud hi ho jata tha. bahut se lafz urdu ke jinke meaning kisi se pooche nahi kahiN padhy nahi, unke maanhi khud hi feel ho jate they... aur 99% sahi feel hote they ..... aur maine jo sabse pahli gahzal kavitaa bhi likhi hogi.......... usme bhi koshish ki ki acha gahraa aur khulaa sochuN......... ladki.baaji wali shayri nahi ki........... jaisaki 10th11 wale bachy karte haiN, us time se hi bada sochne ki koshish ki........... bas yeh sab lagtaa hai ki nature se aaya hai..........

ek sher yaad aayaa jane iska hai, sahi se to yaad nahi par kuch aise tha


har ik galat mod pe tokti hai mujhe
jab se teri awaaz saath huee hai . ..........iasa kuch

tisra sawal:- aap ko jo log aap ko napasand hai, aap un ke satah kis tarah pesh aate hai.n... aur aap ko jab sab se zyaadah gussa aata hai to kya karte hain....

jo pasand na ho usse mai alag ho jaata hun.......... maiN rai bahut kam banata hun.........
mujhe lagtaa hai life mai kuch bhi galat nahi hai, na hi poori tarah kuch bhi sahi.......
aur sahi galat ke parameter banane wale hum koe haiN bhi nahi........... isliye jo pasand hai, use apna alete haiN, jo nahi pasand. usse alag ho jate hain...........

bhayee jab gussa aata hai.............. fir to gussa hi jane woh kya karega ..... mujhe waise jyda gussa tab aata hai, jab koe kaam hum kar sakte hai, lekin fir bhi nahi karte................ mai gussa waise kam hi kartaa hun, agar net ki dunia se alag ho jaauN, to aadha gussa aur khatm ho jayega ............ mujeh gussa bahut thode time ke liye aataa hai, bas aata hai aur jaata hai.......... tab jo hotaa hai bas ho jata hai
mai man main koshish kartaa hun, kisi ke liye gussa na rakhuN....... kisi ke liye buraa na rakhuN......... haan buraa bol,deta hun.. shaye dkabhi kabhi kar bhi deta hun........ par man mai chupaa ke nahi rakhtaa.... kamskam khud ko to nahi pareshaan karna chahiye na


mere kahyaal main sawaal itne zyaadah ahem nahii.n, par jaise bhi hai.n haazir hai..

apke aur sawalo ka intzaar rahega............ zara tabiyat theek nahi hai... barnaa aur sahi se khul ke jabaab deta ...........

ab jaise bhi aayaa kah diyaa
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Vikas bhai,

god bless u and your family

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Vikas jii,


Namastee,


aapka sawgaat hai interview ke section main ... aapke baare main aur bhi jaanne ko milega ...

koshish karugii jald se jald aasaku aur kuch sawal pooch saku .....

aapna khayal rakhe


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Namaste Vikas ji

Kaise hain aap?
Khushi hui aap ko interview thread mein dekh kar...mera jo sawaal aap se hai vo ye hai ki....

fars karo aap jise dil-o-jaan se chahe, apni hasti tak mita de uske liye aur wo hi shaqs aap ko dhoka de kar, aap ka fayda utha kar chalta bane, toh aap kya karenge??..please koi diplomatic answer mat dena jo bhi pahela khayal aaye likh de

thanks n regards


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Vikas jii,


Namastee,


aapka sawgaat hai interview ke section main ... aapke baare main aur bhi jaanne ko milega ...

koshish karugii jald se jald aasaku aur kuch sawal pooch saku .....

aapna khayal rakhe


best wishes


duaon ke saath

mandeep
Thanks Mann for coming ............. acha laga yaha dekh kar , bahut dino se SDC pe bahut se dost nahi aayeN haiN, umeed hai sab ayenge , mere interview ke bahane hi sahi .............

fir se intzaar hai......

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Vikas bhai,

god bless u and your family

aapka fan,
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are mismil bhayeee.......... ye kyaa baat huee........... ek jhalak dikhaa ke gayab......... acha lagta jo kuch der to yahi rahte.........
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Namaste Vikas ji

Kaise hain aap?
Khushi hui aap ko interview thread mein dekh kar...mera jo sawaal aap se hai vo ye hai ki....

fars karo aap jise dil-o-jaan se chahe, apni hasti tak mita de uske liye aur wo hi shaqs aap ko dhoka de kar, aap ka fayda utha kar chalta bane, toh aap kya karenge??..please koi diplomatic answer mat dena jo bhi pahela khayal aaye likh de

thanks n regards
fir se naya koe dhoond lenge .. aur kyaa......... pyaar ka marham pyaar hi hota hai, aur kuch nahi.... dukh to hota hi hai, lekin aapne khud hi kah diyaa hai ki, woh aapko dhokhaa de ke chala jaye... jab ye baat clear ho hi gayee ho khud ko to, fir kya uske liye rona........

koe diplomatic answer nahi hai........fir se kar lo........

pyaar mle itna hi bahut hai
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aadab vikas sahab ,,,

apko yahan dekh kar khushi howi , suncha ke mai bhi khuch sawal puch hi lon ,, waqt ki tangi kaho yaa meri qata ke bahoth dino se yahan aa na saka ,, umid hai ap khayal nahi karenge ... sawal inshallah aaj raat post kar donga ...allah apko khush rakhe .....dost ahebab me salam o dua darja ba darja kahe den ..


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aadab vikas sahab ,,,

apko yahan dekh kar khushi howi , suncha ke mai bhi khuch sawal puch hi lon ,, waqt ki tangi kaho yaa meri qata ke bahoth dino se yahan aa na saka ,, umid hai ap khayal nahi karenge ... sawal inshallah aaj raat post kar donga ...allah apko khush rakhe .....dost ahebab me salam o dua darja ba darja kahe den ..


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Meri taraf se kuch aur sawaal


1)Do you think that you are strong?


2)What is your least favorite thing in the world?


3)Who do you miss most right now?


4)Have you ever been on radio or television?


5)Are you a dare devil?


6)Have you ever told a secret you swore you wouldn't?


7)Have you ever misused a word and it sounded
absolutely stupid?


8)Do you think there is a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow?


9)How do you release anger?


10)What was your favorite toy as a child?





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Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...

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Ji namaste, Sorry Dost Ji ... itane din gaayab rahe uske liye ... par aap ka interview to hum padh hi rahe the ... thodi tabiyat gadbad lag rahi thi .. fir mood bhi bahot ganda thaa .. aese mai kya likhate samajh nahi aa raha tha .. isliye nahi reply kiyaa .. hume maaf kar dijiye please ...

kyon ki aur bhi dhair saare sawaal hai abhi.. aur sawaalon ke hisaab se din bade hi kam baaki hai .. Aap se bahot kuchh jaan naa abhi baaki hai ... to chaliye ek baar fir aap ke is Guftgu ke sil-sile ko iske sahi direction mai le jaane ki try karte hai .. ... to ek baar fir aap ka toofaan waapas aa gaya hai dhair saare sawaalo ke saath ... i hope aap abhi bhi kamar kas ke taiyaar hi honge jawaab dene ke liye ...

1. Aap ki nazar mai achchhe dost ki definition kya hai??

2. Maa … is ek shabd ke ehsaas aap ki zubaani ??

3. Jab kabhi aap bahot helpless feel karte hai to aap kya karte hai ... us samay aap khud ko kaise sambhaalte hai ??

4. Day to day life se related aap ke weakest and strongest points ???

5. Kareeb year and half ago ... jabhi hospital mai the humaare Doctor ne hume dilaasa dete huye jaane kya baat kahi thi .. aur kahaa tha ke insaan bhagwaan ji ka banaaya sab se powerful Jeev hai ... aur hum unse puchh bethe the ke ..
a. jab duniyaa mai bhagwaan ji ne itane saare aur Jeev banaaye the fir sab se jyaada power insaan ko hi kyon diya ...any special reason behind it ??

b. aur Insaan kis lihaaz se sab se powerful creature maana jaata hai kyon ki wo jab chaahe jaise chaahe khud ko Bhagwaan samajh kar is duniyaa mai daheshat failaa sakta hai ...Khud ko sab se upar samajh kar kabhi kuchh banaane aur kabhi kuchh bigaad ne ke liye kisi bhi had tak geer sakta hai ...khud apne se jyaada aur apne aage dusaro ko kuchh samajhtaa hi nahi … dharam aur mazhabo ke naam par is zameen ko jahhannum se battar banaate usko ek pal bhi nahi lagta … kya isliye ?? ...

c. Aur Bhagwaan Ji ne insaan kyon banaaye honge ... aap ka khayaal ???
6. Kayi baar sun ne mai aata hai ke insaan apni taqdeer khud likhataa hai .. kitane hi movies mai bhi dahoraayi gayi hai ye baat ... aur kahi kahi real life mai bhi kabhi kisi se koi mistake ho jaaye aur baad mai uske saath sab gadbad ho jaaye to uske aas paas ke log kahete hai ke ... aap ne apni taqdeer khud hi likhi hai so ab jo huaa so bhogatiyee .....
a. to kya sach mai insaan apni taqdeer khud likhataa hai ??? ...

b. gar haan to kya koi jaan bujh kar hi apne hisse Kaante, dukh, dard, aur taqleefe likh degaa ... ??

c. aur gar nahi to ... fir baar baar ye baat zamaane mai dahoraayi kyon jaati hai ??
7. Taqdeer, naseeb, Keesmat, muqddar … in shabdo ke maayne ek hi hai ya judaa judaa … ?? aur in chaar shabdo ke kya maayne hai aap ki nazarr yaa aap ki zindagi mai … ??

Abhi ke liye in sawaalon ke hi jawaab dijiye .. baaki sawaal to aur bhi hai … fir haazir ho jaayenge unke saath … heheheheheh

Tab tak ke liye …. Humaari chhoottiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii … ..apna khayaal rakhiyegaa .. keep smiling always ...

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

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[QUOTE=zainy;426477]Meri taraf se kuch aur sawaal

ji farmaiye.........

1)Do you think that you are strong?

yes.......... i am ......!!

2)What is your least favorite thing in the world?

religion

3)Who do you miss most right now?


my self........

4)Have you ever been on radio or television?

humesha hi ............. hota huN jab tv band hota hai..

5)Are you a dare devil?

sometime ........... !!
mujhpe mahol bahut asar karta hai,

6)Have you ever told a secret you swore you wouldn't?

shayed ek do baar............. kab ye nahi pata par aisa ik gilaa sa dil meiN zaroor hai

7)Have you ever misused a word and it sounded
absolutely stupid?

yes, many time in front of my wife

8)Do you think there is a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow?

yes, umeed bhari har baat achi hoti hai

9)How do you release anger?

ye to ager hi jane wh kaise release hota hai



10)What was your favorite toy as a child?


hmmm ........ i have played with whole nature in my childhood.........

grass ... tree, flower.....river............ maine apnaa bachpan ek kamre ya chaardiwari mai nahi bitaya ki mujhe khilono ki zaroorat padti ............

pahli woh cheez jiske liye maine zidd ki thi woh.. ketli thi .. (haha.... koe yaad aa gaya")

mere nana ji hukka peety thye, mau bahut chota tha unke pas gaya tha to unko hukka peety dekhaa tha.... bas jab ghar loutaa to usi ki zidd karne laga .... fir dadi ne mujhe ketli de di........... ek badi si peetal ki ketli thi..... jiska munh mor ki gardan sa tha , mai us ehukka bana ke peeta rahtaa tha.....

doosri zidd.. ghar mai chawal, dhaan .... ko katwane ke liye machine wale unko lene aatey the(chawal, dhaan) aur unko apne safed ghode(horse) pe rakh ke le jaate fir dhaan se jo chawal bante use ghar chhod jate tehy....
mujhe woh safed ghoda bahut pasand tha.......... mai ma sse poochtaa tha, ye kaun haiN... jo ghoda le ke aate haiN..... unke samne hi pooch liyaa tha..... ma ko unkaa naam nahi pata tha, aur gaOn mai tab.. naam se jydaa caste se pahchana jata tha, so maa se kuch kahte nahi bana ...... wo chale bhi gaye main yahi poochta raha, unko ko yaad karta rahtaa hai kab wo ghoda leke ayenge, fir jab wo aate . mai unke sath chala jata, sara din unhi ke paas rahtaa...........
aur ma ne unko bhayee bana liyaa.........
ab unke pas jata to hun, par unka woh ghoda nahi hai, aaj bhi sadak kinaree us bade se pipal ko dekhtaa hun.......... to uski bahut yaad aati hai........ woh sabse puraani cheez hai jo mujhe aaj bhi utni hi saaf yaad hai.......... woh ghodaa, ek dam gora.......... aur bahut jyda sa sundar.........



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[QUOTE=loveforgudia;426480]Ji namaste, Sorry Dost Ji ... itane din gaayab rahe uske liye ... par aap ka interview to hum padh hi rahe the ... thodi tabiyat gadbad lag rahi thi .. fir mood bhi bahot ganda thaa .. aese mai kya likhate samajh nahi aa raha tha .. isliye nahi reply kiyaa .. hume maaf kar dijiye please ...

hmm, koe nahi , pahle tabiyat ko dekhoo, baaki kaam baad mai ho jate hain

kyon ki aur bhi dhair saare sawaal hai abhi.. aur sawaalon ke hisaab se din bade hi kam baaki hai .. Aap se bahot kuchh jaan naa abhi baaki hai ... to chaliye ek baar fir aap ke is Guftgu ke sil-sile ko iske sahi direction mai le jaane ki try karte hai .. ... to ek baar fir aap ka toofaan waapas aa gaya hai dhair saare sawaalo ke saath ... i hope aap abhi bhi kamar kas ke taiyaar hi honge jawaab dene ke liye ...

ji ji, go ahead ..................

1. Aap ki nazar mai achchhe dost ki definition kya hai??

jo apne se pahle dost ke bare maiN sochy......... woh acha dost hai, lekin koe atumhara asia dost hai to........... usse bhi aise hi behave karo.......
barna bechara tumhari sochega, tum apni sochoge.......... fir uska kya rah jayega ...........!!

dosti ka yahi takaja hai
jo nibhayee to kam huee samjho



2. Maa … is ek shabd ke ehsaas aap ki zubaani ??

ik alwa ma ke, aur kuch bhi nahi ma ki tarah
rooh mai jyuN hai khuda aur zism mai jaaN ki tarah

maa ke kisse aur haiN, maa ki kahani aur hai
tumne suni jo aur thi, maine sunaani aur hai
ik haqqqkat hai zameeni, asmaani aur hai
ba-qalam ye thi alag aur muNh-zubaani aur hai

bas abhi itni hi hue nazm, pooraa karungaa fir


aur bas yahi ki ........... maine kabhi maa ki baat nahi taali, palat ke jabaab nahi diyaa ......... jo kaha unhone maine maan liyaa

ab agar aisa maiN ya koe aur unka dil dukhaye ............ yun lagtaa hai
mere andar tezaab sa doud raha ho.............
mujhse maa ka rona -udaas hona nahi dekha jata .............
maiN woh lamhaa hi zindgi se mitaa dena chahtaa hun...............mujeh meri zindgi mai ek bhi pal aisa nahi chahiye, jisme ma ke chehre ke ta'asur aise ho........ jinse dil ke dukhne ka ahsaas ho

3. Jab kabhi aap bahot helpless feel karte hai to aap kya karte hai ... us samay aap khud ko kaise sambhaalte hai ??

pahle aainaa dekhaa kartaa tha............. khud se baat karta tah gussa kartaa tha............. ab .......... kuch bhi nahi kartaa.......... jo hota hai homne deta hun..

aaina ghar lage mujhe dunia
hum tamasha hum hi tamashayee bhi



baaki baad maiN

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Accha Vikas Ji Hume Bataaiye .........

1. SDC Par Aapke Dwaaraa Post Ki Gaii Kis Ghazal Ko Likhte Hue Aur Puraa Kate Hue Kin Kin Mushkilaat Se Do Chaar Honaa PaDhaa ...? Agar Aisaa Huaa Hai Toh Vistaar Se BataayeN ....... !

Saath Hi Yeh Bhi Bataaye .............

2. Sabse Jyada Kis Ghazal Ko Likhkar Mann Praphuuliit Huaa ?




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
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dear janumanuji,

maine apka sawaal jawab pada.
sabka kehna hay ki aap badiya shayar hein.
aap kripyaa ye bataiye ki omda shayri kise kahte hein?
maine bahuto ki shayri padi kyuki mera ek dost shayar hay,mujhe usise interest aaya.magar dekhti hu ki bade bade shayar ke sher bhi aam sher ki tarah lagte hai,phir mai kyu nahi likh sakti?
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4. Day to day life se related aap ke weakest and strongest points ???

hmm samjh hi nahi aataa, sab kuch ek sa lagtaa hai, jo weakest point hai, kabhi strongest ban jata hai........

ziNdgi ek si nahi sabko
jyun samjh aye tum wahi samjho

5. Kareeb year and half ago ... jabhi hospital mai the humaare Doctor ne hume dilaasa dete huye jaane kya baat kahi thi .. aur kahaa tha ke insaan bhagwaan ji ka banaaya sab se powerful Jeev hai ... aur hum unse puchh bethe the ke ..
a. jab duniyaa mai bhagwaan ji ne itane saare aur Jeev banaaye the fir sab se jyaada power insaan ko hi kyon diya ...any special reason behind it ??

aisa kuch nahi hai, ki insaan ke pas sabse jyda power hai.......... haan woh selffish bahut jydaa hai isliye uske pas jo hai, uska use karta hai apne liye ......... janwaar bhi hum jaise hi hote hai. woh woh sirf woh karte hai, jo unki zaroorat hota hai, unki hasrat nahi ........

sher agar bhookhaa na ho to , wo kisi ki jaan nahi leta, agar usko apni jana ka khatraa na ho to........ insaan ko agar kisi ko marna hai to binaa reason bhi mar deta hai....

mujhe insaan sabse kamzor lagta ahai is duniaa maiN.... sabse powerfull wo ho hai jo apni insriyon ko apne bas mai kar le..... aur aisa koe bhi insaan nahi hai. apne liye avioshkara kar lena koe badi bata nahi, agar survive hone ke liye sher ko tairne ki zaroorat padi kabhi to woh ye bhi kar lega ........... batao kya tumko aisa insaan milaa hai jisne apni indriyon(sense) ko apne vash mai kyaa hai
आँख(sight), नाक(smell), कान (hearing) ज़बान (taste), त्वचा (touch).....

kya koe jo dekhna na chahiye use dekhne se rok sakta hai khud ko....... kya koe jo woh smell na karna chahe usse bach saktaa hai, kya koe jo use khana na ho use ignore kar saktaa hai......... agar inme se ek bhi nahi kar saktaa hai to woh strong nahi hai........ bahut bolte hai sare ki hum strong hai,,,,,,,,,, woh bata deN..... kisi doosre ki kahi galat baat se kya woh hurt nahi hote.... hote hai to woh strong nahi hai, kisi ko hurt karnaa,,,, doosre pe rule karnaa strongness nahi hai.,........ aur insana yahi kartaa hai. woh sirf doosre pe apni kamiyaan thoptaa hai.......... isliye mai use sabse kamzor maanta hun........... are khana khana, pet paanlaa,,,, ghar bana ye sab janwar bhi karte haiN, wo humari tarah aalsi ya kamzor nahi ki unko bus, car// plane ki zaroorat ho....... nahi to woh bhi kuch na kuch jugaa dkar lenge ......... kabhi itna mushkil ye sb insaan ke liye bhi tha.....

balki mujhe lagtaa hai.. ki insaan ko janwaaroN se bahut kuch seekhna chahiye........

1.. hardwork.............. janwar kabhi kaam na karne ka bahana nahi maarta, kabhi alas nahi kartaa... kabhi kaam mai pasand na pasand nahi dhoondta ,,,,,,,,,

2 self control............ shayed tumne dekha na ho, maien dekha hai, jab ek bail(bulll) ke saath gaye(cow) ghaas( grass) kha rahi hoti hai... aur COW agar bull se door chali jaye to, bull kabhi bhi uske peechy nahi jata ......... woh apni masti mai rahtaa hai.........

3.. honesty.... i dont think so i need to say anything abt it......... ek dog rishwat leke kabhi apne malik ko daga nahi deta ..............

kuch line sunata hun, "baba bulle shah ki haiN" shayed tumko samjh aye...
bulleshah apna comparision god ke sath karte hai...

khud ko kahte haiN...

bulleya raati jaage , dine peer sidawe
rati nu jagan kute, tu ki ute

( bulle shah kahte hai, ki bullyaa to raat bhaar jaagtaa hai aur din mai khud ko peer(soofi saint) boltaa hai
raat ko to kutte bhi jaagte haiN, par woh to din mai bhi kutte hi rahte haiN, woh khud ko bada nahi kahte)


khasam apne da , yaar apne da
dar nahi shad de
bhavein so so maran jutte, te ki utte

( khasam, husband ya owner apne kaa saath nahi chhodte haiN, chahe wo so joote bhi use mare)

chal bulleya uth yaar mana le
nahi ta bazzi le gaye kutte

( chal bulleshah, uth ke apna yaar( god, friend, lover) mana le. nahi to baazi kutte le gaye, matlab woh tujhse betar ho gaye)

4. unse hume nirbhayee,...... nidar honaa seekhna chahiye ......... woh andhere se nahi darte , akelepan se nahi darte ...


b. aur Insaan kis lihaaz se sab se powerful creature maana jaata hai kyon ki wo jab chaahe jaise chaahe khud ko Bhagwaan samajh kar is duniyaa mai daheshat failaa sakta hai ...Khud ko sab se upar samajh kar kabhi kuchh banaane aur kabhi kuchh bigaad ne ke liye kisi bhi had tak geer sakta hai ...khud apne se jyaada aur apne aage dusaro ko kuchh samajhtaa hi nahi … dharam aur mazhabo ke naam par is zameen ko jahhannum se battar banaate usko ek pal bhi nahi lagta … kya isliye ?? ...

insaan ko bhagwan ne sari sense ek sath di haiN......... use zaroorateN paida karne wala ur pooraa karne wala banaya hai.......... lekin hota ultaa hi hai, jo tumne oopar kaha hai


c. Aur Bhagwaan Ji ne insaan kyon banaaye honge ... aap ka khayaal ???
shayed taaki uski banayee huee duniaa ki koe tareef kars ake, uska khyaal kar sake, uska use kar sake.bhagwan ne insaan ko sochne samjhne ki jyda takat de kar..... use uske haal pe chhod diyaa....... woh apna bhala buraa khud samjhe.......
daadi kahti thi. ki jab bhagwaan ne insan banaya to shaitaan ne kaha ki mujhe bhi insan pe haq chahiye, mai chahtaa hun ki insaan daye-bayeN.... aage -peechy se kis bhi aur se maIN insaan pe raaj kar sakuN........ bhagwaan ne kaah theek hai........ insaan pe na mai rule karungaa na hi tum...... yaani hum dnono mai se woh jiske chahe side mai aa saktaa hai.... haan lekin shaitaan ne do side se use nahi managaa, ek oopar ek neechy ......... isliye jab hum haath uthate hai to shaitaan duaa mangte hai to shaitaan beech mai nahi aataa, aur jab hum sar jhukate hai to bhi woh beech mai nahi aataa......

ab insaan ko kiski taraf jaana hai ye uska apna faislaa hai ..........!!



6.

Kayi baar sun ne mai aata hai ke insaan apni taqdeer khud likhataa hai .. kitane hi movies mai bhi dahoraayi gayi hai ye baat ... aur kahi kahi real life mai bhi kabhi kisi se koi mistake ho jaaye aur baad mai uske saath sab gadbad ho jaaye to uske aas paas ke log kahete hai ke ... aap ne apni taqdeer khud hi likhi hai so ab jo huaa so bhogatiyee .....

ab kahte haiN ba . boye ped babool ke.. to aam kahaN se hoye..... jo jaisa karta ahai woh waisa bhartaa to hai....... 90 % dekhaa hai maine ....

a. to kya sach mai insaan apni taqdeer khud likhataa hai ??? ...

haan shayed , nahi bhi ........... sabke sath apne kisse haiN. jispe apna bas nahi chaltaa hum use hbagwaan, kismat pe daal dete haiN....... sabke saath ek sa hota to hum sab alag shayri kyun karte.......


b. gar haan to kya koi jaan bujh kar hi apne hisse Kaante, dukh, dard, aur taqleefe likh degaa ... ??

dekho kuch cheezeN to mogle ke panje si hoti hai, jo baapis aati h haiN, kuch nahi bhi.......... jaha insaan apni limit ke bahar har cheez karne lagtaa hai, woh dikkat mai aa hi jata hai........ dunia mai koe bhi cheez buri nahi hai, bas us cheez ki ati yaani out of limit honaa buraa hota hai.... khanaa hbi had se jydaa khao to pet kharaab , bimaar ... hona waigara waigara
bas yahi control life hai. har cheez mai balance...


7. Taqdeer, naseeb, Keesmat, muqddar … in shabdo ke maayne ek hi hai ya judaa judaa … ?? aur in chaar shabdo ke kya maayne hai aap ki nazarr yaa aap ki zindagi mai … ??

jo jo jab jab hona hai, so so tab tab hota hai ....... ye takdeer hai ... ye sach bhi..............

aur jo bhi kuch hota hai, achy ke liye hota hai. ye soch ke jeena chahiye

ek atal bihaari bajpaye ji ki kavitaa hai.......


jo kal they. woh aaj nahi haiN
jo aaj haiN woh kal nahi honge
hone ne hona ka kram isi tarah chalta rahega
hum haiN, hum rahenge. ya bhram bhi sada palta rahega

satya kya hai.. hona ya na hona.......
ya dono hi satya hain
jo hai uska hona satya hai, jo nahi hai uska na hona stya hai

mujhe lagta hai , hona na hona ek hi satyaa ke do ayaam haiN
shesh sab samjh ka fer, buddhi ke vyaayaam haiN

Abhi ke liye in sawaalon ke hi jawaab dijiye .. baaki sawaal to aur bhi hai … fir haazir ho jaayenge unke saath … heheheheheh

Tab tak ke liye …. Humaari chhoottiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii … ..apna khayaal rakhiyegaa .. keep smiling always ...

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

Jay Ambe

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Accha Vikas Ji Hume Bataaiye .........

1. SDC Par Aapke Dwaaraa Post Ki Gaii Kis Ghazal Ko Likhte Hue Aur Puraa Kate Hue Kin Kin Mushkilaat Se Do Chaar Honaa PaDhaa ...? Agar Aisaa Huaa Hai Toh Vistaar Se BataayeN ....... !

ab mushkileN kya. koe itnaa badaa kaam to hai nahi, fir bhi ye ghazal
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=70139

jo shayed ek turning point thi mere liye ........ jo karwat lena chahtaa tha woh yahi thi sahyri maiN ........... is thread pe aapko mil jayega kya kya mushkielN aaye



Saath Hi Yeh Bhi Bataaye .............

2. Sabse Jyada Kis Ghazal Ko Likhkar Mann Praphuuliit Huaa ?

sabse jydaa .. hmm

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=71956

is gahzal ko likh ke jitnaa acha feel huaa waisa nahi huaa aur kisi me ab tak... bas ye ghazal hote hi gayee.........
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[QUOTE=saloni;426571]dear janumanuji,

maine apka sawaal jawab pada.

ji shukriyaa. padhne ke liye bhi aur yaha pe baat karne ke liye bhi ..!!


sabka kehna hay ki aap badiya shayar hein.

ji abhi koshish mai hun ki acha likhuN, ab kaamyaab hota hun ya nahi...... jise jo acha lagtaa hai uski tareef kar deta hai, ab kisi ki tareef certificate to nahi hoti, par likhne wale ke liye zaroori hoti hai, sabke liye hi

aap kripyaa ye bataiye ki omda shayri kise kahte hein?

shayri...... ya jag-beeti honi chahiye ya aap beeti........... aur jo in dono mai se ek hai woh shayri hai, jo dono ho jaye woh umdaa shayri......... kisi bhi baat ko jab naye dhang se kaha jaye.. ya behtar dhang se kaha jaye woh shayri hai. aur agar umdaa dhang se kaha jaye to umdaa shayri........ aapke liye shayri kya hogi ye aap hi taye karenge ......... use doosre kis tarah lete hai ye doosre hi taye karenge .....
mera manna ye hai ki... ek sher jise ma-baap beta saath sun sake ... woh umdaa shayri hai .......... chahe woh ishq pe hi likhi shayri kyun na ho ....

ab ghalib ka hi ek sher leN.....

Aate hain ghaib se yeh mazameen khayaal mein,
Ghalib sareer-e-khama nawa-e-sarosh hai.



woh kahte hai .... ki mujhe jo khyaal aate hai ......ye doosri dunia ya asmana ya bhawaan se aate hai......... ghalib jo pen ke chalne ki awaaz hai ye devtaoN ki awaz hai....


aise hi kuch ek shayr ne kaha hai, halanki ab mujhe sher yaad nahi aa raha hai ................


thoda prose mai kahun to


ate to hai khyaal dil se magar
ye dl mai khyaal kaha se aate haIn..


sher theek se yaad nahi hai, par mujhe ye sher ghalib ke sher se acha lagtaa hai.... ab ghaoib se bade to ksis ko kah nahi sakte, par mujhe ais alagtaa hai. ab lagta hai to lagtaa hai. isliye shayri kya hai, umdaa chi buri kis tarah ki ye faislaa apka hi hoga ....



maine bahuto ki shayri padi kyuki mera ek dost shayar hay,mujhe usise
interest aaya.
magar dekhti hu ki bade bade shayar ke sher bhi aam sher ki tarah lagte hai,

sher ka badaa hona, uska aam hona hi hai. auisamujhe lagtaa hai.. bada shayr kaun hai, jo makbool hai, aur makbool kais ehoga.... use sunne samjhne wale jydaa honge .......... jo baat jitni simple tareke se likhega woh utne hi jyda logo ko samjh ayegi.....

haan ab aapne jo aam kaha hai.. woh kis bajah se kaha hai ye nahi pata mujhe


jis dost ki shayri e aapko prahavit kiyaa ... woh hi umdaa shayri honi chahye aapke hisaab se.... haan ab aap uske aage kya karti hai ye aappe depend hai


phir mai kyu nahi likh sakti?

aap likhti to hai. jaise bhi haiN ... likhe ... aur doosro ko pdh ke dekh ke seekheN... aur agar aapko comparision karna hai to khud se karen, kisi doosre ka doosre se nahi


kya aap mujhe likhna sikhayenge?

mujhe hi koe sikahyee abhi to .... agar aapko lagtaa hai kisi ki shayri mai aisa kuch ahi seekhne wala to usse seekh leN ......... mera apna tazruba ahai ki aap khud se zaroor kahen ki ye cheez mujhe seekhni hai. aur ye kahti rahe jab tak aa na jaye.............

aisa kya hai bade shayar me ,ye baat samajh nahi saki abtak.agar apko pata ho to farq bataiye

meri nazar mai bada shayr woh hai, jiske likhne mai aur uske jeene mai kam se kam antar ho......... jo sochne ki bahut badi had rakhtaa ho, aur uski soch bas uski poety mai hi na ho.... jo saaf dil... kam se kam ego wala ho..... shayri mai dunia bhar ki seekh dene wala.... khud ego, nafrat ki daldal mai ho to kya shayar woh


jo kam lafz mai, asaan sada lafz mai badi baat kahe woh hi bada shayer.... bahut jydaa bhasha ki jaankari rakhne wala, philosphy karne wala ......... shayer nahi hota....


bas itnaa hi .... jyada tazruba nahi na hi itnaa ilm hai mujhe . par jo lagtaa hai so kah diyaa aur mai wahi maanta hun
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Vikas Ji ! Do Sawaal ... !!

1.. Vikas Se FikR Sahab Banne Ke Beech ... Apne Antar MeN Aur Baahari Taur Par Koi Khaas Parivartan Dekhte Hai ? Bataur Ek Shayer Ke Roop MeN ... !

2.. Ek Shayer Ke Liye Shayri ... Ishk Hai ... Junoon Hai ... AatmtushThii Hai ... Yaa Kuch Aur Hai ... ? Apna Nazariyaa BataayeN ....... !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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[QUOTE=naresh_mehra110;426584]Vikas Ji ! Do Sawaal ... !!

1.. Vikas Se FikR Sahab Banne Ke Beech ... Apne Antar MeN Aur Baahari Taur Par Koi Khaas Parivartan Dekhte Hai ? Bataur Ek Shayer Ke Roop MeN ... !


kuch khaas nahi. byaan karne mai shayed sudhaar aaya ho zara sa, par haaN .. ab kuch bade logo mai uth'na baithnaa ho gaya hai....... kuch achy log hain... jo ab dhyaan dete hai, .. baat bhi sunte haiN... ..help bhi karte hain.... pahle aisa nahi tha...
bas yun samjh leN, ab kahi thoda sa uthne baithne layak ho gaya hun


2.. Ek Shayer Ke Liye Shayri ... Ishk Hai ... Junoon Hai ... AatmtushThii Hai ... Yaa Kuch Aur Hai ... ? Apna Nazariyaa BataayeN .......

sab kuch hi. ab ye shayar pe bhi depend karta hai......... ki woh shayri ko is tarah se leta hai........

pahle AatmtushThii honi chahiye..... fir ishq karN fir use janoon bana leN..

han janoon tak zara soch samjh ke jayeN

bas yahi khyaal hai mera...

aapke agle sawal ka intzaar hai

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Vikas Ji ! Ek Sawaal ... !!

Puraane Mashahoor ShayeroN Ki Shayri Aur Vartmaan Daur MeN Likhii Jaa Rahi Shayri ... GunvatTaa Ke Aadhaar Par Aap Kahaa Paate HaiN ... ? Iss Baare MeN Aapkaa DrishThiikon Kya Kehtaa Hai ... ?




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Vikas Ji ! Ek Sawaal ... !!

Puraane Mashahoor ShayeroN Ki Shayri Aur Vartmaan Daur MeN Likhii Jaa Rahi Shayri ... GunvatTaa Ke Aadhaar Par Aap Kahaa Paate HaiN ... ? Iss Baare MeN Aapkaa DrishThiikon Kya Kehtaa Hai ... ?

achi shayri to humesha hi hoti rahi hai.... pahle bhi ab bhi .......
thoda subject m, mahol zubaan ka fark padtaa hai......zubaan thodi aur asaan huee hai,

bas ab shayri ko promote nahi kiyaa jata hai.... ab filmo mai shayri ke liye koe jagah nahi bachi hai, ab koe bhi gana geet likh detaa hai......
mujhe lagtaa hai.. ki ye music ki wajah se huaa hai........ achi music direcotr nahi bachy haiN.. aur achi gahzaleN gaane waale hai bhi to pata nahi gaate kyuN nahi hai.......... woh shikayat to karte hai ki ab woh poetry nahi hai, par woh achi poetry dhoondte hi nahi. jinko bhi suntaa tha maiN, ghulaam ali saab, jagjit saab, anup jalota sab.... hariharan, roopkumar rathod..... talat aziz, chandan daas, pankaj udhaas........... inki ab koe album release nahi hoti hai........ gahzal ki kadr nahi bachi hai.........

koe gahzal gaataa nahi hai........... sunega kauN......... doosraa ise urdu/ hindi walo ke jhagde ne kharaab kar diyaa hai........ poetry ka subject hi nahi hai, jitnaa hota hai... use seriously nahi padhaya jata hai,

doosri poetry. internet ki poetry, jaise ki hum sab. to ab kaun kya likhta ahai, kitna serious hoke likhtaa hai ye aap jante hi honge .........

ab sdc ko hi dekheN...... 31,438 member haiN. lekin poetry karte kitne haiN, aur padhne walo ko to thodi si unglion pe gin sakte hain aap ........ shayri ke liye keo nahi kuch kartaa hai, hum bhi nahi..... bas enjoyment ke liye arte haiN......... jab hum khud kuch nahi karte to doosroN se shikyat kyuN..........

shayri ab bhi achi hoti hai........ bas shayar ki zara sust haiN...... koe kisi ko sikhana nahi chahtaa hai.... jo ustaad haiN.... woh ustaad rahnaa chahte haiN........ vartmaan shayri ka yahi haal hai......... hum sab iske liye zimmedaar hain...... acha kahne wale ab bhi haiN..... bas koe padhen wala ho to...... yaha sab khud ko promote karte rahte haiN, aur apni feeling ki kadr karte hai sath mai doosro se bhi yahi chahte haiN ki woh sirf humari feelign samjhe... poetry ki baat baad mai ho ...

bas itna hi. gubaar to bahut hai, par kya kareN... hona -jana kuch nahi hai.....

batour shayar hum kya kar rahe hai shayri ke liye, kuch nahi. sirf apni poem likho post karo waah wah, suno agle din fir wahi karo...... shayr achy nahi to shayri achi kaise...

we need to promote poetry......... like we have sdc hum yaah se bahut kuch kar sakte hai, maien bahut site dekhi haiN, jaha pe .... bahut kuch kiyaa jata hai......... hum aisa kyun nahi karte haiN.... 2 saal hone ko hai yaha , waise ka waisa hi hai sab
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aap kahte hai yaha bahut nkuch kiya jaa sakta hai...kya kiya jaa sakta hai?
   
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aap kahte hai yaha bahut nkuch kiya jaa sakta hai...kya kiya jaa sakta hai?
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is site ko dekheN, yaha sab kuch hota hai, waisa hum bhi kar sakte haiN......
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