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lo munh chupane aur lajane agaye - 15th November 2006, 06:12 PM

mere pyare dosto

ek aur ghazal aap logon ki nazr kar rahun.
eh bhi ummid hai ke pasand ayegi.

jin logon ne mere kalaam ko padha aur
meri sarahana ki main un sabhi doston ka teh dil
se shukriya ada karta hun.

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lo munh chupane aur lajane agaye
oh asl men hans ne hansane agaye

qatil ada tikhi nazar shirin zaban
har rang oh mujh pe jamane agaye
shirin- Sweet

tum paas aao baith kar lazzat bhi lo
hum sher fursat se sunane agaye
lazzat- Taste

ab doston se kya takalluf sharm kya
oh bhi to apna gham bhulane agaye
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pehlu men unko dekh kar mujh ko laga
phir mouj masti ke zamane agaye
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meri wafa par gar bharosa hai tumhen
keh do mujhe apna banane agaye

hum zindegi ke ek ek pal ko yahan
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jab ilteja bose ki main ne ki kaha
phir aaj ban ke tum diwane agaye
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yeh hai nahin mayoos hone ki ghadi
har gham tumhara hum mitane agaye
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tum par fida hain aur rahen ge yun sada
yeh baat dil ki hum batane agaye

bin kuch kahe oh muskurakar chup rahe
honton pe jab dil ke fasane agaye
fasana- Story

tum aazmalo is pe hum ko bhi zara
hum pyar ki rasmen nibhane agaye

Parwaaz jana maikada tum chod do
oh jaam aankhon se pilane agaye
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15th November 2006, 06:32 PM

meree dost mujeeb ji adaab aur namskaar

bahot hi khub likhte ho dost
har bar kuch alag sa hota hai aapki peshkas me

achha laga ise bhi padhke mere dost

pehlu men unko dekh kar mujh ko laga
phir mouj masti ke zamane agaye

yeh hai nahin mayoos hone ki ghadi
har gham tumhara hum mitane agaye


ye do sher mujhe bahot pasand aaye

is peshkas ke liye dil se nikli daad kubul kijiyenga

khus rahiye

apna khayal rakhiye

aapka dost
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16th November 2006, 11:41 AM

Dear Dhavalji,

aapne is Ghazal ko padha, mehsoos kia aur iski nazakat samjhi...mujhe behad khushi hui.
main aap ka sada mashkoor rahunga.

aap ka dost
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16th November 2006, 11:57 AM

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mere pyare dosto

ek aur ghazal aap logon ki nazr kar rahun.
eh bhi ummid hai ke pasand ayegi.

jin logon ne mere kalaam ko padha aur
meri sarahana ki main un sabhi doston ka teh dil
se shukriya ada karta hun.

---------------------------------

lo munh chupane aur lajane agaye
oh asl men hans ne hansane agaye

qatil ada tikhi nazar shirin zaban
har rang oh mujh pe jamane agaye
shirin- Sweet

tum paas aao baith kar lazzat bhi lo
hum sher fursat se sunane agaye
lazzat- Taste

ab doston se kya takalluf sharm kya
oh bhi to apna gham bhulane agaye
takalluf- Formality

pehlu men unko dekh kar mujh ko laga
phir mouj masti ke zamane agaye
pehlu- Side

meri wafa par gar bharosa hai tumhen
keh do mujhe apna banane agaye

hum zindegi ke ek ek pal ko yahan
rahe muhabbat men lutane agaye

jab ilteja bose ki main ne ki kaha
phir aaj ban ke tum diwane agaye
ilteja- Request
bosa- Kiss

yeh hai nahin mayoos hone ki ghadi
har gham tumhara hum mitane agaye
mayoos- Worried

tum par fida hain aur rahen ge yun sada
yeh baat dil ki hum batane agaye

bin kuch kahe oh muskurakar chup rahe
honton pe jab dil ke fasane agaye
fasana- Story

tum aazmalo is pe hum ko bhi zara
hum pyar ki rasmen nibhane agaye

Parwaaz jana maikada tum chod do
oh jaam aankhon se pilane agaye
maikada- Bar

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Parwaaz Ji namaskaaR

bahut badiya likha hai aapne, kuch sher to bahut hi acchey baney hai.n yu hi likhtey rahiye aur es mahfil ko kushnuma banatey rahiye.

aapki dost


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Sunitaji...aap ka bohut bohut shukriya.
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mujibji namskaar,
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mere pyare dosto

ek aur ghazal aap logon ki nazr kar rahun.
eh bhi ummid hai ke pasand ayegi.

jin logon ne mere kalaam ko padha aur
meri sarahana ki main un sabhi doston ka teh dil
se shukriya ada karta hun.

---------------------------------

lo munh chupane aur lajane agaye
oh asl men hans ne hansane agaye

qatil ada tikhi nazar shirin zaban
har rang oh mujh pe jamane agaye
shirin- Sweet

tum paas aao baith kar lazzat bhi lo
hum sher fursat se sunane agaye
lazzat- Taste

ab doston se kya takalluf sharm kya
oh bhi to apna gham bhulane agaye
takalluf- Formality

pehlu men unko dekh kar mujh ko laga
phir mouj masti ke zamane agaye
pehlu- Side

meri wafa par gar bharosa hai tumhen
keh do mujhe apna banane agaye

hum zindegi ke ek ek pal ko yahan
rahe muhabbat men lutane agaye

jab ilteja bose ki main ne ki kaha
phir aaj ban ke tum diwane agaye
ilteja- Request
bosa- Kiss

yeh hai nahin mayoos hone ki ghadi
har gham tumhara hum mitane agaye
mayoos- Worried

tum par fida hain aur rahen ge yun sada
yeh baat dil ki hum batane agaye

bin kuch kahe oh muskurakar chup rahe
honton pe jab dil ke fasane agaye
fasana- Story

tum aazmalo is pe hum ko bhi zara
hum pyar ki rasmen nibhane agaye

Parwaaz jana maikada tum chod do
oh jaam aankhon se pilane agaye
maikada- Bar

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mere pyare dosto

ek aur ghazal aap logon ki nazr kar rahun.
eh bhi ummid hai ke pasand ayegi.

jin logon ne mere kalaam ko padha aur
meri sarahana ki main un sabhi doston ka teh dil
se shukriya ada karta hun.

---------------------------------

lo munh chupane aur lajane agaye
oh asl men hans ne hansane agaye

qatil ada tikhi nazar shirin zaban
har rang oh mujh pe jamane agaye
shirin- Sweet

tum paas aao baith kar lazzat bhi lo
hum sher fursat se sunane agaye
lazzat- Taste

ab doston se kya takalluf sharm kya
oh bhi to apna gham bhulane agaye
takalluf- Formality

pehlu men unko dekh kar mujh ko laga
phir mouj masti ke zamane agaye
pehlu- Side

meri wafa par gar bharosa hai tumhen
keh do mujhe apna banane agaye

hum zindegi ke ek ek pal ko yahan
rahe muhabbat men lutane agaye

jab ilteja bose ki main ne ki kaha
phir aaj ban ke tum diwane agaye
ilteja- Request
bosa- Kiss

yeh hai nahin mayoos hone ki ghadi
har gham tumhara hum mitane agaye
mayoos- Worried

tum par fida hain aur rahen ge yun sada
yeh baat dil ki hum batane agaye

bin kuch kahe oh muskurakar chup rahe
honton pe jab dil ke fasane agaye
fasana- Story

tum aazmalo is pe hum ko bhi zara
hum pyar ki rasmen nibhane agaye

Parwaaz jana maikada tum chod do
oh jaam aankhon se pilane agaye
maikada- Bar

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