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3rd May 2004, 08:05 AM
Lehar dharti se milne aayi
Ched kar thoda, laut gayi. Chand ne aasman ko chamkaaya Sitaaron ka bhi saath liya Subha suraj aaya kahin se Baadal main chupa dekha kisne. Phool khile vaadi main kahin Khushboo hai yah zindagi nayi. Jaisa hai yeh kudrati khel koi Us khel main insaan ki jagaa kyon nahin. Kyon cheena hai unko humse, mere Khuda, Lautaa de ek baar, phir karna na judaa. |
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*Ishq~Ibadat.......**
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3rd May 2004, 08:05 PM
Bohot khub likhha hai aapne...dilki gehraion se shukriya qabul kijiyega. Ek gana yaad aa gaayi hai: Aye Khuda haar faisla Tera mujhe manjoor hai samne Tere Tera banda bohot majboor hai... kam nahin hai roshni haar shai mein Tera noor hai.......yunhi likhte rahiyega. Khush rahiye yeh Duwaon ke sath izazat chahungi.
Take care. God bless you.  Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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4th May 2004, 04:46 AM
Shimulji,
Shukriya bahut bahut Yeh padh kar mazaa aata hai ke aapko har ek ki shayri main ek gaana zaroor yaad aata hai Khush rahiye --Anu |
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Nashili Shayari
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4th May 2004, 08:57 AM
Chand sitare
phool aur khusbho yeh to sare purane taza taza kali khili hai, hum uske deewane hai.. are anupama ji, aapko kisne kaha ke yeh mother nature ka insaaon ke saath koi mel jol nahi?  Shimul ji ne ek gana pesh kiya socha hum bhi koi gane se aapni tarif kar de . I know mine doesn't make any sense! but hey I tried! Btw shayri was C  L!¡Nasha! |
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4th May 2004, 09:06 AM
Hi Nasha!
Your song made perfect sense to me Waise to bahut saare favorite gaane hain, lekin yeh gaana un main se ek hai...thanks for sharing it! Aapki bhi shayri bahut achchi hai, keep writing! --Anu [QUOTE]Originally posted by Nasha [B]Chand sitare phool aur khusbho yeh to sare purane taza taza kali khili hai, hum uske deewane hai.. are anupama ji, aapko kisne kaha ke yeh mother nature ka insaaon ke saath koi mel jol nahi? Shimul ji ne ek gana pesh kiya socha hum bhi koi gane se aapni tarif kar de . I know mine doesn't make any sense! but hey I tried! |
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