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Love Sochte-Sochte.................. - 13th October 2007, 11:30 PM

Ek aanshu gira sochte sochte !
Yaad ye kya aa gaya sochte sochte !!

Kaun tha kya tha wo yaad aata nahi !
Yaad aa jayega magar sochte sochte !!

Jise tasveer latki ho deewar se !
Haal ye ho gaya hai magar sochte sochte !!

Aur Sochne k liye koi rasta nahi !
Main ye kahan aa gaya sochte sochte !!

Faisle k liye ek pal tha bahut !
Ek mausam gaya magar sochte sochte !!

Main to rasme talluk nibhata raha !
Wo bhi milta raha magar sochte sochte !!

"Vishal" ko fikr-e-raat jagati rahi !
"Jaan" aaj wo so gaya magar sochte sochte !!




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A jaan-a-vis tumhe khabhar kya tumhe chahe hum kitna !!
Kabhi kisi deewane sai puchna ki khudha ki bandgi kya hai !!

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27th October 2007, 01:44 AM

Hi aryan kafi achi sayari likhi hai meine aap ke sabhi threads pade hai kaha se liye par jahe se bhi liye good choice


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27th October 2007, 11:09 AM

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Ek aanshu gira sochte sochte !
Yaad ye kya aa gaya sochte sochte !!

Kaun tha kya tha wo yaad aata nahi !
Yaad aa jayega magar sochte sochte !!

Jise tasveer latki ho deewar se !
Haal ye ho gaya hai magar sochte sochte !!

Aur Sochne k liye koi rasta nahi !
Main ye kahan aa gaya sochte sochte !!

Faisle k liye ek pal tha bahut !
Ek mausam gaya magar sochte sochte !!

Main to rasme talluk nibhata raha !
Wo bhi milta raha magar sochte sochte !!

"Vishal" ko fikr-e-raat jagati rahi !
"Jaan" aaj wo so gaya magar sochte sochte !!


bahut khoob..........


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27th October 2007, 01:29 PM

Very nice, Vishal Ji...!

2nd sher is just amazing...!

Yunhi likhte rahein, ok...?

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27th October 2007, 03:53 PM

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Ek aanshu gira sochte sochte !
Yaad ye kya aa gaya sochte sochte !!

Kaun tha kya tha wo yaad aata nahi !
Yaad aa jayega magar sochte sochte !!

Jise tasveer latki ho deewar se !
Haal ye ho gaya hai magar sochte sochte !!

Aur Sochne k liye koi rasta nahi !
Main ye kahan aa gaya sochte sochte !!

Faisle k liye ek pal tha bahut !
Ek mausam gaya magar sochte sochte !!

Main to rasme talluk nibhata raha !
Wo bhi milta raha magar sochte sochte !!

"Vishal" ko fikr-e-raat jagati rahi !
"Jaan" aaj wo so gaya magar sochte sochte !!



wah janab bohat khoob likha hai aapne sochte sochte bohat acha laga parrh ker


Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
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Love thanks - 28th January 2008, 04:42 PM

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Hi aryan kafi achi sayari likhi hai meine aap ke sabhi threads pade hai kaha se liye par jahe se bhi liye good choice

aadab shikha g aapko humare likhe khayal pasand aaye iske liya hum sukargujar hai magar aapko ye kyo laga k ye hamne kahi se liya hai.
ye hamari he kalam se nikle alfaj hai.umind hai aap gaour farmaegi.
sukariya.


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Love thanks - 28th January 2008, 04:43 PM

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Love thanks - 28th January 2008, 04:46 PM

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Very nice, Vishal Ji...!

2nd sher is just amazing...!

Yunhi likhte rahein, ok...?

Reps for you

Sukariya Mushkil g
Aapko hamari koshish pasand aaye
tahe dil se sukriya kabool kiyejie.


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Love thanks - 28th January 2008, 04:50 PM

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wah janab bohat khoob likha hai aapne sochte sochte bohat acha laga parrh ker
Aadab janab aapko haari koshish pasand aaye yahi hamare liye bahut khushi ke baat hai sukhriya.


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Love thanks - 30th January 2008, 05:28 PM

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hey really nice thx a lot when i read it i cry thx for that

Hi Sanjana ji

Thanks for read my thoughts and ur compliment.
i hope aap yaha aate rahege.


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