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Thumbs up usne jab.....baat ki - 27th August 2004, 01:09 AM

us ne jab tyorii badal kar baat kii
miT ga_ii duniyaa merii jazbaat kii

tum ne shiishe pe jhuk kar baat kii
vo uThii kaalii ghaTaa barasaat kii

dil kii dha.Dakan ba.D rahii hai har nafas
tez hai raftaar paiGaamaat kii

tum mere duniyaa merii uqbaa merii
ab kamii mujh ko bhalaa kis baat kii

ro diye ham dekh kar suu-e-falak
us ne ha.Ns kar jab kisii se baat kii
   
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Re: usne jab.....baat ki - 27th August 2004, 12:50 PM

us ne jab tyorii badal kar baat kii
miT ga_ii duniyaa merii jazbaat kii

tum ne shiishe pe jhuk kar baat kii
vo uThii kaalii ghaTaa barasaat kii

ro diye ham dekh kar suu-e-falak
us ne ha.Ns kar jab kisii se baat kii

dear pappu bhai
bahoooooot khoob !!!bahoot acha likha hai dost aapne,,,ek maasoomiyat aur sachai hai aapke kalaam mein,,,,khaas kar antim sher to dil mein utar gaya,,,,aapke jazbaat aapki gazal se saaf chalakte hai....dua hai aap sada khush raho aur aabaad raho....apna khayal rakhiye...HAMARI DAAD kubool kijiye
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27th August 2004, 09:30 PM

Dear Manojbhai,

thanks bhai. aap ne read kya vo hi mere liye sab-kuch hai.
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28th August 2004, 06:46 PM

us ne jab tyorii badal kar baat kii
miT ga_ii duniyaa merii jazbaat kii

tum ne shiishe pe jhuk kar baat kii
vo uThii kaalii ghaTaa barasaat kii

dil kii dha.Dakan ba.D rahii hai har nafas
tez hai raftaar paiGaamaat kii

tum mere duniyaa merii uqbaa merii
ab kamii mujh ko bhalaa kis baat kii

ro diye ham dekh kar suu-e-falak
us ne ha.Ns kar jab kisii se baat kii
wah pappu ji!
apne to sachmuch kamaal ker diya......
ek ek sher dil me utar gaya,,kitni asani se apne dil ki baat keh di,,,
yun hi likhte rahiye.....


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