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15th May 2005, 04:08 AM
Hi Friends,
Zindagi mein kai baar aisa hota hai jab humare azziz doston se bichudna padta hai... Kabhi school mein, kabhi college....to kabhi kissi aur wajah se....
Us samay humara dil bhar aata hai....aankhein num ho jaati hain..
Bus Yunhi betha tha .... aur apne kuch purane doston ko yaad kar raha tha..... tabhi yeh chand alfaz dil se nikle.... socha aap sab ke saath share karoon....
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Bhul na jaana dost....
Bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum ek din anjaan banke
Aaye tum zindagi mein
Meri Dil ki dhadkan banke
Chal diye yunh tum
Aankhon se aansaon banke
Lamhe jo sangh gujare
Bas gaye dil mein Yaad banke
Yaad aaoge tum humesha
Kabhi dard to kabhi khushi banke
Hai dua bus yahi
Mera pyaar rahe tera saaya banke
Mile jo ajnabi tumhe
To yaar milna gale dost banke
bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum bhi ek din anjaan banke
-- Rohin Bhargava
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15th May 2005, 04:43 AM
Bahut achha laga yeh kalaam.........
Lamhe jo sangh gujare
Bas gaye dil mein Yaad banke
Yaad aaoge tum humesha
Kabhi dard to kabhi khushi banke
Simply beautiful,....
Mohabbat...
Naina
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Main zameen pe tanha, aur woh aasmaano mein...
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hi -
15th May 2005, 05:05 AM
dear Rohin
very touchy! intense feelings...simply put with great luv and pain..
Yaad aaoge tum humesha
Kabhi dard to kabhi khushi banke
aapne bahtu hi acha likha hai.....yes these are the feelings we all go though whenever we have to leave someone we had inb life and we shared some close moments.....aapka new signature bhi bahut pasand aya...
simply great......padkhkar kuch aisa mehsus hua jase....aankhon me ashk hai aur honthon par hasi..
luv
Priya
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Re: Bhul na jaana dost.... -
15th May 2005, 08:25 AM
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Originally posted by Rohin
Hi Friends,
Zindagi mein kai baar aisa hota hai jab humare azziz doston se bichudna padta hai... Kabhi school mein, kabhi college....to kabhi kissi aur wajah se....
Us samay humara dil bhar aata hai....aankhein num ho jaati hain..
Bus Yunhi betha tha .... aur apne kuch purane doston ko yaad kar raha tha..... tabhi yeh chand alfaz dil se nikle.... socha aap sab ke saath share karoon....
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Bhul na jaana dost....
Bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum ek din anjaan banke
Aaye tum zindagi mein
Meri Dil ki dhadkan banke
Chal diye yunh tum
Aankhon se aansaon banke
Lamhe jo sangh gujare
Bas gaye dil mein Yaad banke
Yaad aaoge tum humesha
Kabhi dard to kabhi khushi banke
Hai dua bus yahi
Mera pyaar rahe tera saaya banke
Mile jo ajnabi tumhe
To yaar milna gale dost banke
bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum bhi ek din anjaan banke
-- Rohin Bhargava
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rohin,
tumhari yah rachna aam kaise rah paayegi..... yah sabhi k maan ke jajbaat hai so sabhi ki apni bani rahegi..
muje bhi meri poorani rachna yaad aa gayi..... yah mere oon dosto k naam rachna hai jo ab kabhi bhi wapas n aayenge.. waqt ki miiti oon par chha gayi hai..... par fir bhi mere sath hai .... oonki yaade..
~bina bataaye kyun chale gaye???
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15th May 2005, 09:04 AM
Hi Rohin dost,
Ajeeb baat hai na, ke kuch anjaan insaan dil ke itne kareeb ho jaate hai ke maano woh kabhi anjaan the hi nahi. Magar kismat bhi kya kya khel dikhlati hai.
Bohot khoob dost. Bohot pasand aaye tumhare ehsaas. Likhte raho.
Luvs,
Salim
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15th May 2005, 10:17 AM
Yaad aaoge tum humesha
Kabhi dard to kabhi khushi banke
Rohin...
mile thhe kabhi anjaan banke...ajeeb baat hai na ki koyi tau anjaan ho kar bhi, duur reh kar bhi itne dil ke kareeb ho jaate hain...aur koyi paas reh kar bhi anjaan se reh jaate hain...aur nazdeek reh kar bhi duuriyaan banaye rakhte hain...
bus yoonhi khayaal aa gaya tumhari yeh dil lazeez rachna padhkar...khuub lafz diye hain ehsaason ko...meri bhi daad kabuul farmaana...
tumhari di
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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Re: Bhul na jaana dost.... -
15th May 2005, 01:51 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by Rohin
Hi Friends,
Zindagi mein kai baar aisa hota hai jab humare azziz doston se bichudna padta hai... Kabhi school mein, kabhi college....to kabhi kissi aur wajah se....
Us samay humara dil bhar aata hai....aankhein num ho jaati hain..
Bus Yunhi betha tha .... aur apne kuch purane doston ko yaad kar raha tha..... tabhi yeh chand alfaz dil se nikle.... socha aap sab ke saath share karoon....
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Bhul na jaana dost....
Bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum ek din anjaan banke
Aaye tum zindagi mein
Meri Dil ki dhadkan banke
Chal diye yunh tum
Aankhon se aansaon banke
Lamhe jo sangh gujare
Bas gaye dil mein Yaad banke
Yaad aaoge tum humesha
Kabhi dard to kabhi khushi banke
Hai dua bus yahi
Mera pyaar rahe tera saaya banke
Mile jo ajnabi tumhe
To yaar milna gale dost banke
bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum bhi ek din anjaan banke
-- Rohin Bhargava
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Bhaiya,
bahut bahut khaas ehsaas..
in ehsaaso ko shabdo ka roop de de wo aap hi kar sakate ho.. kam se kam mere bas ki baat to nahi hai.
ajanabee mil kar banate hai fir dost bhi banate hai.. aar waqt ka safar me fir alag alag bhi ho jaate hai ... lekin yaad , wo kabhi nahi jaati humesha basi rehati hai dil me.
kya kahu ab bas kuchh rehane ko baaki nahi hai.. bahut achha likha hai aapne.
dher saare pyaar ke saath
aapki pyaari bahan
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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15th May 2005, 02:38 PM
Rohin Bhai...!May I call this "The Rohin Effect" ?
Bhul na jaana dost....
Bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum ek din anjaan banke
Paas hi rehna dost
Jism main rouH jeisse na ki mehmaan banke
Aaye tum zindagi mein
Meri Dil ki dhadkan banke
Hardam kouch sikhate hi rehna
Hamare mehfil main darpan banke
Chal diye yunh tum
Aankhon se aansaon banke
Jaana bhi ho to phir laut aana
Bahaaron ke mawsamon banke
Lamhe jo sangh gujare
Bas gaye dil mein Yaad banke
Samaa main goonti hai awaaz teri
Hari bansouri ke fariyaad banke
Yaad aaoge tum humesha
Kabhi dard to kabhi khushi banke
Teri yaadon ko dil main qaid kareinge
Pinjri main saath raheinge pakshi banke
Hai dua bus yahi
Mera pyaar rahe tera saaya banke
Safar main jab kabhi dhooup hogi
Meri doua tera saath hoga chaaya banke
Mile jo ajnabi tumhe
To yaar milna gale dost banke
Jannat to hai itna dour nahin
Kaun jaane kab aajaye Khouda Ji dost banke
bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum bhi ek din anjaan banke
Fizaaon ne bhi phool khilaana shourou kiya
Jab se aaye ho Dosti ke baag main baagbaan banke
Rohin Bhargava
Amanush...
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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15th May 2005, 03:16 PM
Hi Rohin,
Isbaar ki aapki rachna aapke style se thoda hatke lagi........kuch dard dikha aaj tumhari soch mein......magar phir bhi humesha ki tarah....ek saral....aam insaan ki tarah bayaan kiye hain alfaz yahan.......saral hai shayd isiliye dil mein rukh gaye hain...
"Chal diye yunh tum
Aankhon se aansaon banke"........itniii sundar tulna kari hai.....ki dil se daad nikal rahi hai....likhte raho
keep smiling,
shalu
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Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye,
Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon,
Kal tumse juda ho jaaonga jo aaj tumhara hisa hoon[/color]
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15th May 2005, 03:28 PM
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Originally posted by Rohin
Hi Friends,
Zindagi mein kai baar aisa hota hai jab humare azziz doston se bichudna padta hai... Kabhi school mein, kabhi college....to kabhi kissi aur wajah se....
Us samay humara dil bhar aata hai....aankhein num ho jaati hain..
Bus Yunhi betha tha .... aur apne kuch purane doston ko yaad kar raha tha..... tabhi yeh chand alfaz dil se nikle.... socha aap sab ke saath share karoon....
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Bhul na jaana dost....
Bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum ek din anjaan banke
Aaye tum zindagi mein
Meri Dil ki dhadkan banke
Chal diye yunh tum
Aankhon se aansaon banke
Lamhe jo sangh gujare
Bas gaye dil mein Yaad banke
Yaad aaoge tum humesha
Kabhi dard to kabhi khushi banke
Hai dua bus yahi
Mera pyaar rahe tera saaya banke
Mile jo ajnabi tumhe
To yaar milna gale dost banke
bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum bhi ek din anjaan banke
-- Rohin Bhargava
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dearest rohin,
zindaghi ki ek sachi ki ek jhalak tumhari is nayaab kalam ne mujhe dikhayi. milna aur bhichadna yeh dastoor hai zindaghi mein. paana aur khona, sab kuch yahi hai. khali haath aaye they khaali haath jana hai, life n death is a game of life. u never know wen is ur last round n u leave forever. kaash yeh bichadne gamn na ho. kaash kisi se itna moh na ho. rohin aaj sach mein dil bhar aaya kuch panktiyan tumhari padh ke
Aaye tum zindagi mein
Meri Dil ki dhadkan banke
Chal diye yunh tum
Aankhon se aansaon banke
Lamhe jo sangh gujare
Bas gaye dil mein Yaad banke
yadein hi yaadein hi reh jati hai rohin. khuch ache palon ki. itne sawl ubher rahe hain maan mein ki khud hi ulajh gayi hoon aaj in sab ke beech mein. ek khushi ka lamha haath aata nahi ki dukh ka ganna saya gher leta hai humein. kyo bebaas insaan yahan reh jata hai jab kissi se bhichadta hai.
na jante they ki aise yaad aaoge tum
maalom na tha ki aise tadpaoge tum!
gar jaante to jaane hi na dete tumko
ki baad mein phir laut ke na aaoge tum!
rohin aaj kuch gatal likh diya ho to maaf kar dena dost. aaj bahut badi cheez khoyi hai meine. khush raho. take care n god bless u with his finest glitters.
mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!
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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….
Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….
Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….
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15th May 2005, 09:43 PM
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Originally posted by Rohin
Hi Friends,
Zindagi mein kai baar aisa hota hai jab humare azziz doston se bichudna padta hai... Kabhi school mein, kabhi college....to kabhi kissi aur wajah se....
Us samay humara dil bhar aata hai....aankhein num ho jaati hain..
Bus Yunhi betha tha .... aur apne kuch purane doston ko yaad kar raha tha..... tabhi yeh chand alfaz dil se nikle.... socha aap sab ke saath share karoon....
"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""
Bhul na jaana dost....
Bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum ek din anjaan banke
Aaye tum zindagi mein
Meri Dil ki dhadkan banke
Chal diye yunh tum
Aankhon se aansaon banke
Lamhe jo sangh gujare
Bas gaye dil mein Yaad banke
Yaad aaoge tum humesha
Kabhi dard to kabhi khushi banke
Hai dua bus yahi
Mera pyaar rahe tera saaya banke
Mile jo ajnabi tumhe
To yaar milna gale dost banke
bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum bhi ek din anjaan banke
-- Rohin Bhargava
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dard hai pyar hai ikraar hai apki is post mein rohin ji bahut achi lagi.
Lamhe jo sangh gujare
Bas gaye dil mein Yaad banke
sakhi
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16th May 2005, 09:57 AM
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Bahut achha laga yeh kalaam.........
Lamhe jo sangh gujare
Bas gaye dil mein Yaad banke
Yaad aaoge tum humesha
Kabhi dard to kabhi khushi banke
Simply beautiful,....
Mohabbat...
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Hi Naina ji,
Pehli baar aap mere thread par aayi hain...
Bahut bahut shukriya iska...
Aapko mere chand alfaz pasand aaye...
Dil ko khushi hui...
Shukriya
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16th May 2005, 10:03 AM
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dear Rohin
very touchy! intense feelings...simply put with great luv and pain..
Yaad aaoge tum humesha
Kabhi dard to kabhi khushi banke
aapne bahtu hi acha likha hai.....yes these are the feelings we all go though whenever we have to leave someone we had inb life and we shared some close moments.....aapka new signature bhi bahut pasand aya...
simply great......padkhkar kuch aisa mehsus hua jase....aankhon me ashk hai aur honthon par hasi..
luv
Priya
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Dear Priya,
It touched your heart and you could feel the pain... thanks
We humans can never understand his wizardry...
Ek pal hassa ke doosre hi pal rula deta hai...
Kabhi kabhi khushi mein bhi aanson ko mila deta hai...
Hothon par hassi aur Aankhon mein nami.... yeah true..
I am glad you liked the new signature....
Take Care
Rohin
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16th May 2005, 10:11 AM
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rohin,
tumhari yah rachna aam kaise rah paayegi..... yah sabhi k maan ke jajbaat hai so sabhi ki apni bani rahegi..
muje bhi meri poorani rachna yaad aa gayi..... yah mere oon dosto k naam rachna hai jo ab kabhi bhi wapas n aayenge.. waqt ki miiti oon par chha gayi hai..... par fir bhi mere sath hai .... oonki yaade..
~bina bataaye kyun chale gaye???
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Hi Di,
Rachna to aam hi hai di..... padh kar jab insaan apne ehsaas kalam ke saath jod deta hai to woh kalam aam nahi reh pati us insaan ke liye...
Aapko bhi ismein apne ehsaason ki jhalak mili...
Kuch purani yaadein taaza ho gayi...
Aapka kalam to mein padh hi chuka hoon....
aap yahan aaye uska shukriya
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16th May 2005, 10:14 AM
rohin sir
chota muh badi baat keh raha hu par itna kehna chahunga
apne khoobsurat alfaaz se is mehfil ko sajate rahiye
arz hai
yaaron ko yaad karte hai
yaadon se dil bhar aata hai
kabhi saath jiya karte the sab
aaj milne ko dil taras jaata hai............
keeeeeep comming
aapka-jubin
main aur meri tanhayee..............
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jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
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ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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16th May 2005, 10:18 AM
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Hi Rohin dost,
Ajeeb baat hai na, ke kuch anjaan insaan dil ke itne kareeb ho jaate hai ke maano woh kabhi anjaan the hi nahi. Magar kismat bhi kya kya khel dikhlati hai.
Bohot khoob dost. Bohot pasand aaye tumhare ehsaas. Likhte raho.
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Hi Salim bhai,
Ajee baat jaroor hai... magar yeh to hota hi hai...
do dost bhi kabhi anjaan hote hain...
Insaan ko seekhna padega ki kuch bhi humesha ke liye nahi hota...
Mein bhi nahi hoon....
I am glad you liked it....
Shukriya..
Rohin
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16th May 2005, 10:20 AM
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Yaad aaoge tum humesha
Kabhi dard to kabhi khushi banke
Rohin...
mile thhe kabhi anjaan banke...ajeeb baat hai na ki koyi tau anjaan ho kar bhi, duur reh kar bhi itne dil ke kareeb ho jaate hain...aur koyi paas reh kar bhi anjaan se reh jaate hain...aur nazdeek reh kar bhi duuriyaan banaye rakhte hain...
bus yoonhi khayaal aa gaya tumhari yeh dil lazeez rachna padhkar...khuub lafz diye hain ehsaason ko...meri bhi daad kabuul farmaana...
tumhari di
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Hi Di,
Ajeeb baat to hai... anjaan hi jaan ban jaata hai
aur apna hi paraya....
Khayalon ko yahan share karne ke liye shukriya...
Shukriya aap yahan aaye
Aapka
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16th May 2005, 10:28 AM
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Bhaiya,
bahut bahut khaas ehsaas..
in ehsaaso ko shabdo ka roop de de wo aap hi kar sakate ho.. kam se kam mere bas ki baat to nahi hai.
ajanabee mil kar banate hai fir dost bhi banate hai.. aar waqt ka safar me fir alag alag bhi ho jaate hai ... lekin yaad , wo kabhi nahi jaati humesha basi rehati hai dil me.
kya kahu ab bas kuchh rehane ko baaki nahi hai.. bahut achha likha hai aapne.
dher saare pyaar ke saath
aapki pyaari bahan
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Hi Sister,
Khaas.... tum khaas ho....
In ehsaason ko shabdon mein pirona to koi bhi kar lega....
jab yeh ehsaas aaye mere samne mera laptop tha aur keyboard pe chalte rahe....
Yaadon ke hi sahare to hum unhe apne dil mein zinda rakhe te hain....paas rakhte hain....
itna pyaar na karo....
Tumhe bhi bahut pyaar
tumhara Big B
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16th May 2005, 10:30 AM
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Originally posted by Amanush...
[B]Rohin Bhai...!May I call this "The Rohin Effect" ?
Bhul na jaana dost....
Paas hi rehna dost
Jism main rouH jeisse na ki mehmaan banke
Hardam kouch sikhate hi rehna
Hamare mehfil main darpan banke
Jaana bhi ho to phir laut aana
Bahaaron ke mawsamon banke
Samaa main goonti hai awaaz teri
Hari bansouri ke fariyaad banke
Teri yaadon ko dil main qaid kareinge
Pinjri main saath raheinge pakshi banke
Safar main jab kabhi dhooup hogi
Meri doua tera saath hoga chaaya banke
Jannat to hai itna dour nahin
Kaun jaane kab aajaye Khouda Ji dost banke
Fizaaon ne bhi phool khilaana shourou kiya
Jab se aaye ho Dosti ke baag main baagbaan banke
Amanush...
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Wah bahut hi khoob Amanush bhai,
Yeh Rohin effect nahi hai.... Amanush ka jalwa hai...
Apne mere shabdon ke jawab mein apne aap mein hi ek nayab motiyon ki mala piroyi hai...
bahut khoob....
Thanks
Rohin
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16th May 2005, 10:34 AM
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Hi Rohin,
Isbaar ki aapki rachna aapke style se thoda hatke lagi........kuch dard dikha aaj tumhari soch mein......magar phir bhi humesha ki tarah....ek saral....aam insaan ki tarah bayaan kiye hain alfaz yahan.......saral hai shayd isiliye dil mein rukh gaye hain...
"Chal diye yunh tum
Aankhon se aansaon banke"........itniii sundar tulna kari hai.....ki dil se daad nikal rahi hai....likhte raho
keep smiling,
shalu
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Hi Shalu,
Style to hatke hona hi tha....ehsaas jo hatke the....
Dard soch bhi hai aur dil mein bhi...
Aur haan aam insaan hi hoon....isliye likhta bhi aam insaan ke jaisa hi hoon....
Dil se daad qabool ki humne...
Bahut bahut shukriya
Smile all mile
Rohin
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16th May 2005, 10:38 AM
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dearest rohin,
zindaghi ki ek sachi ki ek jhalak tumhari is nayaab kalam ne mujhe dikhayi. milna aur bhichadna yeh dastoor hai zindaghi mein. paana aur khona, sab kuch yahi hai. khali haath aaye they khaali haath jana hai, life n death is a game of life. u never know wen is ur last round n u leave forever. kaash yeh bichadne gamn na ho. kaash kisi se itna moh na ho. rohin aaj sach mein dil bhar aaya kuch panktiyan tumhari padh ke
Aaye tum zindagi mein
Meri Dil ki dhadkan banke
Chal diye yunh tum
Aankhon se aansaon banke
Lamhe jo sangh gujare
Bas gaye dil mein Yaad banke
yadein hi yaadein hi reh jati hai rohin. khuch ache palon ki. itne sawl ubher rahe hain maan mein ki khud hi ulajh gayi hoon aaj in sab ke beech mein. ek khushi ka lamha haath aata nahi ki dukh ka ganna saya gher leta hai humein. kyo bebaas insaan yahan reh jata hai jab kissi se bhichadta hai.
na jante they ki aise yaad aaoge tum
maalom na tha ki aise tadpaoge tum!
gar jaante to jaane hi na dete tumko
ki baad mein phir laut ke na aaoge tum!
rohin aaj kuch gatal likh diya ho to maaf kar dena dost. aaj bahut badi cheez khoyi hai meine. khush raho. take care n god bless u with his finest glitters.
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Hi Jasleen,
Dastoor hai yehi zindagi ka.... milna aur bichadna...
Yaadon ko sanjoye rakho.... woh denge saath... hum de na de...
Kuch galat nahi likha tumne ....
Take Care and God Bless you
Rohin
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Re: Re: Bhul na jaana dost.... -
16th May 2005, 10:39 AM
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dard hai pyar hai ikraar hai apki is post mein rohin ji bahut achi lagi.
Lamhe jo sangh gujare
Bas gaye dil mein Yaad banke
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Hi Sakhi,
Sab kuch hai... jo aapke dil mein hai...
I am glad you liked it....
Thanks
Rohin
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16th May 2005, 10:41 AM
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Originally posted by dard_thesorrow
rohin sir
chota muh badi baat keh raha hu par itna kehna chahunga
apne khoobsurat alfaaz se is mehfil ko sajate rahiye
arz hai
yaaron ko yaad karte hai
yaadon se dil bhar aata hai
kabhi saath jiya karte the sab
aaj milne ko dil taras jaata hai............
keeeeeep comming
aapka-jubin
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Hi Jubin miya...
Mehfil sajti rahegi....aur hum aate rahenge....
Aur wah kya sher kaha hai... bahut khoob...
Thanks
Rohin
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16th May 2005, 11:59 AM
rohin...tum mano ya na mano ek khas baat hai tumhare likhne k andaaz mein...jo kisi bhi roop mein bilkul yun hoti hai jaise dil k sath dhadkan!
Chal diye yunh tum
Aankhon se aansaon banke...
very beautiful...!
Yaad aaoge tum humesha
Kabhi dard to kabhi khushi banke
sach kaha!
Mile jo ajnabi tumhe
To yaar milna gale dost banke..!
the best one...of whole poem..in lines ne sab kuch keh diya har ahsaas ka jawab jaise ye do pankti hain!
bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum bhi ek din anjaan banke...
hm...perfect ENd...which is the beging also!
a diffrnt style...i luved it..trust me!
tc
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16th May 2005, 01:03 PM
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rohin...tum mano ya na mano ek khas baat hai tumhare likhne k andaaz mein...jo kisi bhi roop mein bilkul yun hoti hai jaise dil k sath dhadkan!
Chal diye yunh tum
Aankhon se aansaon banke...
very beautiful...!
Yaad aaoge tum humesha
Kabhi dard to kabhi khushi banke
sach kaha!
Mile jo ajnabi tumhe
To yaar milna gale dost banke..!
the best one...of whole poem..in lines ne sab kuch keh diya har ahsaas ka jawab jaise ye do pankti hain!
bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum bhi ek din anjaan banke...
hm...perfect ENd...which is the beging also!
a diffrnt style...i luved it..trust me!
tc
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Hi Komal,
Tum jaanti ho mein tumhari yeh baat manoonga hi nahi...
I am glad you loved it...
aur haan baba I trust you....
Aap yahan aaye .... shukriya...
Rohin
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16th May 2005, 01:39 PM
Bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum ek din anjaan banke
Aaye tum zindagi mein
Meri Dil ki dhadkan banke
Sach.. dost dhadkan ban jaate hain dil kii!!
Chal diye yunh tum
Aankhon se aansaon banke
Lamhe jo sangh gujare
Bas gaye dil mein Yaad banke
Very touching Rohin..Sach Woh pal humesha yaad rehte hain!!
Yaad aaoge tum humesha
Kabhi dard to kabhi khushi banke
Hai dua bus yahi
Mera pyaar rahe tera saaya banke
Waaaaaahhh!! This is really so so beautiful.. loved these liness!!!
Mile jo ajnabi tumhe
To yaar milna gale dost banke
bhul na jaana dost
Mile the hum bhi ek din anjaan banke
Bhaut paayri baat hai....mile thhe hum bhi kabhi anjaan banke!!
Dear Rohin!
Jaisa ki tumne kaha thha ke mujeh to yeh pasand aayegi hi....Dosti par jo hai...Sach.. yeh bahut hi pyaari rachna hai.... Ek dard hota hai jab koi dost door jaata hai....Yaadein hi hain jo saath reh jaati hain.....
Yeh kahyal bhi bahut bhaay...'Mile thhe hum kabhi janabi banke'... Meri dil se daad kubool kar lena dost...Just loved this one...Aise hi likhte raho
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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16th May 2005, 01:44 PM
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Sach.. dost dhadkan ban jaate hain dil kii!!
Very touching Rohin..Sach Woh pal humesha yaad rehte hain!!
Waaaaaahhh!! This is really so so beautiful.. loved these liness!!!
Bhaut paayri baat hai....mile thhe hum bhi kabhi anjaan banke!!
Dear Rohin!
Jaisa ki tumne kaha thha ke mujeh to yeh pasand aayegi hi....Dosti par jo hai...Sach.. yeh bahut hi pyaari rachna hai.... Ek dard hota hai jab koi dost door jaata hai....Yaadein hi hain jo saath reh jaati hain.....
Yeh kahyal bhi bahut bhaay...'Mile thhe hum kabhi janabi banke'... Meri dil se daad kubool kar lena dost...Just loved this one...Aise hi likhte raho
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Hi Pulkit,
Haan .... dard hota hai doston ke bichudne ka....
Doston ka hi kyun....koi bhi bichad jaaye to...
I knew you will love it for u are a friend .... and I know what friends mean to you... so....
I am glad you like it...
Thanks
Rohin
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Re: Re: Re: Bhul na jaana dost.... -
16th May 2005, 02:06 PM
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Originally posted by Rohin
Wah bahut hi khoob Amanush bhai,
Yeh Rohin effect nahi hai.... Amanush ka jalwa hai...
Apne mere shabdon ke jawab mein apne aap mein hi ek nayab motiyon ki mala piroyi hai...
bahut khoob....
Thanks
Rohin
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Hamare jalwe ko pasand karne ke liye bahout shukriya...Rohin Bhai!
Hamein aapke phoulon ki mala bahout jyaada pasand rahi...iss
main Dosti ki khoushbou jo hai...
Amanush...
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Bhul na jaana dost.... -
16th May 2005, 04:05 PM
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Originally posted by Amanush...
Hamare jalwe ko pasand karne ke liye bahout shukriya...Rohin Bhai!
Hamein aapke phoulon ki mala bahout jyaada pasand rahi...iss
main Dosti ki khoushbou jo hai...
Amanush...
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Shukriya Amanush Bhai....
Rohin
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16th May 2005, 04:48 PM
ankhoN maiN nami.. dil main yaad..
yahi hi bas aapki shayri ka jawaab..
bas bhai .. aur kuch na keh sakunga .. bohat si yaden taza ho gayi .. likhte raho yuN hi .. sabke diloN ke taar chedte hue
tumhara apna
kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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16th May 2005, 05:48 PM
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ankhoN maiN nami.. dil main yaad..
yahi hi bas aapki shayri ka jawaab..
bas bhai .. aur kuch na keh sakunga .. bohat si yaden taza ho gayi .. likhte raho yuN hi .. sabke diloN ke taar chedte hue
tumhara apna
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Kunal,
Aankhon mein nami jaroor aaye hogi...dil mein dard bhi hua hoga...
Magar dost woh lamhe bhi yaad aaye honge.... jin mein khushi thi... un khushi ke lamho ko aansoon mein mat baha dena...
Agar chehre par khushi le aayengi... to doston ko kareeb hi paoge...
Tumhara
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17th May 2005, 01:46 AM
Well said buddy! Like your creation... sorry for late reply, you take care!
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17th May 2005, 04:05 AM
Hi Parul,
thanks a lot.... I am really very happy that you liked it.... thanks a lot
Take Care
Rohin
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28th May 2005, 10:25 AM
rohinji
behad khoob
purane bichade doston ke saath usi dosti aur pyar ke saath milne mein alag hi mazaa hai
sonal
~~ u never know where ur destiny takes u ~~
There would come a time when
we have to stop loving a person
not because that person started hating us .....
but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go.....
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28th May 2005, 02:36 PM
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rohinji
behad khoob
purane bichade doston ke saath usi dosti aur pyar ke saath milne mein alag hi mazaa hai
sonal
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Hi Sonal,
Haan sach kaha and thanks for reading this
Thanks
Rohin
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31st October 2011, 12:48 PM
Dhaval bhai - shukriya yaadon ko taaza karne ke liye... I read it with a smile on my face and a tear in my eye...
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