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Sad Wo Chaand - 12th January 2004, 05:50 PM

Wo 'Chaand' tere khatir na tha shaayad
Jise abtak apna sa jaana tha,
Wo teri hadoN se hokar to gujara tha
Par shayad tu, uska thikaana na tha,

Mat mooNd in baavri palkoN ko
Phir koi naya khwaab dikha deiNgi,
Wo nami jo badi mushkiloN se daba rakhi hai
Ye aankheiN, aansu banakar, baha deiNgi

Mujhe khabar hai tu Khuda nahi ho sakta
Dil me dard ho koi muskuraata rahe phir bhi,
Par jamaana bada bedard ho chala hai paagal
Iske aage to khulkar, tu ro bhi nahi sakta,

Ab na kehna ey jamaane ke ey Chaand
Tum eise to na nazar aate the,
Roshni ne hi banaye haiN, mere chehre par ye dhab.be
Warna ham to amaavas me bhi muskuraate the.


Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.

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12th January 2004, 07:33 PM

Pehle ek gana hojaaye? Mera chaand mujhe aaya hein nazar aye raat zara tham tham ke gujaar.......Aise hi likhdee. Mujhe bohot pasand hein yeh gana. Hope you like it too. I think I will write another one. Kuch aise hein, Gum ki andheri raat meh dilko na bekarar kar subha zaroor ayegi subha ka intezar kar, gum ki andheri raat meh.......yeh bhi aapne sune honge. I know you did. Likhte aap hamesha achha hein, aur keya kehna. Shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.


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13th January 2004, 11:20 AM

chaand dost,
Wo 'Chaand' tere khatir na tha shaayad
Jise abtak apna sa jaana tha,
Wo teri hadoN se hokar to gujara tha
Par shayad tu, uska thikaana na tha,


jo n mera thha, n kabhi ho sakta hai;
oose paane ki tammanna kyun hai?


Mat mooNd in baavri palkoN ko
Phir koi naya khwaab dikha deiNgi,
Wo nami jo badi mushkiloN se daba rakhi hai
Ye aankheiN, aansu banakar, baha deiNgi


palko ne meri jo sapne sanjoyae thhae kabhi,
ab pathher se ho gaye hai, jin maie nami thhi kabhi
ab yah bahenge to meri hi aankh ko kanch se chubhenge.




Mujhe khabar hai tu Khuda nahi ho sakta
Dil me dard ho koi muskuraata rahe phir bhi,
Par jamaana bada bedard ho chala hai paagal
Iske aage to khulkar, tu ro bhi nahi sakta,


jivan maie aise pal aa hi jaate hai
ghum chhupakar mushkurana aa hi jata hai

Ab na kehna ey jamaane ke ey Chaand
Tum eise to na nazar aate the,
Roshni ne hi banaye haiN, mere chehre par ye dhab.be
Warna ham to amaavas me bhi muskuraate the.


iise dhhbae na kaho aye chhand....
aksar roshan jo karta hai jamaane ko...
khud ko tabaah karta hai wohi...

bahot khun likha hai tumne....... hamesha ki tarah...
   
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13th January 2004, 07:15 PM

chaand ji ek hi baat keh sakta hoon ki

kis haseen shauq se hota hai yeh aandaaz-e-bayaan
tere har lafz mein chaadni si nazar aati hai
luft hota hai nashe jaise teri mehfil mein
har aada 'chaand' ban ke chamak jaati

chaand ji bahut alag sa hi luft hai aapke likhne mein pasand aaya..likhte rahiyega

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13th January 2004, 07:30 PM

kis haseen shauq se hota hai yeh aandaaz-e-bayaan
tere har lafz mein chaadni si nazar aati hai
luft hota hai nashe jaise teri mehfil mein
har aada 'chaand' ban ke chamak jaati
Wah, bohot khub kaha hein aapne. Aapko mein aur keya kahu?
Likhte rahiyega. Shukriya. Take care. God bless you.


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13th January 2004, 07:47 PM

shukriya shimul aapko pasand aaya aacha laga aasha hai chaand ji ko bhi pasand aaye..

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13th January 2004, 07:57 PM

Chaand Jee ko zaroor pasand ayega. Mujhe agar pasand aya toh Chaand Jee ko bhi pasand ani chahiye, kyu? Just kidding. But I know he will like it too. Thanks. Take care. God bless you.


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Shukriya DostoN - 13th January 2004, 09:29 PM

Shimul ji ye aapka geetoN se reply ka andaaz mujhe achha lagta hai, shukriya tahe dil se meri is post par apne khayaalat pesh karne ke liye.

Meenaji, meri is koshish ko apne khoobsoorat se mashwaroN se sajaane ke liye tahe dil se shukriya, aapki ye baateiN bhi bahut kaam aaeNgi.

Mast ji, ye Naacheez aapka bhi tahe dil se shukrgujaar hai na sirf isliye ke aapne meri is post ko parha, saraaha balki aapki is jawaabi reply ne mujhe laa jawaab kar diya hai, wakai bahut khoobsoorat likha hai aapne.

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13th January 2004, 09:43 PM

Shukriya. (I know you like it), Just kidding. Aap toh aise hi kehdete hein. Haan, mein koi shayar toh nehi, right? Likhte rahiyega. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.


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14th January 2004, 03:34 AM

Dear Meena Jee, keisi hein aap? Hope you are well. Aapne toh kamal kardee. Jo likhdiye aapne.
iise dhhbae na kaho aye chhand....
aksar roshan jo karta hai jamaane ko...
khud ko tabaah karta hai wohi...
Specially above lines. Likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless you.


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14th January 2004, 08:58 AM

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Dear Meena Jee, keisi hein aap? Hope you are well. Aapne toh kamal kardee. Jo likhdiye aapne.
iise dhhbae na kaho aye chhand....
aksar roshan jo karta hai jamaane ko...
khud ko tabaah karta hai wohi...
Specially above lines. Likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless you.
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14th January 2004, 07:06 PM

Dear Meena Jee, achha laga yeh jaankar ke aap thikh hein. Yes I know. Ishi liye hi toh mujhe bohot achha laga. Aur yeh kamal bhi sabke baash meh thori hi hoti hein? Aap khush rahe aur hamesha humare paas rahe yeh duwao ke sath izajat chahti hu. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.


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