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mere hamsafar mere saath chal - 17th April 2012, 10:08 AM
Mere hamsafar mere saath chal , mujhe raasto'n Ka pataa nahii'n.
Kahii'n kho Na jaau'n mai'n bhiid me'n , mera haath Aise chhudaa nahii'n.

Lo shab-e-firaaq* bhii raaegaa'n* hii chamak-garaj Ke chalii gayii,
Nahii'n barq* haay girii nahii'n , nahii'n abr* haay fataa nahii'n .

Meri bekasi* Ka sabuut hai ye tarah-tarah kii udaasiyaa'n
Ye zamee'n bhii haay fatii nahii, ye falak bhii haay giraa nahii'n

mere haal-e-dil pe tuu ha'ns to le , haa'n ye soch le,ye samajh bhii le
Koi aisaa bhii hai jahaan me'n jise dukh kabhi bhii huaa nahii'n.

Yahii raat-din ki shikaayate'n hame'n is safar me'n lagii rahii,
Mere saath Kyu'n tuu rukaa nahii'n ,Tere saath kyu'n mai'n chalaa nahii'n.

Mere saath Jo bhii huya ufaq WO kisi Ke saath kabhi na ho,
Jo bhii Chaah kii WO mili nahi'n , Jo bhii paas thaa WO raha nahii'n.

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Shab-e-firaaq = night of separation

Raaegaa'n = fruitless

Barq = lightening

Abr = cloud

Bekasi = helplessness
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meree beqasi ka saboot hai ye tarah-tarah ki udaasiyaa,
ye zamee bhi haay fatee nahi, ye falak bhee haay giraa nahi.

mere haaledil pe tu has bhi le ki ye soch le ye samajh bhi le,
koi aisaa bhi hai jahaan men jise dukh kabhi bhee huya nahi.

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meree beqasi ka saboot hai ye tarah-tarah ki udaasiyaa,
ye zamee bhi haay fatee nahi, ye falak bhee haay giraa nahi.

mere haaledil pe tu has bhi le ki ye soch le ye samajh bhi le,
koi aisaa bhi hai jahaan men jise dukh kabhi bhee huya nahi.

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BaDhi RawaaN DawaaN Aur Khoobsurat Ghazal Likhi Hai !

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mere hamsafar mere saath chal, mujhe raasto ka pataa nahi.
kahee kho na jaaun main bheed men , mera haath tu yu chudaa nahi.

wo tuffani raat bhi gam bhari yu chamak-garaj ke chali gayi,
nahi barq* haay giree nahi , nahi abr* haay fataa nahi.

meree beqasi ka saboot hai ye tarah-tarah ki udaasiyaa,
ye zamee bhi haay fatee nahi, ye falak bhee haay giraa nahi.

mere haaledil pe tu has bhi le ki ye soch le ye samajh bhi le,
koi aisaa bhi hai jahaan men jise dukh kabhi bhee huya nahi.

kadee dhoop men the sane huye wo hawaa ke jhonke bhee garm the,
ki shajar ki chhaon ghani to thee mujhe chain phir bhi milaa nahi.

yahee raat din kee shikaayte hame is safar men lagi rahee,
mere saath kyun tu rukaa nahi, tere saath kyun main chalaa nahi.

kafedast* jaan liye UFAQ yu hi besabab ki phire kahaan
jise zindagi se na pyaar ho , wo qazaa* se phir to daraa nahi.



barq - lightening
abr - cloud
kafedast - palm of hand
qazaa - death
Very-2 impressive Ufaq bhaee, bayhad rawaan dawaan, tarannum say bharee ghazal.
Waysay aapkee is payshkash nay mayray zahan ka dareechaon mayn goonjtay ayk suaal ko zaahir kernay ka mawqa ataa kiya haye.....
mujhe yaad nahee maynay kahaan sunee ya perhee thee...mujhay iskee mukammal ghazal ki talaash haye.....
zahan mayn goonjta shayr more or less kuch aysaa haye....

Mujhay zindagee ki sazaa na do ,
mujhay maut say koi gila nahee,
Mujhay hamsafar ki talash haye
Wo jo jamsafar kabhie mila nahee!

Google search nay kuch mukhtalif say answers paysh kiyay....but not satisfactory......jaysay
mujhay zindgaee ki dua na do,
meri zindagee say banee nahi etc etc..

Agar aap ya koee aur iska jawaab jaantay hoan to iltejaa haye isper raoshnee daalayn!

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Very-2 impressive Ufaq bhaee, bayhad rawaan dawaan, tarannum say bharee ghazal.
Waysay aapkee is payshkash nay mayray zahan ka dareechaon mayn goonjtay ayk suaal ko zaahir kernay ka mawqa ataa kiya haye.....
mujhe yaad nahee maynay kahaan sunee ya perhee thee...mujhay iskee mukammal ghazal ki talaash haye.....
zahan mayn goonjta shayr more or less kuch aysaa haye....

Mujhay zindagee ki sazaa na do ,
mujhay maut say koi gila nahee,
Mujhay hamsafar ki talash haye
Wo jo jamsafar kabhie mila nahee!

Google search nay kuch mukhtalif say answers paysh kiyay....but not satisfactory......jaysay
mujhay zindgaee ki dua na do,
meri zindagee say banee nahi etc etc..

Agar aap ya koee aur iska jawaab jaantay hoan to iltejaa haye isper raoshnee daalayn!

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mere hamsafar mere saath chal, mujhe raasto ka pataa nahi.
kahee kho na jaaun main bheed men , mera haath tu yu chudaa nahi.

wo tuffani raat bhi gam bhari yu chamak-garaj ke chali gayi,
nahi barq* haay giree nahi , nahi abr* haay fataa nahi.

meree beqasi ka saboot hai ye tarah-tarah ki udaasiyaa,
ye zamee bhi haay fatee nahi, ye falak bhee haay giraa nahi.

mere haaledil pe tu has bhi le ki ye soch le ye samajh bhi le,
koi aisaa bhi hai jahaan men jise dukh kabhi bhee huya nahi.

kadee dhoop men the sane huye wo hawaa ke jhonke bhee garm the,
ki shajar ki chhaon ghani to thee mujhe chain phir bhi milaa nahi.

yahee raat din kee shikaayte hame is safar men lagi rahee,
mere saath kyun tu rukaa nahi, tere saath kyun main chalaa nahi.

kafedast* jaan liye UFAQ yu hi besabab ki phire kahaan
jise zindagi se na pyaar ho , wo qazaa* se phir to daraa nahi.



barq - lightening
abr - cloud
kafedast - palm of hand
qazaa - death
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mere hamsafar mere saath chal, mujhe raasto ka pataa nahi.
kahee kho na jaaun main bheed men , mera haath tu yu chudaa nahi.

wo tuffani raat bhi gam bhari yu chamak-garaj ke chali gayi,
nahi barq* haay giree nahi , nahi abr* haay fataa nahi.

meree beqasi ka saboot hai ye tarah-tarah ki udaasiyaa,
ye zamee bhi haay fatee nahi, ye falak bhee haay giraa nahi.

mere haaledil pe tu has bhi le ki ye soch le ye samajh bhi le,
koi aisaa bhi hai jahaan men jise dukh kabhi bhee huya nahi.

kadee dhoop men the sane huye wo hawaa ke jhonke bhee garm the,
ki shajar ki chhaon ghani to thee mujhe chain phir bhi milaa nahi.

yahee raat din kee shikaayte hame is safar men lagi rahee,
mere saath kyun tu rukaa nahi, tere saath kyun main chalaa nahi.

kafedast* jaan liye UFAQ yu hi besabab ki phire kahaan
jise zindagi se na pyaar ho , wo qazaa* se phir to daraa nahi.



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kafedast - palm of hand
qazaa - death
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mere hamsafar mere saath chal, mujhe raasto ka pataa nahi.
kahee kho na jaaun main bheed men , mera haath tu yu chudaa nahi.

wo tuffani raat bhi gam bhari yu chamak-garaj ke chali gayi,
nahi barq* haay giree nahi , nahi abr* haay fataa nahi.

meree beqasi ka saboot hai ye tarah-tarah ki udaasiyaa,
ye zamee bhi haay fatee nahi, ye falak bhee haay giraa nahi.

mere haaledil pe tu has bhi le ki ye soch le ye samajh bhi le,
koi aisaa bhi hai jahaan men jise dukh kabhi bhee huya nahi.

kadee dhoop men the sane huye wo hawaa ke jhonke bhee garm the,
ki shajar ki chhaon ghani to thee mujhe chain phir bhi milaa nahi.

yahee raat din kee shikaayte hame is safar men lagi rahee,
mere saath kyun tu rukaa nahi, tere saath kyun main chalaa nahi.

kafedast* jaan liye UFAQ yu hi besabab ki phire kahaan
jise zindagi se na pyaar ho , wo qazaa* se phir to daraa nahi.



barq - lightening
abr - cloud
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mere hamsafar mere saath chal, mujhe raasto ka pataa nahi.
kahee kho na jaaun main bheed men , mera haath tu yu chudaa nahi.

wo tuffani raat bhi gam bhari yu chamak-garaj ke chali gayi,
nahi barq* haay giree nahi , nahi abr* haay fataa nahi.

meree beqasi ka saboot hai ye tarah-tarah ki udaasiyaa,
ye zamee bhi haay fatee nahi, ye falak bhee haay giraa nahi.

mere haaledil pe tu has bhi le ki ye soch le ye samajh bhi le,
koi aisaa bhi hai jahaan men jise dukh kabhi bhee huya nahi.

kadee dhoop men the sane huye wo hawaa ke jhonke bhee garm the,
ki shajar ki chhaon ghani to thee mujhe chain phir bhi milaa nahi.

yahee raat din kee shikaayte hame is safar men lagi rahee,
mere saath kyun tu rukaa nahi, tere saath kyun main chalaa nahi.

kafedast* jaan liye UFAQ yu hi besabab ki phire kahaan
jise zindagi se na pyaar ho , wo qazaa* se phir to daraa nahi.



barq - lightening
abr - cloud
kafedast - palm of hand
qazaa - death
Bahut Khoobsurat Ghazal Likhi Hai AAPNE.............................!!

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7th May 2012, 01:26 AM
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mere hamsafar mere saath chal, mujhe raasto ka pataa nahi.
kahee kho na jaaun main bheed men , mera haath tu yu chudaa nahi.

wo tuffani raat bhi gam bhari yu chamak-garaj ke chali gayi,
nahi barq* haay giree nahi , nahi abr* haay fataa nahi.

meree beqasi ka saboot hai ye tarah-tarah ki udaasiyaa,
ye zamee bhi haay fatee nahi, ye falak bhee haay giraa nahi.

mere haaledil pe tu has bhi le ki ye soch le ye samajh bhi le,
koi aisaa bhi hai jahaan men jise dukh kabhi bhee huya nahi.

kadee dhoop men the sane huye wo hawaa ke jhonke bhee garm the,
ki shajar ki chhaon ghani to thee mujhe chain phir bhi milaa nahi.

yahee raat din kee shikaayte hame is safar men lagi rahee,
mere saath kyun tu rukaa nahi, tere saath kyun main chalaa nahi.

kafedast* jaan liye UFAQ yu hi besabab ki phire kahaan
jise zindagi se na pyaar ho , wo qazaa* se phir to daraa nahi.



barq - lightening
abr - cloud
kafedast - palm of hand
qazaa - death

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In one word: Superb

yahee raat din kee shikaayte hame is safar men lagi rahee,
mere saath kyun tu rukaa nahi, tere saath kyun main chalaa nahi.


really nice one...

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