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Bheed me ek ajnabee -
24th March 2008, 08:44 PM
bheed me eik ajnabee ka samna achha laga
sabse chupkar woh kisiika dekhna achha laga surmaii ankhon ke neeche phool se khilne lage kehte kehte kuch kisii ka sochna achha laga dil me kitne ahad baandhein the bhulane ke liye woh mila toh sab iraadein torna achha laga dushman-e-jaan hai par amjad mai bura kaise kahoon jab bhi aaya saamne woh bewafaa achha laga |
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16th April 2008, 08:17 PM
Good, I like it. But you migt have added to complete your Gazal
' Mudkar vapas lot ana pada hame bich raah se Kisi gair ke saath jab unhe chalna achchha laga. |
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26th April 2008, 01:14 PM
haan ji, but the track i have only hav the lines i posted.
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20th June 2008, 11:16 PM
kuch Aur The Iraade, Nazron Me Tha Unke Fareb,
Fir Bhi Unka Muskurakar, Bolna Sachaa Laga.. NAMAK BHARKAR MERE ZAKHMO PE TUM KYUN MUSKURATE HO? MERE ZAKHMO KO DEKHO, MUSKURANA ISKO KEHTE HAIN...!! |
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20th June 2008, 11:24 PM
Tha Umra Me Muzse Badaa, Fir Bhi Tha Wo Sirfira..
Dekhne Me Theek Tha Par, Bola To Bachha Laga.. Ghoomta Nange Badan, Maasoom Sa Bachha Kahi, Muskurakar Hath Mera Pakdaa Jab Achha Laga.. NAMAK BHARKAR MERE ZAKHMO PE TUM KYUN MUSKURATE HO? MERE ZAKHMO KO DEKHO, MUSKURANA ISKO KEHTE HAIN...!! |
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