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' Jiss PanghaT Ne Bujhaayi Thi Pyaas ‘Amanush’ |
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' Jiss PanghaT Ne Bujhaayi Thi Pyaas ‘Amanush’ -
2nd November 2011, 01:45 AM
YuN to har raah ke patthar pe sar maar liyaa
Naam unkaa hi magar humne baar baar liyaa ( n.m ) Dikhaata hai aks magar muNh kholtaa nahiN Shukr hai haNsi uDaana aaine ko aataa nahiN MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN Jiss panghaT ne bujhaayi thi pyaas ‘Amanush’ WahaaN patthar kabhi pheiNkaa kartaa nahiN  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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2nd November 2011, 07:49 AM
Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai
Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN Waah ! Danny Bhaii ... ! Kyaa Kahne ... Khoob Ashaar Kahe HaiN ... Sar Se Paa Tak ... Laajawaab Ghazal Huii ... Umdaa .... BehtreeN Peshkash ... Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad ... !!!  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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2nd November 2011, 11:14 AM
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Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN Ji Bhaut Sunder........... Ji bhaut sahi kaha aapne waqt hi farebi hota hai aur kuch bhi nahi... Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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2nd November 2011, 08:56 PM
Dikhaata hai aks magar muNh kholtaa nahiN
Shukr hai haNsi uDaana aaine ko aataa nahiN Waah chachaajaan... Matle ne hi qatl kar diyaa aage kyaa khaak jaa paaenge... Subhan Allah.... Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN behad khoobsurat saa sher kaha hai janaab.. ise padhkar kuch yaad aa raha hai shaayad likhaa tha kabhi... Wo khat me to Poochaa kareN haal Dil ka, Mile hain to AankheN Churaane lage hain. Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN Waah bahot khoob ... ek ek lafz haqeeqat se labrez hai.... Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN Masha Allah.... is sher ne to haamaaari Jawaani ke Din yaad dilaa diyaa... Jiss panghaT ne bujhaayi thi pyaas ‘Amanush’ WahaaN patthar kabhi pheiNkaa kartaa nahiN Ahhaa.. kya khoob Maqtaa hai.. mazaa aa gaya bhai poori ghazal meiN... itne dino baad aaj aapko padhaa to lagaa ke aapka naaga karnaa wasool ho gaya.. bhai jaldi jaldi aaaya kareN.. faqat itnee si guzaarish... Shaad... |
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3rd November 2011, 08:35 AM
When reality combines with rhythm, one of this kind of piece comes up
Lovely yet truly inspiring.Carry on! Quote:
****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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3rd November 2011, 09:34 AM
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bahut khoobsurat ghazal hui hai...khaas taur pe matla.... daad dil se haazir hai qubuul kijiyega... aapka, vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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4th November 2011, 12:28 AM
Apka kalam pasand aya Amanush ji. Har sher lagta hai mehsoos kar ke kaha gaya hai aur irony ka touch bhi bahaut acchha tha. Daad !
QUOTE=Amanush...;432419]YuN to har raah ke patthar pe sar maar liyaa Naam unkaa hi magar humne baar baar liyaa ( n.m ) Dikhaata hai aks magar muNh kholtaa nahiN Shukr hai haNsi uDaana aaine ko aataa nahiN MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN Door se pyar mujhe dekh kar muskuraata hai Aake qareeb kyu kehta hai koyi rishtaa nahiN Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN Jiss panghaT ne bujhaayi thi pyaas ‘Amanush’ WahaaN patthar kabhi pheiNkaa kartaa nahiN [/QUOTE] |
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4th November 2011, 11:56 AM
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Yaha shaayri bhi aap ko pasand houi so hum behad khush houe...! Tah-e-dil se daad hameiN qubool hai...! Apna khayaal rakheiN Duaaon ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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4th November 2011, 04:25 PM
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Kabhi kabhi waqt ko bhi majbooran bewafaa hona parta hai...! Apna thik se khayaal rakheiN, ok...? Duaaon ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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4th November 2011, 05:00 PM
Usski ankhoN ko na jaane ye kya ho gaya hai
Mere chaman maiN usse phool dikhtaa nahiN Fareyb ka waqt ne liya tha sahaara khel maiN Dhokaa houa varna meiN baazi haartaa nahiN Iss dil ka tarapna usse bataaouN kaise,ya Rab Khamoshi toD detaa magar dil maantaa nahiN bahot khub Chachu thanks for sharing bahot dino baad aap se baat ho rahi hai hope you are well Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
 Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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4th November 2011, 06:41 PM
MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN bahot bahot khoob..Sir, iss sher ke liya special daad. god bless u aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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5th November 2011, 01:06 AM
Wonderful Danny Bhai keep writing like this... Loved reading it
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5th November 2011, 01:37 AM
MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN Wahhhh Danny bhai kya khoobsurat tanz hai kya khoob nasihat hai. Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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5th November 2011, 01:44 AM
MuTThi ko tum agar iss tarha bandh rakhoge
HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN Wahhhh Danny bhai kya khoobsurat tanz hai kya khoob nasihat hai. Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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5th November 2011, 03:17 PM
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HaaNth apna meiN tumse milaa saktaa nahiN bahut sundar .... umda khayal se bhari ghazal ... dil se daad .... radhe radhe .... Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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6th November 2011, 02:50 PM
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Shaayri ki itni tareef ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriya qabuul karna...! Saath banaaye rakhna aur apna khayaal rakhaa karo, ok...? Aashirvaad ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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6th November 2011, 02:53 PM
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Thanks for reading & appreciating Take good care, ok...? With blessings Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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6th November 2011, 03:06 PM
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Daad sar ankhoN par...! Thik se apna khayaal rakhna, ok...? Aashirvaad ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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12th November 2011, 04:35 AM
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Kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye dhanyavaad, Zarraa Ji...! The 2nd part of your comments brought me a large smile...! Thanks once more and take care, ok...? With blessings Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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12th November 2011, 04:40 AM
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Thanks to your affection & love, I'm always well...! YuNhi milte rehna aur apna khayaal thik tarha se rakhna, ok...? Aashirvaad ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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25th November 2011, 10:58 PM
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Daad sar ankhoN par...! Apna khayaal thik se rakheiN, ok...? DuaaoN ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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26th November 2011, 01:10 AM
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Take good care of yourself, ok...? With blessings Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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21st December 2011, 06:41 PM
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Above mentioned sher ko pasand karne ke liye bahut shukriyaa...! Do keep encouraging & take care of yourself, ok...? DuaaoN ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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21st December 2011, 08:58 PM
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namaskar amanush jee.bahut acchee ghazal banee hai.ghazal ka matla mujhe bahut-2 pasand aaya.aapko is khoobsurat peshqash par dili daad o mubaraqbad. sada khush rahe. |
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15th January 2012, 03:48 PM
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YuNhi aate raheiN aur apna khayaal rakhna, ok...? DuaaoN ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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24th April 2015, 02:29 PM
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Danny bhaiyaa.........kaise hai aap ? har sher tareef ke kabil hai...sabhi ehsaas pasand aaye. aapki chotti behan regards .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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25th April 2015, 02:41 PM
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Iss puraani shaayri ko pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...! Aap apna khayaal acchi tarha se rakheiN, ok...? Aashirvaad ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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