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"mere armano ko badi khusi se jala raha hai" -
15th October 2006, 10:08 AM
woh banke dard meri ankhon me beh raha hai
aj dard bhara sama kuch mujhse keh raha hai door hote hue bhi ankho me ansu la raha hai dard ki mehfil me ansu ke jaam pilaa raha hai zindagi se meri kehl ke mujhe tabah kar raha hai samjh ke ek bura sapna zindagi mese mita raha hai anjan mazil pe wo kisi aur ke sath wo ja raha hai bewafai ka matlab wo aaj mujhe samjha raha hai joothe sath deke wo apnapan jata raha hai mere armano ko wo badi khusi se jala raha hai maine kuch likha hai aj bahot din bad kuch apney asar ap sab ke bich me lane ki tamanna thi meri .......shayad ap ko pasand aye |
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15th October 2006, 05:18 PM
khwahish ji kais ho aap?
aap aaj bahot dino baad aayi aur kuch likha, aapki peshkas maine padhi aapki peshkas se hi aapke dard bhare ehsas ka khayal aa raha hai maine aapkipeshkas ko padha aur use samjha bhi aur samjhne ke baad hi main reply kar raha hu yahape aapne is bar achhi kosish ki hai bich me ek line me galti hai anjan mazil pe wo kisi aur ke sath wo ja raha hai yaha do bar wo aaya hai aapne bahot hi achhi kosish ki hai aur bas aise hi likhte raho aap bas yehi ummid kare hai aapse aate rahiyenga aapka dost dhaval |
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15th October 2006, 05:22 PM
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bahut hi umda kosish thi muhtarma.har sher bilkul wahi baat kehta chala gaya jo pehle ne shuru ki thi.laga jaise apni kahani ke hi alag alag adhyaay padh raha hoon.bas kahin kahin mujhe laga kuch shadon me gadbad hai,bura na maaniyega. door hote hue bhi ankho me ansu la raha hai dard ki mehfil me ansu ke jaam pilaa raha hai yahaan shayad aansuon ke jaam hona chahiye. zindagi se meri kehl ke mujhe tabah kar raha hai samjh ke ek bura sapna zindagi mese mita raha hai yahaan v agar aap mese nahi de kar kewal se deti to aur behtar lagta. anjan mazil pe wo kisi aur ke sath wo ja raha hai bewafai ka matlab wo aaj mujhe samjha raha hai aur yahaan shayad sirf ek hi wo hoga. maafi chahunga agar kuch galat keh gaya hun to.waise mujhe jo laga maine keh diya.bas aap aage v yunhi likhti rahiye.............. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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15th October 2006, 07:43 PM
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grazie aapki dost pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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16th October 2006, 12:07 PM
shukriya dhavalji padhne ke liye acha laga apko yaha dekh ke
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16th October 2006, 12:08 PM
shukriya apka ghayalji apke suggetions pasnd aye
khuda hafiz |
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16th October 2006, 12:09 PM
shukriya apka bhi poojaji yaha aneke liye
khuda hafiz |
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16th October 2006, 06:53 PM
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Hamari Yaad -
16th October 2006, 08:26 PM
Hamari Yaad...
Tumhe hamari yaad kabhi toh aati hogi dil ki dhadkan bhi shayed badh jati hogi kitna chaha tha humne ki saath saath rahe ye sochkar tumhari bhi aankh bhur aati hogi beete din ab vapus toh nahin aa sakte kho diya hai jo use toh nahin pa sakte dhuul si hi rahi gayi hai baki hava mei kash tumhe zindgi me phir se bula sakte zindgi chhoti hai magar itni chhoti bhi nahin AankheN suukh gayi hai aur ab roti bhi nahin jara jara si batoN pe agar hum na jhagadte toh shayed ye zindgi tumse zuda hoti bhi nahi vaise akele hi aaye hai aur akele hi jana hai kaisa bhi ho bandhan ek din toh toot jana hai koi kitna bhi rahe paas ya kitna bhi rahe duur sukh dukh ka jalwa apne hi mann ka afasana hai _____________________________________________[COLOR="Sienna"][/COLOR] |
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19th October 2006, 10:14 AM
waah kya baat keh di aapne....khwahish ji...bahoot khoob.....bahoot hi oomda kalaam pesh kiya aapne.....ek dum steek dil ko chhone wala...daad kabool keejiye janaab...
Harash apka bahot shukriya ke ap yaha aye aur ise pasand kiya khuda hafiz |
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19th October 2006, 10:16 AM
Hamari Yaad...
Tumhe hamari yaad kabhi toh aati hogi dil ki dhadkan bhi shayed badh jati hogi kitna chaha tha humne ki saath saath rahe ye sochkar tumhari bhi aankh bhur aati hogi beete din ab vapus toh nahin aa sakte kho diya hai jo use toh nahin pa sakte dhuul si hi rahi gayi hai baki hava mei kash tumhe zindgi me phir se bula sakte zindgi chhoti hai magar itni chhoti bhi nahin AankheN suukh gayi hai aur ab roti bhi nahin jara jara si batoN pe agar hum na jhagadte toh shayed ye zindgi tumse zuda hoti bhi nahi vaise akele hi aaye hai aur akele hi jana hai kaisa bhi ho bandhan ek din toh toot jana hai koi kitna bhi rahe paas ya kitna bhi rahe duur sukh dukh ka jalwa apne hi mann ka afasana hai apne acha likha hai pasand aya shabab yaha aye iske liye shukriya |
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