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Smile Gazal - Main Gul Nahi Par..... - 23rd September 2011, 02:59 PM
Main gul nahi par pyaar me unke Gulzaar sa lagu....
Ho kar abaad jahan me main ab unke shinghar saa lagu...


Kya khoob bita hai zindagi ka safar pyaar me unke...
Kabr me apni main ek jalte chiraag saa lagu...


Ab tak abaad hai meri rooh e mohabbat dil me unke....
Main zinda nahi hu par ankho me unki hayat saa lagu...


Kya khoob saji hai noor se mazaar meri "Tausif".....
Main ek hu yahan, par logo me hazaar saa lagu....


Yeh to khuda kaa karishma hai aur apki Mohabbat.....
Ki wafaat k baad bhi me unke beech hayat saa lagu....

SamandaroN mieN muaafiq havaa chalaata hai...
Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha...

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23rd September 2011, 06:47 PM
Ehsaas acche haiN Tauseef sahab...but technically kuch mistakes haiN..hope ke aap unhe durust karne ki koshish karenge...

Looking forward for more better from your side...



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23rd September 2011, 06:48 PM
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Main gul nahi par pyaar me unke Gulzaar sa lagu....
Ho kar abaad jahan me main ab unke shinghar saa lagu...


Kya khoob bita hai zindagi ka safar pyaar me unke...
Kabr me apni main ek jalte chiraag saa lagu...


Ab tak abaad hai meri rooh e mohabbat dil me unke....
Main zinda nahi hu par ankho me unki hayat saa lagu...


Kya khoob saji hai noor se mazaar meri "Tausif".....
Main ek hu yahan, par logo me hazaar saa lagu....


Yeh to khuda kaa karishma hai aur apki Mohabbat.....
Ki wafaat k baad bhi me unke beech hayat saa lagu....
Tahreer Ke Ehsaas AchChhe HaiN ... Ghazal Ke Leehaaz Se Qafiye Theek Nahi Aaye ... Jaise Aapne Matle MeN Gulzaar, shinghaar Qafiye Se Shuru Kiya Aage ke Ashaar MeN Lagaataar Vaise Nahi Chalaa Paaye ... Iss Par Gaur KareN ... Kuch Iss Tahara Hazaar .. Inkaar.. Pyaar ...Dayaar ... Kram MeN Qafiye Banaa Sakte The ... Khair Koshish AchChhi Hai ... Likhte RaheN ... !



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Shukria Zainy jee aur Naresh Bhai - 23rd September 2011, 07:46 PM
Insha allah ...... Agli likhawat me in cheezo pe dhyan se kaam karne ki koshish karunga....

SamandaroN mieN muaafiq havaa chalaata hai...
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25th September 2011, 02:20 PM
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Ehsaas acche haiN Tauseef sahab...but technically kuch mistakes haiN..hope ke aap unhe durust karne ki koshish karenge...

Looking forward for more better from your side...
Insha Allah Purzor koshish karenge Zainy jee...

SamandaroN mieN muaafiq havaa chalaata hai...
Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha...

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