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safar - 5th October 2003, 04:10 AM

Dhhere se dabe paaw woh aayi
Par muje aahat aa hi gayi
Kya karegi woh ab???
Thharegi yaha?
Chali jaayegi??
Muje apne sathh le jaayegi???
Jaise achanak aayi woh... kya
Waise hi achanak jana hoga muje
Ya ... muje taiyaari bhi karne degi...
Safar hai lamba...
N jaane ab ke bichhdu to kaha milu?
Sabhi rishto ko jara dekh lu ji bhar
Chhu lu.... maan maie bhar lu
Jo dosto ne muje diya apnapan
Oose jara fir se mahesoos kar lu
Oon lamho ko ji lu fir ek baar
Jis pal ke intzaar maie
Bahot kaati thhi raate aankho hi maie
Oose jara sahla lu.. samja lu..
Kya itna wakt hai tere paas???
Kya thhodi der rookogi tum?
thhodi hothho ki mushkaan de du
thhodi aankho ki nami le lu
sathh chale hai har pal jo mere,
mere saaye ban kar mere dost....
oonhe alvida kah du.
Aey maut..
Itna to wakt de muje ...
Ke sab ke saamne safar par chalu.
   
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5th October 2003, 04:55 AM

Dear Meena, aapki yeh kalam parte hue meri dil ka haal mein aapko bata nehi sakti. Bohot Pyaar mehsoosh huyi mujhe.
Ha yeh bhi hein ke dard bhi chupi huyi hein. Lekin mujhe barahi aapna pan ki mehsoosh huyi. Waise aur keya kahu, jiyada nehi kehti. Likhte rahiyega. Yeh Pyaar hi hein jo ish duniya meh log shayed nehi janpaye hein thikh se. Log toh ek hi baato par Beqafa ka naam de dete hein. Koi toh dost ko dushman banadete hein. Ab mein kuch aur kahungi toh shayed duniya kehega ke mein pagal hu. Aapna khayal rakhiyega.
God bless.
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samjhe ga kaun yeaha
dard vhari dilki juban
jaaye........................!

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Khoobsurat... - 5th October 2003, 12:10 PM

layii hayat, aayii kaza le chali chale,
na apni khushi aye, na apni khushi chale.


Bahot accha likha hai aapne, zindagi ki tarah maut bhi ek haqiqat hai..lekin uska samna kab aur kahan karna pade yeh koi nahi janta..waise khush naseeb hote hai woh log jo apno ke beech iss duniya se rukhsat lete hai..khair aapke dil ki yeh hasrat puri ho aise dua karte hain hum, yeh to nahi kahoonga ke maut na aaye..lekin aap jis tarah chahti hai bilkool waise hi...sare dost, rishtedar, cheezen, nazare, muasiki, sukhan..jo aap ko accha lagta ho sab ko jee bar ke mehsoos karne ke baad..asaani se rooh aur jism alvida kehkar yun alag ho jaise ek badal doosre badal se alag hota hai...ALVIDA..


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5th October 2003, 12:19 PM

meena ji,

i've got to say..greatly written..i luv the flow of your writing...you couldn't tell exactly where it was going until half way..it makes you question..it was great..i really liked it...it was deep and meaningful....luv your style..
keep it up!~

luv,
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5th October 2003, 01:31 PM

Meena..

Hai ek aarzu chhipi,
Dil ki gehraiyoN me,
Ke hoN fanah magar,
Kuchh is andaaz me,
Ki mar kar bhi rahe,
Zindagi ek aks se.
Kisi ke aansu me chhalkein,
To koi muskaan me jhhalkein.
Koi yaad ho jo,
Pal bhar THehre,
Zehen se nikal kar,
Dil me bas jaaye.
Ho baatein kabhi,
Chale zikr kabhi apna bhi..
Har baat me pyaar mile,
Har zirk me khushi mile.
Kuchh aisa karein,
Ki yaad rahe apno ko,
Ki jo guzar gaya,
Wo ek insaan hi tha,
Apna tha.


Tumne likha to bohat khoob hai.. aur khayaal bhi bohat umda hai.. tumhari aarzu kaamil ho, ye to dua rehti hi hai.. ab ye bhi dua rahegi,ki apni aarzu puuri karne ka tumhe bohat waqt mile..


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5th October 2003, 06:51 PM

meena dost
hazbe mamool bohat khoobsoorat andaaz aur alfaaz se likhe gaye is kalam per doston no jo raye di hai voh qabile qadr hai.
mein bhi yeh kahoon gaa ke meena bohat pur asr aur pur soaz likha hai aap ne.
bohat mehsoos kiya ham ne is ko.
ek achche insaan ki yehi to khoobi hoti hai ke God usey zindgi aur maut donon aisi dete hain ke loag usey us ki zindgi mein bhi pyaar kerte hain aur merne ke baad bhi usey achche alfaaz mein yaad kerte hain
meena dost aap bilkul aisi hi ho.
voh meer saheb ne kyaa khoob kaha hai
"JAANE KA NAHEEN HAI SHA-OOOR SUKHAN KA MERE HARGIZ
TAA HASHR JAHAN MEIN MERA DEEWAAN REHE GAA"

Meena aap ka likha huaa isi tarah taa hashr rahe gaa. aap likhti hi aisa hain aur yaqeenan shakhsiyat bhi aisi hain

magar ek baat yeh aaj kal aap itni marne aur jaane ki baaten kyun kerne lagi hain.
A re hanse aur muskuraayen, itne doston ka saath hai aap kaa.

bas mein isi par khatm kerta hoon, hansen aur muskurayen.

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6th October 2003, 12:38 AM

????????

i don't know what to say... bus... itna kahunga.. woh apke... gali se.. pehle.... mujhe....sath le jayegi...aur...apko apke..doston ke bich hi rakhegi .....

bye.. and take care...


Lamha Lamha...saSein Khatam hoo rai hai...
Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai...
Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah...
Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai...
   
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6th October 2003, 08:14 PM

Meena ji..

Jis achaai ko aapne badi imaandaari se bayaan kiya hai..us sachaai ko to sabne milna hai ik din..par gar ye din aisa ho ke dil mein koi tamanna na ho to aisa din ka dil mein intezaar rahegaa..

Bahut hi umda tareeke se bayaan ki hai aapne apne dil ki mahaanta..

Aapke likhne rehne se hi saanse judi hai hamaari..


kyon zindagi ki raah mein akele chalta hai dost
chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai...
   
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b ahot khub - 6th October 2003, 09:17 PM

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hamesha dost ke liye khub likhti hi tum.kash mera bhi naam tum kabkhi inke saath jod lo.


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Re: safar - 7th October 2003, 02:39 PM

Dost meena

Tumhari ye kavita hila ayee dil ko.
Aur ismeN waqaee tumne apne hlaat ko sajeev kar diya hai ismeN.
IsmeN to koi shaq hi nahiiN ke bohat achcha likha hai tumne.
Aur wo ehsaas sabne mehsuus bhi kiya hai.
Lekin dost yahan maiN tumse Mushy bhai ki tarah wohi baat puuchna chahta huuN ke aajkal
Tum marne ki baateNkyuuN karti ho?
Jaisa ke tumse kaha hai ke tumheN to muskurana hi chaahiye.
Achchi rachchna par badhaii.
Ab kuchch muskurata sa sun ne ko mile to kaisa rahe?

Khush raho
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Question 8th October 2003, 12:56 AM

Ye kya likh diya aapne Meenaji.. mai taareef nahi karooNga... kyoN ke ye aap dil se nahi likh sakti... mai jis Meena ko jaanta hooN... wo Jindgi ko khilna sikhaati hai... ... wo maut ko bhi ek khushgawaar kavita bana deti.

Muskuraao or yooNhi jiye Chale jaao..



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8th October 2003, 10:30 AM

shimul dost,
tumhe yah rachna pasand aayii... tumhara shukriaa jo iski taarif ki. aur tumhe koi kyun pagal kahae? tum bhi na.....
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8th October 2003, 10:36 AM

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aapne jis tarah meri aam rachna ko padhh kar ooski gahraai ko pash kiya hai..... aapki tahe dil se abbhari rahungi.
aapki duwaa ki maie hamesha laayak rahne ki koshish rakhungi.
kuchh bhi kahungi yaha par kam hi padega. shukria kubul karna mera.
   
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8th October 2003, 10:40 AM

tulsi mitr,
sanjj se tumhari bahot baate sooni hai... aaj tumse mil bhi liya.
tumhe meri kavita pasand aayi... mera likhna kahi to safal huaa. tumhari abbhari hu... jo itni soondarta se kavita ko saraha.
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hi - 8th October 2003, 11:28 AM

hi meena g
how r u?
mujhay malom hay aap kisi ko stane k liye use taklif nahin deti
magar aap ka stana bohat taklif deta hay....
sorry bahna sorry


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8th October 2003, 06:27 PM

joh aaye dekar ittala woh mehmaan

joh ruk jaaye aakar woh dost.

mout gar kahakar aaye to mout kyun kahlaaye.

aur jo ruk jaaye to phir ...................tum bhi yaar use ajib kahma-kah main daal rahii ho.


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11th October 2003, 11:22 AM

Meena didi.
main soch rahi hoon ke ek lamba non stop list banaun aap ki tareef ki kyun keaap ki tareef ki koi end nahi hai.
Love u always didi


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12th October 2003, 09:13 PM

banno,
tumhe to koi khayal milna chahiyae bas .... khub likh deti ho. bahot achha likha hai.

aur tumhari duwaa bhi milti rahti hai muje barabar...... thanx dosttttt.
   
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12th October 2003, 09:18 PM

Dear Meena, ab kaha se fhir agaye aap? Aapko woh wada yaad nehi hein? Jao aapse mein aur baate nehi karti.
Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.


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12th October 2003, 09:22 PM

mushi dost,

aapki dost... aapko kya jawab de???
aapne hamesha mere ahesaaso ko saraha hai.
aapne jo muje sanmaan aur dosti di hai.. ooski hamesha kaabil rah paau to mera ab ka jina safal.

rahi baat aap ne kaha hai k maie aaj kal... marnae aur jaane ki baate kyun karti hu??
dost, yakin karo....safar ka janam mere liyae bhi achanak thha....
maut to jab aani ahi aayegi.... oos ka koi ghum nahi aur intzaar nahi ... bhagwaan se yahi prathhna hai meri... jina ho ya marna jo bhi ho bas sahaj ho.
koshish karungi k ab ke aise ahesaas thhode kam hi aaye. aap sabhi dosto k hote huae aise kalaam likhna galat hi hai. par aap sab bhi ise sahaj le aisi meri chah hai.
   
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12th October 2003, 09:59 PM

tanhaai.. mere pathhae,
kya likh diya tumne?????????
aisa nahi likhte.... sabr karo kuchh kahte huae... meri is post ne tumhe dukh diya hai maie jaanti hu... tumhe kuchh nahi kah paati... par tumne jo kaha woh dukh nahi hai mere liyae woh jite ji marna hai.
is duniaa se jana to sabko hai ek din .. par bachhae maa se pahlay nahi jaate...
ab meri koshish rahegi ke fir se tumhe aise dukh na du.
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12th October 2003, 10:02 PM

varinder dost,

tumne kaha hai k......
Aapke likhne rehne se hi saanse judi hai hamaari..


mere dost..... hamesha is koshish maie rahungi k tumhe khushi de saku.
   
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12th October 2003, 10:02 PM

MeeNa Ji

Ye kya Baat Hui , aap acHHa LikHti HaiN iska matLaB ye NaHi ki JO maN me aayeGa VO likHti CHaLi jayeNGi ..

MaNa maut zinDGi ka saBse BaDa sucH Hai MaGaR DostoN ki Dua auR upaR waLe ke kaRam se aapki ZinDgi BaHut LaMBi Hai ..

BaHut acHHa LikHa Hai .. MaGaR aaiNDa saBHaL kaR

Aisi BateiN fiR se NaHI ..


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12th October 2003, 10:03 PM

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shu yaar tu pan........... kem aawu laagyu k hu tari mitr nathhi......?
jyaa hu mitr kahu tyaa tu hamesh haajar hoi j ok?
   
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13th October 2003, 11:03 AM

praveen dost,
aapko rachna pasand aayii..... to likhna safal.
ab tumhare sawaalo ka jawab.......
sach kahti hu dost....... yah kalaam se maie bhi ootni hi anjaan rahi hu jitne aap sab. kaafi hairaani maie iska janam huaa hai. bas ... oos pal zindgi maie milae saare dost itne yaad aa gaye... to ..... likh liya.
mushi dost se tum fir sahmat huae ho... jaroor koshish rahegi meri k kuchh khushnuma likhu. yakin rakhna dil se nahi haari hu. aur na hi dukhi hu... yah to vidhata ne kuchh likhwa diya. to mere sar aankho par hi rahega yah safar... sahi hai na?
   
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13th October 2003, 11:12 AM

chaandost,
tumhaare sathh maie bhi sahmat hu dost..... yah meena muje bhi ajnabi hi lagi thhi. par yah bhi ek sachhai jaisa mahesoos kiya thha... warna yah ahesaas kaise aate? par tumne jab kaha k maie agar maut par likhu to woh bhi khushnuma ho... to kuchh poorani rachna arz karti hu.....
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Khub pyaar kiya zindgi ko
Maut ko bhi ab chahne do
Aaj hamae ab marne do
Sada tum pyaar karte rahae
Zindgi ko ras se bharte rahae
Maut ko yunh n thhukraao
Oose bhi khushnuma ban ne do
Aaj hamae ab marne do
Haal hamne khub behaal kiyae
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Aaj hamae ab marne do.
   
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13th October 2003, 02:58 PM

hi meena g
how r u?
mujhay malom hay aap kisi ko stane k liye use taklif nahin deti
magar aap ka stana bohat taklif deta hay....
sorry bahna sorry


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kis baat ki sorry kahte ho bahna ko? aapne bahna kaha oosi wakt maie has padi hu... ab dekhna yah bahna jaldi hi thhik ho jaayegi. apna khayal rakhna.
   
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paplu popatji,
mitr........ shu kahu tanae? je kahyu te ae swikari lidhhu chahe maie.
yaar ... maie aa to vicharyu j n hatu k maut ne pan hu kash m kash ma muki saku.... lol.
jokae college na divso ma kyaak lakhyu hatu maie....... [ jokae manae ae n hati khabar k mane j kahewa maate koik mari j paase thhi lakhawi gayu.... lol]

chhupaai ne tamari ghanaeri julfo ma...
maut ne pan nakhshu ek waar bhulawo ma.
   
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henna,
tum bhi na......... didi ki taarif karne se kaha thhakti ho.
   
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kshitiz dost,
aapki baate ..... aapka gussaa..... aapka hukum sab sar aankho pe mere.......
jaroor aisi koshish rahegi meri ke aainda aisa kalaam na likha jaaye. ab has bhi do.
   
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