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Hamari dosti acchi thi! - 27th July 2007, 01:29 PM

Yeh kavita maine nahin likhi ......kahi padhi thi...so aap sab ke saath share kar rahin hoon......


Hamari dosti acchi thi!
Kaash isey rishtey ka naam na diya hota
Sahare ke liye mile daman ko dekh,
Kaash tumhara haath tham na liya hota,
Ankhon se behte apne dard ko chupane ke liye,
Kaash tumhari bahon me sama na gaye hote
Tumhare chune bhar se hi......
Kaash hum sharma na gaye hote...
Sagar ki lehro ko dekh tumhare saath sapne sanjoye na hote
Tumhare haathon ki chuan se.........
Kaash yeh hoth thartharaye na hote,
Anjaam jaante hue bhi
Kaash hum us raah ke rahi kehlaye na hote,
Yahi soch soch kar khud ko koste hain aaj
Ki kaash yeh sab na hua hota,
Tab to sirf tanhai ki boond thi,par..
Ab yeh tanhai ka samundar na hota........!


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Yeh kavita maine nahin likhi ......kahi padhi thi...so aap sab ke saath share kar rahin hoon......


Hamari dosti acchi thi!
Kaash isey rishtey ka naam na diya hota
Sahare ke liye mile daman ko dekh,
Kaash tumhara haath tham na liya hota,
Ankhon se behte apne dard ko chupane ke liye,
Kaash tumhari bahon me sama na gaye hote
Tumhare chune bhar se hi......
Kaash hum sharma na gaye hote...
Sagar ki lehro ko dekh tumhare saath sapne sanjoye na hote
Tumhare haathon ki chuan se.........
Kaash yeh hoth thartharaye na hote,
Anjaam jaante hue bhi
Kaash hum us raah ke rahi kehlaye na hote,
Yahi soch soch kar khud ko koste hain aaj
Ki kaash yeh sab na hua hota,
Tab to sirf tanhai ki boond thi,par..
Ab yeh tanhai ka samundar na hota........!
MAUSAM ji ko mera aadab bahut hi umda kalam likha hai ek ek ashar apne men umda hai unhi likhti rahiye apko padna hamesha hi accha lagta hai .............khush rahiye apna khayal rakhiye...........aap ka dost


"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"


Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
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27th July 2007, 02:39 PM

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Yeh kavita maine nahin likhi ......kahi padhi thi...so aap sab ke saath share kar rahin hoon......


Hamari dosti acchi thi!
Kaash isey rishtey ka naam na diya hota
Sahare ke liye mile daman ko dekh,
Kaash tumhara haath tham na liya hota,
Ankhon se behte apne dard ko chupane ke liye,
Kaash tumhari bahon me sama na gaye hote
Tumhare chune bhar se hi......
Kaash hum sharma na gaye hote...
Sagar ki lehro ko dekh tumhare saath sapne sanjoye na hote
Tumhare haathon ki chuan se.........
Kaash yeh hoth thartharaye na hote,
Anjaam jaante hue bhi
Kaash hum us raah ke rahi kehlaye na hote,
Yahi soch soch kar khud ko koste hain aaj
Ki kaash yeh sab na hua hota,
Tab to sirf tanhai ki boond thi,par..
Ab yeh tanhai ka samundar na hota........!

wah wah kia zabaerdast nazam share ki hai mausam di ......

Anjaam jaante hue bhi
Kaash hum us raah ke rahi kehlaye na hote,
Yahi soch soch kar khud ko koste hain aaj
Ki kaash yeh sab na hua hota,
Tab to sirf tanhai ki boond thi,par..
Ab yeh tanhai ka samundar na hota.........


hmmm thanks di aapne yahan share ki aur humain bhi parrhne ka moqa mila bohat achi lagi


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Ki kaash yeh sab na hua hota,
Tab to sirf tanhai ki boond thi,par..
Ab yeh tanhai ka samundar na hota........!


Bahot Khuub...!

aik achchhi teHreer aapne hum sab ke saath Share kii hay... aise hi achchhii kosiShoN ko baaNTte rahiYe...

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

jai mata di

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MAUSAM ji ko mera aadab bahut hi umda kalam likha hai ek ek ashar apne men umda hai unhi likhti rahiye apko padna hamesha hi accha lagta hai .............khush rahiye apna khayal rakhiye...........aap ka dost
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Aadab mausam jI...

Behad khoobsurat kavita share ki hai aapne... Bohot bohot shukriyah...

Apna khayal rakhe...

Ijazat...

Apka Dost...

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daer mausam....sacchi mein bahut acchey ahsaas hai, bahut gahrei baatey hai.n....bas samjne ki baat hai....dil ko chu gaye yeh kavita....umeed hai aagey bhi tum aapni pasand hum sab ke saath share karti rahogi.....kush raho

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Yeh kavita maine nahin likhi ......kahi padhi thi...so aap sab ke saath share kar rahin hoon......


Hamari dosti acchi thi!
Kaash isey rishtey ka naam na diya hota
Sahare ke liye mile daman ko dekh,
Kaash tumhara haath tham na liya hota,
Ankhon se behte apne dard ko chupane ke liye,
Kaash tumhari bahon me sama na gaye hote
Tumhare chune bhar se hi......
Kaash hum sharma na gaye hote...
Sagar ki lehro ko dekh tumhare saath sapne sanjoye na hote
Tumhare haathon ki chuan se.........
Kaash yeh hoth thartharaye na hote,
Anjaam jaante hue bhi
Kaash hum us raah ke rahi kehlaye na hote,
Yahi soch soch kar khud ko koste hain aaj
Ki kaash yeh sab na hua hota,
Tab to sirf tanhai ki boond thi,par..
Ab yeh tanhai ka samundar na hota........!
Mausam jee;

paRh kar la-jawaab ho gaya maiN aur deemaagh sunn.. ham se yeh nazm baaNTane ke liye Shukriyah! yuuN hii likhate rahiye aur apna Khayaal rakhiye...

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Yeh kavita maine nahin likhi ......kahi padhi thi...so aap sab ke saath share kar rahin hoon......


Hamari dosti acchi thi!
Kaash isey rishtey ka naam na diya hota
Sahare ke liye mile daman ko dekh,
Kaash tumhara haath tham na liya hota,
Ankhon se behte apne dard ko chupane ke liye,
Kaash tumhari bahon me sama na gaye hote
Tumhare chune bhar se hi......
Kaash hum sharma na gaye hote...
Sagar ki lehro ko dekh tumhare saath sapne sanjoye na hote
Tumhare haathon ki chuan se.........
Kaash yeh hoth thartharaye na hote,
Anjaam jaante hue bhi
Kaash hum us raah ke rahi kehlaye na hote,
Yahi soch soch kar khud ko koste hain aaj
Ki kaash yeh sab na hua hota,
Tab to sirf tanhai ki boond thi,par..
Ab yeh tanhai ka samundar na hota........!
hi mausam ji kaise hai aap .aap ki nazm padhi bahut pyaari hai,ham aap ke sjukragujaar hai jo aap ne yeh naginaa hamaare saath share kiyaa, padh kar aisa lagaa jaise aap apne dil ki baat bayaaN kar rahe hai, koi gustaakhi hui ho to maufi chahtaa hoon, yunhi aati rahiyega mahotarma aur aise hi khoobsoorat kalaam laati rahiyega ,aur hame padhane ka maukaa deti rahiyega, khudaa aap ko aur hunarmand karen , "AAMIN"

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wah wah kia zabaerdast nazam share ki hai mausam di ......

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Kaash hum us raah ke rahi kehlaye na hote,
Yahi soch soch kar khud ko koste hain aaj
Ki kaash yeh sab na hua hota,
Tab to sirf tanhai ki boond thi,par..
Ab yeh tanhai ka samundar na hota.........


hmmm thanks di aapne yahan share ki aur humain bhi parrhne ka moqa mila bohat achi lagi
Thanks mani is nazm ko itna pasand karne ke liye......


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Bahot Khuub...!

aik achchhi teHreer aapne hum sab ke saath Share kii hay... aise hi achchhii kosiShoN ko baaNTte rahiYe...

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

jai mata di

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jai mata di ....shaitaan........

tumhe yeh koshish aachi algi ..mogambo khus hua.............

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Yeh kavita maine nahin likhi ......kahi padhi thi...so aap sab ke saath share kar rahin hoon......


Hamari dosti acchi thi!
Kaash isey rishtey ka naam na diya hota
Sahare ke liye mile daman ko dekh,
Kaash tumhara haath tham na liya hota,
Ankhon se behte apne dard ko chupane ke liye,
Kaash tumhari bahon me sama na gaye hote
Tumhare chune bhar se hi......
Kaash hum sharma na gaye hote..
Sagar ki lehro ko dekh tumhare saath sapne sanjoye na hote
Tumhare haathon ki chuan se.........
Kaash yeh hoth thartharaye na hote,
Anjaam jaante hue bhi
Kaash hum us raah ke rahi kehlaye na hote,
Yahi soch soch kar khud ko koste hain aaj
Ki kaash yeh sab na hua hota,
Tab to sirf tanhai ki boond thi,par..
Ab yeh tanhai ka samundar na hota........!

hey MAUSAM,
bahut bahut bahut bahut ache ehsaas hai..........KAASH....................beautiful feelings......keep it up..........take care..........
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LAMHA.............



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Behad khoobsurat kavita share ki hai aapne... Bohot bohot shukriyah...

Apna khayal rakhe...

Ijazat...

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Abrar...
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AApko yeh nazm aachi lagi jaankar khushi hui..........

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daer mausam....sacchi mein bahut acchey ahsaas hai, bahut gahrei baatey hai.n....bas samjne ki baat hai....dil ko chu gaye yeh kavita....umeed hai aagey bhi tum aapni pasand hum sab ke saath share karti rahogi.....kush raho

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hi mausam ji kaise hai aap .aap ki nazm padhi bahut pyaari hai,ham aap ke sjukragujaar hai jo aap ne yeh naginaa hamaare saath share kiyaa, padh kar aisa lagaa jaise aap apne dil ki baat bayaaN kar rahe hai, koi gustaakhi hui ho to maufi chahtaa hoon, yunhi aati rahiyega mahotarma aur aise hi khoobsoorat kalaam laati rahiyega ,aur hame padhane ka maukaa deti rahiyega, khudaa aap ko aur hunarmand karen , "AAMIN"

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hey MAUSAM,
bahut bahut bahut bahut ache ehsaas hai..........KAASH....................beautiful feelings......keep it up..........take care..........
aap ki dost,
LAMHA.............



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AApko yeh ehsaas pasand aaye.....shukriya......

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wow, wha a great poem to share mausam ji. thnx 4 sharing it wid us. really gud collection u have. keep sharing.....
....yeah it is one of my fav poems.....I am pleased that u liked it....

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Vakaii, ek bahut khubsurat kavita hai...!

Thanks for sharing, Mausam Ji...!



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nice - 2nd August 2007, 07:51 PM

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Yeh kavita maine nahin likhi ......kahi padhi thi...so aap sab ke saath share kar rahin hoon......


Hamari dosti acchi thi!
Kaash isey rishtey ka naam na diya hota
Sahare ke liye mile daman ko dekh,
Kaash tumhara haath tham na liya hota,
Ankhon se behte apne dard ko chupane ke liye,
Kaash tumhari bahon me sama na gaye hote
Tumhare chune bhar se hi......
Kaash hum sharma na gaye hote...
Sagar ki lehro ko dekh tumhare saath sapne sanjoye na hote
Tumhare haathon ki chuan se.........
Kaash yeh hoth thartharaye na hote,
Anjaam jaante hue bhi
Kaash hum us raah ke rahi kehlaye na hote,
Yahi soch soch kar khud ko koste hain aaj
Ki kaash yeh sab na hua hota,
Tab to sirf tanhai ki boond thi,par..
Ab yeh tanhai ka samundar na hota........!
mausam ji ko raj ka adaab.....aapki nazam dil ke taaron ko harkat c de gayii.....sach mein bhut pyare ehsaas hain sach mein dosti ko rishte ke bandhan mein nahi bandhna chihye,is lajawaab nazam par meri dil se daad pesh hai.......raj.......


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ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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Vakaii, ek bahut khubsurat kavita hai...!

Thanks for sharing, Mausam Ji...!

Shukriya dannyjeee.....

Is kavita ko pasand karne ke liye!

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mausam ji ko raj ka adaab.....aapki nazam dil ke taaron ko harkat c de gayii.....sach mein bhut pyare ehsaas hain sach mein dosti ko rishte ke bandhan mein nahi bandhna chihye,is lajawaab nazam par meri dil se daad pesh hai.......raj.......
rajji ko mausam ka salam.... ya yeah kavita hi kuch aisi hain....ki kuch mehsus kiye bina reh hi nahin sakte......ha kabhi kabhi rishte badalne se bahut takleef hoti hain par kya kiya jaaye....asie waqt main aakal kaam thodina karti hain..iss kavita ko sarahne ka shukriya

apna khyal rakhna...
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