bin tere zindagi saza hai.......

[furqann]

haazreen-e-mehfil ko salaam arz hai
dosto Aaj pehli baar kuch apna likha pesh kar raha hu iski shuruwaat to ab se 4 month pehle hui thi Jab ek pal me sab kuch badal gaya main us waqt ye nahi socha tha k mere lafz kabhi namz bhi ho sakte hai mujhe na Behr ka ilm hai na qafiye ki khabar in sab se anjaan hu ummeed hai meri galtiyo ko aap sab point out karoge jis main apni galtiyan sudhar saku


Kaha ho tum chale Aao
mujhe bhi saath le jaao
k tum bin ham adhure hai
adhurepan me kya jeena
tum hi ho zindagi meri
tum hi ho aarzu meri
tumhare bin jiye kaise
mujhe bas ye bata jaao
tum Aa jao tum Aa jaao
mujhe bhi saath le jaao
tumhare bin mujhe ek pal
nahi jeena nahi jeena
teri baaten tere waade
mujhe sab yaad aate hai
tumhari ulfato k ye
sabhi qisse sunate hai
tumhare pyaar k qisse
hasee rukhsaar k qisse
jo har pal saath beete the
wo pal na bhool payegen
ham har waada nibhayegen
mujhe na chhor k jao
Sahara kon hai mera
na dil yun Tod k jao
ye Dard-dil sahe kaise
kaho tum bin jiye kaise
tumhare bin mujhe ek pal
nahi jeena nahi jeena
ye aakhen bheegi rehti hai
mere aansu nahi rukte
tumhe ye yaad karte hai
tumse faryaad karte hai
zara kuch to reham khao
wafa ki laaj rakh lo na
karam Itna hi kar do bas
hame bhi saath le jaao
zehar ye aansun ka ab
nahi peena nahi peena
mujhe tum bin nahi jeena
Kaha tumne hi tha mujhse
kabhi na ham juda honge
to phir ab ye judai kyu
ki tumne bewafai kyu
wo sang jeena
wo sang marna
kyu qasme bhool baithe ho
hame kyu chor jaate ho
saza kis baat ki Dee ho
wafa ya bewafai ki
kyu ab khamosh ho itne
kaho kuch to kaho hamse
khafa kyu ho bayaa kar do
khata ko Dar-guzar kar do
judai ki saza na do
na jao chor kar mujh ko
mujhe bhi saath le jao
k tum bin is jahaa me ab
nahi rehna nahi rehna
mujhe tum bin nahi jeena
na main naraaz hu tum se
na kuch shikwe shikayat hai
khafa kaise rahu tumse
mujhe tumse mohabbat hai
tumhe mujhse mohabbat hai
mohabbat ki qasam tumko
hame na chhor k jao
hame bhi saath le jaao
tumhare saath jeete the
tumhare saath hai marna
tum hi to Jaan ho meri
tum hi pehchaan ho meri
tum hi se hai rawa saansen
tum hi se dil dhadakta hai
meri jaa'n ko na tadpao
meri pehchan Lauta do
ya saansen rok do meri
yun jeene ki saza na do
k dhadkan bin jiye kaise
zara Itna to samjha do
tumhare bin khushi kaisi
k tum bin zindagi kaisi
yehi bas Aas hai baaqi
yehi faryaad hai baaqi
kahi se tum chale Aao
hame bhi saath le jao
qehar ye zindagi ka ab
nahi sehna nahi sehna
tumhare bin mujhe ek pal
nahi jeena nahi jeena
tumhare bin nahi jeena
nahi jeena nahi jeena

[furqann]

Originally Posted by N@zneen

Tumhari is nazm mein rawani hai, sachche jazbon se saji behad khoobsurat nazm, waise kafi lambi nazm hai lekin padhte waqt pata hi nhi chala kab khatm hogaya, tum bht achcha likhte ho...pls keep writing.

hosla afzai ka shukriya naaz g
wahi puraani baat repeat karna chahuga k mujhe likhna nahi Aata jab ye mere zehan me aaye the bs kuch alfaz the ye nazm kaise bane Pata nahi aur ab agar kuch likhne ki koshish karta hu to kafi mushkil hoti hai aur likha nahi jaata hai Pata nahi phir kabhi kuch likh pau ya nahi lekin koshish zarur karta hu
aapne ise read kiye pasand kiye uske liye teh dil se shukriya kehta hu
aise hi saath dete

[Hassan]

zara Itna to samjha do
tumhare bin khushi kaisi
k tum bin zindagi kaisi

wah boht khoob Furqann bhai,,

Aise hi acha acha likh k humaiN mehzooz karte rehna,

DuaooN k saath,,,

[furqann]

Originally Posted by Hassan

zara Itna to samjha do
tumhare bin khushi kaisi
k tum bin zindagi kaisi

wah boht khoob Furqann bhai,,

Aise hi acha acha likh k humaiN mehzooz karte rehna,

DuaooN k saath,,,

shukriya Hassan sahab aise hi saath dete rahe

[zainy]

Good one Furqan sahab. .........

[furqann]

Originally Posted by zainy

Good one Furqan sahab. .........

shukriya.......
Zainy sahiba