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Din Ka Chaand - 10th October 2010, 04:29 AM

Ek azaad nazm munfarid khyaal ke saath aap logoN ki khidmat mai paish hai apni raaye se nawaaziyega


Din ka chaand

Kitni yaksaaniyat hai mujh mai
Aur tujhme
Ey din ke chaand
Ke mere saath
jo haiN wo haiN hi nahi
Jo din ki roshni mai
tere saathiyoN ki tarhaN
mujhko bhi
akela choD dia karte haiN
aur meiN bhi
teri tarhaaN
raat hone ke intezaar mai
suraj ki tapish ko
apne wajood mai
paiswast hota
mehsoos karta rehta huN
meiN jaanta huN tere dard ko
teri khaamoshi
tere chehre pe tanhaaii ke saaye
jiske ehsaas mai tu
til til
ghat_ta hua nazar aata hai
meiN sab jaanta huN “chaand”
ke teri tarhaN
meiN bhi tanha huN



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10th October 2010, 08:24 AM

Aslam Bhai ... Sabse Pehle Aaapko JanamDin ki bahut bahut Mubaaraqbaad ! Sadaa khush aur swasth rahen .... ! Khoobsurat ... Sushiil .. Samjhdaar ... aur Gunwaan Jeevan Saathi mile ... yeh hi duaa hai ... !

Aapki Kavita ... Bahut khoob lagi mujhe ... Mann ke ekaakiipan ki kashmaakash ko bahut acche se bayaan kiya hai aapne ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi behtar khayaloN ke saath humesha aate rahen aur likhte rahen .... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath .....




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Aslam Bhai ... Sabse Pehle Aaapko JanamDin ki bahut bahut Mubaaraqbaad ! Sadaa khush aur swasth rahen .... ! Khoobsurat ... Sushiil .. Samjhdaar ... aur Gunwaan Jeevan Saathi mile ... yeh hi duaa hai ... !

Aapki Kavita ... Bahut khoob lagi mujhe ... Mann ke ekaakiipan ki kashmaakash ko bahut acche se bayaan kiya hai aapne ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi behtar khayaloN ke saath humesha aate rahen aur likhte rahen .... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath .....

Narsh bhai aapka bhut bhut shukriaH, nazm ki pasndagi ke liyN aapka tahe dil se sukurguzaar huN bhut nawaazish



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Kya baat hai mere bhai Subhan_allah.........waise maine bohat galat waqt padhi hai yeh Nazm abhi abhi Bahrain aaya hu...........aur yeh pardes ki zindagi din ki tarah tasavvur kar raha hu..........jab ghar jayege tab raat hogi aur sab sath hoge.

Dil khush bhi kiya aapne aur udaas bhi........bohat khoob Aslam Miya.

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Love 10th October 2010, 01:44 PM

aslam bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob.....pasand aayee aapki nazm
dil se daad
duaon ke saath


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aslam bhai
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bahut khoob.....pasand aayee aapki nazm
dil se daad
duaon ke saath

Rajindar sahab nawaazish aapka bhut bhut shukriyaH, yuN hi hosala badhaate rahiyega

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Kya baat hai mere bhai Subhan_allah.........waise maine bohat galat waqt padhi hai yeh Nazm abhi abhi Bahrain aaya hu...........aur yeh pardes ki zindagi din ki tarah tasavvur kar raha hu..........jab ghar jayege tab raat hogi aur sab sath hoge.

Dil khush bhi kiya aapne aur udaas bhi........bohat khoob Aslam Miya.

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11th October 2010, 12:25 AM

Din ka chaand

Kitni yaksaaniyat hai mujh mai
Aur tujhme
Ey din ke chaand
Ke mere saath
jo haiN wo haiN hi nahi
Jo din ki roshni mai
tere saathiyoN ki tarhaN
mujhko bhi
akela choD dia karte haiN
aur meiN bhi
teri tarhaaN
raat hone ke intezaar mai
suraj ki tapish ko
apne wajood mai
paiswast hota
mehsoos karta rehta huN
meiN jaanta huN tere dard ko
teri khaamoshi
tere chehre pe tanhaaii ke saaye
jiske ehsaas mai tu
til til
ghat_ta hua nazar aata hai
meiN sab jaanta huN “chaand”
ke teri tarhaN
meiN bhi tanha huN

Hi Noor
Chand kae barae main tum nae khoob likha
Insaan hamaesha bahut kuch bardasht isi liyae kerta hai kae agla pal sunehra hoga
sooraj ki tapish kae baad mulayam chandni milae to kiya kehnae
waah

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Din ka chaand

Kitni yaksaaniyat hai mujh mai
Aur tujhme
Ey din ke chaand
Ke mere saath
jo haiN wo haiN hi nahi
Jo din ki roshni mai
tere saathiyoN ki tarhaN
mujhko bhi
akela choD dia karte haiN
aur meiN bhi
teri tarhaaN
raat hone ke intezaar mai
suraj ki tapish ko
apne wajood mai
paiswast hota
mehsoos karta rehta huN
meiN jaanta huN tere dard ko
teri khaamoshi
tere chehre pe tanhaaii ke saaye
jiske ehsaas mai tu
til til
ghat_ta hua nazar aata hai
meiN sab jaanta huN “chaand”
ke teri tarhaN
meiN bhi tanha huN

Hi Noor
Chand kae barae main tum nae khoob likha
Insaan hamaesha bahut kuch bardasht isi liyae kerta hai kae agla pal sunehra hoga
sooraj ki tapish kae baad mulayam chandni milae to kiya kehnae
waah

razia

Yasmeen saheba bilku sahi kaha aapne, nazm aapko achi lagi bhut khushi huii yuN hi hosla badhaati rahiye nawaazish



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