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9th August 2005, 10:39 AM
Kiya karte hain beinthaha mohabbat tumse
Bana liya tumko apna, lee nahi ijaaazat tumse, Ab to tum hi tum ho dil ki dharkano ka sabab Kya kahen kis kadar toot ke ki hai chaahat tumse Tumhare bina ek pal humara guzarta nahi ab Kat nahi sakti yeh zindagi ab judaa hoke tumse Ban gaye ho humare dil ke armaan bhi tumhi sanam Hoton pe humare khilti muskaan bhi hai ab tumse Saansen meri chalti hain sun awaaz un dhhadkanon ki Har lamhaa apni zindagi kaa paaya hai raushan tumse Kar diye saare sapne saare tasuvar tumhare hi naam Ki humari pehchaan...astitva bhi jaana jaata hai tumse Luv, Palak =========================================== Naam ke tere kii ibaadat hai, Ishq teraa khudaayi hai Berang meri duniya sanam rangeen toone banaayi hai Dil ki har dhhadkan me naam teraa shaamil hai is kadar Ke dekhoon main aaina bhi to soorat teri nazar aayi hai ================================================== ================================================== ================ "Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." ================================================== ================================================== ================= |
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9th August 2005, 10:40 AM
Kiya karte hain beinthaha mohabbat tumse
Bana liya tumko apna, lee nahi ijaaazat tumse, Ab to tum hi tum ho dil ki dharkano ka sabab Kya kahen kis kadar toot ke ki hai chaahat tumse Beautiful....Well Expressed! Tumhare bina ek pal humara guzarta nahi ab Kat nahi sakti yeh zindagi ab judaa hoke tumse Ban gaye ho humare dil ke armaan bhi tumhi sanam Hoton pe humare khilti muskaan bhi hai ab tumse Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh... just amazing... tooo good Palak! Saansen meri chalti hain sun awaaz un dhhadkanon ki Har lamhaa apni zindagi kaa paaya hai raushan tumse Kar diye saare sapne saare tasuvar tumhare hi naam Ki humari pehchaan...astitva bhi jaana jaata hai tumse Last sher was just 2 2 2 good....! Loved it! Dear Palak! Humesha ki tarah bahut hi gehere ehsaas bahut hi pyaar se kaagaz par utaare hain... Mujhe to padh bahut acha laga....Loved every word of it....U expressed ur feelings really verybeauifullly here..... Aise hi likhti raho...May God Bless u.... Keep Smiling always.. TC  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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9th August 2005, 01:52 PM
Kiya karte hain beinthaha mohabbat tumse
Bana liya tumko apna, lee nahi ijaaazat tumse, Meri Palkooooooooooo........... kalaam ka matla behad pasand aaya......ishq mein doobe hue ehsaas.....aur doobe rehne ki khawhish...... khush rahoo....luv u a lot..... tumhara apna............ **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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9th August 2005, 02:45 PM
Hi Palak,
Bahut hi khoobsurat khyaal dil se kagaaz par utare hain aapne.. Yun hi likhti rahiye Thanks for sharing ... jab se kisi ne karli hai suraj ki chori aao chal ke suraj dhoondhein aur na mile toh kiran kiran phir jama karein hum aur ik suraj naya banyein -NM |
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9th August 2005, 02:52 PM
Kiya karte hain beinthaha mohabbat tumse
Bana liya tumko apna, lee nahi ijaaazat tumse, Ab to tum hi tum ho dil ki dharkano ka sabab Kya kahen kis kadar toot ke ki hai chaahat tumse Wah... Tumhare bina ek pal humara guzarta nahi ab Kat nahi sakti yeh zindagi ab judaa hoke tumse Ban gaye ho humare dil ke armaan bhi tumhi sanam Hoton pe humare khilti muskaan bhi hai ab tumse Kya baat hai.... Saansen meri chalti hain sun awaaz un dhhadkanon ki Har lamhaa apni zindagi kaa paaya hai raushan tumse Kar diye saare sapne saare tasuvar tumhare hi naam Ki humari pehchaan...astitva bhi jaana jaata hai tumse Wah... Hi Palakh, Acha likha hai tumne... tumhare ehsaason ko badi khubi se shabdon mein buna hai tumne.... Bahut khoob...likhti raho... Take Care Rohin |
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9th August 2005, 04:05 PM
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Rone se pehle tujhe merii baat yaad aayegi ek vada kiya hai apne apse ki n aanso utrenge palko pe wo vada aaj meri zindagi hai... *ke aansoo tere rok dete hain merii dhdadkan Sanam mere liye sahi,tu humesha muskurayegi dard bhi ek ahsas hai uske karib hone ka isliye har pal muskan rhti hai honto pe... keep writing !!! |
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9th August 2005, 07:29 PM
Dear Pulkit,
Tumhe humare ehsaas pasand aaye...jaan bahaut khushi hui... Tum hamesha uhin saath dete raho hum uhin likhte rahenge...Keep smiling Thanx once again buddy!!! Luv, Palak =========================================== Naam ke tere kii ibaadat hai, Ishq teraa khudaayi hai Berang meri duniya sanam rangeen toone banaayi hai Dil ki har dhhadkan me naam teraa shaamil hai is kadar Ke dekhoon main aaina bhi to soorat teri nazar aayi hai ================================================== ================================================== ================ "Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." ================================================== ================================================== ================= |
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9th August 2005, 07:51 PM
hi girlfriend
too gud re....bade hi khubi se shabdon mein buna hai tumne  keep it up buddy very sweet poetry loved it Luv ya PRiya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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9th August 2005, 08:26 PM
Aman bhaiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Kaise ho? Tumhe to hamesha hi pasand aata hai apni behan ka kuch likha hua... Uhin hamesha humara saath dete rehna...kush raho hamesha... I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa lotttttttttttttttttttttttt toooooooooooooooooooo... Tumhari Palkoooo =========================================== Naam ke tere kii ibaadat hai, Ishq teraa khudaayi hai Berang meri duniya sanam rangeen toone banaayi hai Dil ki har dhhadkan me naam teraa shaamil hai is kadar Ke dekhoon main aaina bhi to soorat teri nazar aayi hai ================================================== ================================================== ================ "Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." ================================================== ================================================== ================= |
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