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Question imtihan - 6th May 2004, 01:20 PM

Koi dil ke karib hokar bhi anjan hai,
Pyar ke is sagar mein bhi har lamha bejan hai.
Aisa to kuch manga bhi nahi tha humne,
Fhir kyun ye zindagi pal pal le rahi imtihan hai..... ?


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hello - 7th May 2004, 02:08 PM

Dear,

ab samajh nahi aa raha hai ki wah wah likhu ya apani mook sahamti vyakt keru..bahut pyara sher aapne pesh kiye hain... mujhe achchha laga...likhati rahiye


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7th May 2004, 04:44 PM

thnx Akant for ur response.....u have encouraged me. thnx


Kahan ja rahe the kahan aa gaye hum
Yeh kaisi duniya, kaisi khushiyaan kaisa hai gum
Na Koi rasta hai,na koi manjil,na koi humdum
jane kyuin fir bhi chale ja rahe hai ..chale ja rahe hai hum....
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7th May 2004, 05:08 PM

Hi shruti ,

bahut bahut bahut acchha likha hai aapne.............
i liked the second sher a lot.......
keep writing.........bye n take care


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7th May 2004, 06:09 PM

Nice Words! First one is really cool.. Keep up the good work...


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agar zindagi hamara - 8th May 2004, 05:15 PM

pyare dost ...

agar zindagi hamara imtihaan nahi legi to hume ye kaise pata chelga ki humara apna kon hai aour praya kon...humari zindagi main abhi bahut se more aayenge un moro per hume sambalana hoga ...aour aap tabi sambal sakte hai jab aap iske liye tayar hoge ...aour bina imthihaan ke ye kaise pata chelga ki aap tayar ho gaye hai...

allways happyyyyyyy


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Cool 11th May 2004, 12:07 PM

jeeta ja jeena hai....
hansta jaa hasna hai...

ana tha tau aya tha....
janey sey kyon darta hai...


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Arrow 11th May 2004, 12:14 PM

jo hona tha ho gaya...
jo hona hai wo hoga....

jo milna tha wo mil gaya...
tu pareshaan hoga tau bhi kuchh na hoga....

manga bahut tab bhi bhagwaan nei kuch na diya
tu kaam karega tab hi kuchh hoga ....


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aapke liye - 11th May 2004, 12:30 PM

In Udaas Muskurahaton Ke Peeche,
Ghum Ke Railay Hain
Ab Tumhain Kya Batayain,
Ke Tum Bin Hum Kitne Akele Hain

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11th May 2004, 12:30 PM

In sachaion ko manne ko ye dil nahi manta hai
ye dil to sirf har pal ek nai ummede karna janta hai
khushiyan gam haqiqat kismat sab manjoor hai hame
fir bhi ye dil to har pal sirf apne sathi ka sath hi mangta hai.


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11th May 2004, 12:33 PM

in ankhon ne sath chor diya hai
har jagah bahna shuru kar deti hai
dil to humne kaboo mein kar liya tha
per kambakht ye aanhein kahna shuru kar deti hai


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zindagi ka intihaan - 11th May 2004, 12:37 PM

hi shruti

zindagi imthaan isliye letu hain kyuki..
safar zindagi ka manzil mein rukta nahin hai,
bas thikana badalta raheta hai.
sirf manzil mein hi to kushi milti hai,
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11th May 2004, 12:53 PM

Koi dil ke karib hokar bhi anjan hai,
Pyar ke is sagar mein bhi har lamha bejan hai.
Aisa to kuch manga bhi nahi tha humne,
Fhir kyun ye zindagi pal pal le rahi imtihan hai..... ?


mangne se dene wala sirf bhagwan hai..
zindagee ka naa hi to imtihaan hai..
kuch aur kya kahoo..

dil ke kareeb hai wo nadan hai.
samay se balwan
kun , aur kahan hain


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12th May 2004, 02:09 PM

Mana dene vala Bhagvan hai
par mahsoos karne vala insaan hai
mana vaqt balwaan hai
par vaqt ke sath chalne vala insaan hai


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Love Imtihan - 12th May 2004, 02:59 PM

wah kya khoob likha hai aapne,
aisey hee likhtey rahiay.

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koi ata hai....koi jata hai.........
par kay ye sab koi har kisi ko batata hai...

jevan tau dariya hai...
aisey hi chalta jata hai....



WAH WAH...KYA BAAT HAI MERI !!!


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12th May 2004, 05:00 PM

Apni ichaon ka bahaav nahi rakha to
ye dariyan us par tumhe bha le jayega
us par bahut dard bhari dunia hai
..itna dukh tumse sha nahi jayega


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13th May 2004, 12:50 PM

hi guys an shrutiji kaise ho aap log?

arz kiya hain kisi mashhoor shayar ne..

Maut hi bas ek zindagi ka humsafar hai !
Aaj woh tere pichhe hai kal tere samne hoga !!
Rooh se judi teri ye zindagi ka safar hai !
Aaj woh tere saath hai kal tujhse dur hoga !!

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Yeh aapka address to bohat ajeeb sa hai
kahin aap Hoor / Pari to nahi???


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Compuer Profeesional ho kar aap shayri likh rahi ho
koi programme bhi likha karo na yaar
   
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Ankhon se door door, Dil ke paas paas,
Har lamha judai ka gum ,
Har lamha milne ki aas.
   
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17th May 2004, 07:32 PM

Ab to tanhaiyan bhi sath nahi deti...
Apno ke sath kaise soche
Haqiqat itni karvi hoti ja rahi hai....
Sapno ke bat kaise soche..........


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26th May 2004, 10:48 AM

yep....in parallel to progarmming i do shayri's....


compuetr professional hai to kya hua............ hamare pas dil bhi hai
ye aankhen computer screen dekhti hai....to ye aankhen katilo ki katil bhi hai


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8th June 2004, 11:24 AM

Mere sath hokar bhi Tu mere sath kyuin nahi hai......
Pyar hai....... ..fir bhi pyar vali bat kyuin nahi hai


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Love h! shruts - 8th June 2004, 02:39 PM

Hi shruts,


thnks a lot shruts tht was all about my l!fe.......!!!

Tnks also for making those words which really means a lot

to me and i was looking for those words from a long time.


khudahaf!z


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"yep....in parallel to progarmming i do shayri's....
compuetr professional hai to kya hua............ hamare pas dil bhi hai
ye aankhen computer screen dekhti hai....to ye aankhen katilo ki katil bhi hai"


Hi Dil bhi hai tumahre pass???
tumeh kaise pata chala ki tumahre pass Dil bhi hai?
vaise konse colour ka hai tumahra Dil??
hey hey tumahri aankhein Katil hai???
Indian Penal Code ka Section 302 lagaana padega tumahri aankhon par to...
   
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2nd July 2004, 04:03 PM

.............ye Vaqt e halat kis rah par mujhe le laya
peeche jo murke dekha sath bhi na tha mera saya


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3rd July 2004, 12:22 PM

Hi,

Nice Words Shruti....

Programming and Shayris.... Pretty contrasting.....

Am also a multimedia programmer but not creative enough to write shayris... but yeah... Computer Professionals have heart too...

but I must say.. Your shayris are good .....

Neways.. TC... and keep writing


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19th October 2004, 09:06 AM

har pal badal gaya hai.......
......ab tanhai ka sath apna nahi lagta
khushain haqiqat ban gai hai....
..........ab koi sapna ..sapna nahi lagta...


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