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bekhudi-nayi ghazal - 5th December 2009, 07:14 AM

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ajnabi men dosti milti hai
bekhudi men bhi khushi milti hai

zindagi ke apne qaa'eden hain
jeene ki illat nayi milti hai

saaqiyaan gar khud pila de to phir
ik nayi si bekhudi milti hai

yah saraab-o-bey hisi ka kya kahna
kaanton men bhi pankhadi milti hai

illat-addiction, reason, motive
saraab-illusion
be-hisi- numbness


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ajnabi men dosti milti hai
bekhudi men bhi khushi milti hai

zindagi ke apne qaa'eden hain
jeene ki illat nayi milti hai

saaqiyaan gar khud pila de to phir
ik nayi si bekhudi milti hai

is saraab-o-bey hisi ka kya kahna
kaanton men bhi pankhadi milti hai

illat-addiction, reason, motive
saraab-illusion
be-hisi- numbness


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9th December 2009, 06:46 PM

kisi ko pasand nahin aya lagta hai....


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ajnabi men dosti milti hai
bekhudi men bhi khushi milti hai

matla thoda kamzor hai bas ......!!

zindagi ke apne qaa'eden hain
jeene ki illat nayi milti hai

kyaa baat hia saheb pasand nahi aaya aisa na kahe ....
utar gaya hai zahan o dil main
bahut hi bethar ...!!

aap delhi se hai ye jaan kar aur bhi khushi huee

is saraab-o-bey hisi ka kya kahna
kaanton men bhi pankhadi milti hai

kyaa baat hai saheb........

jabardast ......!!
umda bahut hi umdaa hai .........!!


likhte rahe roj roj dikhte rahen ..

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kisi ko pasand nahin aya lagta hai....
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kisi ko pasand nahin aya lagta hai....
Baat aisi nahi ki hume pasand nahi aaya, darasal iss post ke baad jab bhi aaye to padha zaroor...aur mukammal hone ke intzaar meiN the....ki tab hi Kuch kahenge....mujhe zyada tazarba nahi hai aur iss style meiN Ghazal shuru karna achha laga Aapka, bas Wahi dekh rahe the....
Baki mere dil ki baat bhi Janumanu saheb ne likh di hai....baki Ghazal ke baare meiN Kuch waqt ke baad kahenge....
Aap apna khayal rakhiye....
Khush rahiye aur likhte rahiye....

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10th December 2009, 06:18 PM

shukriya janumanu aur vikram saheb.....main dilli se tha abhi pardesi hoon.....matla kamzor laga?.....kuchh niji hai.....mujhe kabhi aisa mahsoos huwa is liye likha....


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beher 2122 2122 22

ajnabi men dosti milti hai
bekhudi men bhi khushi milti hai

zindagi ke apne qaa'eden hain
jeene ki illat nayi milti hai

saaqiyaan gar khud pila de to phir
ik nayi si bekhudi milti hai

yah saraab-o-bey hisi ka kya kahna
kaanton men bhi pankhadi milti hai

illat-addiction, reason, motive
saraab-illusion
be-hisi- numbness
acchi koshish hai..........
agee bhi to sunaiye ab.........??

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16th December 2009, 04:27 PM

shukriya zidd sahab............age likhoonga to sunaoonga


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