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29th April 2006, 01:01 AM
Downcast days and starless nights
Sad sun and a crying pale moon Wilted flowers and deserted lands Lakes of tears and oceans of sadness Feelings of distress and heart of anxiety Purloined love and coveted relations Fake love and broken friendships A pining, yet opposing invisible force Invincible, yet threatening desires Blood and no more existence Death and me Everything goes together… »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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29th April 2006, 01:24 AM
Originally posted by Mukhra
Downcast days and starless nights Sad sun and a crying pale moon Wilted flowers and deserted lands Lakes of tears and oceans of sadness Feelings of distress and heart of anxiety Purloined love and coveted relations Fake love and broken friendships A pining, yet opposing invisible force Invincible, yet threatening desires Blood and no more existence Death and me Everything goes together… What was your state of mind when you wrote this poem, Little Girl ? I'm curious. This is the first anger poem that I'm reading of yours and I think its brilliant...! Take good care of yourself...ok ? Amanspeare  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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29th April 2006, 01:51 AM
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29th April 2006, 02:25 AM
hi warda ...
reading u after a long long time ...... sorry for that ..... i was really busy ..... well about his post .... i like it very much .... nice thoughts ..... keep posting .... as u r posting ... bye n TC Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki, Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi, Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm) *(`'·.¸(`'·.¸*¤*¸.·'´)¸.·'´)* .....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»...... *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* ------------------------------------------------ |
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29th April 2006, 11:33 AM
heyy...how r u doin...
well...comin to the poem...its really nice... but u look so frustrated...kya hua...everythins ok na? take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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29th April 2006, 12:31 PM
My lil sis,
........................ take care & keep writting. |
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29th April 2006, 09:50 PM
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wht was my state of mind when i wrote this....hmm, well i wrote this a few days ago, but juss posted it yesterday. yes its filled with anger, but more with dard.....but i think i was more angry with myself than the person in question... neways, thanx for replying take care »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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30th April 2006, 10:12 AM
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kya baat hai........... Lakes of tears and oceans of sadness aabhi se hi rone lagi.......haha  ......just kiddingbeautiful poetry but very difficult words used  ,bahut deen baad mene apni chamber ki dictonary nikali........aacah likha hai jo thoda bahut samjha me aaya.......but a very sad poetry hah,hope ur not in that much distress yuhi likhti raho bye and take care passionate........... pyar kare jo hume sone sa khara jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara me uska "veer" wo meri "zarra" -------------------Brizesh_kol_------------------------------------- 
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30th April 2006, 10:24 AM
Hi,
Where did these words come from? a couple of days back.. you were writing on madness, love, excitement... why this...? Its neways good to throw your frustrations out... it relieves... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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30th April 2006, 05:16 PM
aaj chand par noor hai
is bat ka chand ko guroor hai hum kispe guroor kare hamara to chand hi hamse door hai my e-mail id : ck_gathia@yahoo.co.in ******* keep smiling****** |
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30th April 2006, 11:40 PM
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------------------------------------------ Sweetu »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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30th April 2006, 11:42 PM
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welll...thanx for liking and replying its ok...u can be busy...uve got exams...mee too...and i shld be studying right now take care keep coming »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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30th April 2006, 11:48 PM
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thanx for liking and replying, but y do u care if everything is ok or not????   »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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30th April 2006, 11:59 PM
hi,
thanx for liking and replying, but y do u care if everything is ok or not???? hmm...may b my mistake...replyin u... this will b the last reply...ok... Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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1st May 2006, 12:10 AM
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........................ take care and keep coming »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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1st May 2006, 12:12 AM
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hmm...well, no i do not cry, tho am sumtimes very very close to letting the tears out of their prison.... hmmm, well thanx for liking, but i dont understand, i didnt use any big words, so y did u need the dictionary??? well, anyways, thanx for liking and replying take care and keep coming »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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1st May 2006, 11:56 PM
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these words came frm where words come frm....wordland. and omg! some ppl have a problem with me writing on love, some have one on dard, so u tell me...WHT DO I WRITE??? do i juss stop writing then????? why i wrote this...long story, not one i wld say right here in public.... take care »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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2nd May 2006, 12:00 AM
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welcome to the site...hope u like it here. and coming to ur poem...nice, but uhhhhh, whts it supposed to mean in the concept of my post??? as for ur email id...no thanx, i dont want it. it might sound a bit rude, but since i dont kno u, am not comfortable juss taking ur id like thttake care keep coming bye »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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