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14th March 2011, 04:47 PM
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الفاظ سو گۓ ہيں رستے سے کھو گۓ ہيں سنتا نہيں ہے کوئ خا موش ھو گۓ ہيں آۓ نہيں ہيں واپس محفل سے جو گۓ ہيں آنسو کي بارشوں سے دامن بھگو گۓ ہيں لے کر حواس ميرے کر کے محو گۓ ہيں دل ميں،جگر ميں ميرے کانٹے چبھو گۓ ہيں دريا کے بيچ لا کر ھم کو ڈبو گۓ ہيں قاتل تھے راز کے وہ کر کے لہو گۓ ہيں رضیہ یاسمین راز Ghazal Alfaaz so gayae hain Rastae sae kho gayae hain Sunta nahin hai koi Khamosh ho gayae hain Aayae nahin hain wapus Mehfil sae jo gayae hain Aansoo kii barishoansa Daaman bhigo gayae hain Laeker hawaas maerae Ker kae maho gayae hain Dil main,jiger main maerae kaantae chubho gayae hain Darya kae beech laaker Humko dubo gayae hain Khaatil thae RAZ kae wo Ker kae laho gayae hain Razia Yasmeen RAZ |
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14th March 2011, 05:15 PM
kya baat kah gayee ho shaayeraa saahiba is baar....
har baar itna acchaa itni jaldi jaldi kaise likh leti ho aap.... Aayae nahin hain wapus Mehfil sae jo gayae hain Darya kae beech laaker Humko dubo gayae hain mashallah.. superbb.. likhti rahen.... shaad.... |
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14th March 2011, 05:23 PM
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kabhi kabhi dil aesae hi khamosh reh jata hai,koi baat nahin banti,Her raasta jaesae khatm sa lagta hai na janae kiyoon such kahoon .dil mayoos sa ho ja ta hai Khaer Tum ziyaada dhiyaan na do Main tehri pagli hahaha razia |
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14th March 2011, 05:54 PM
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I agree with you...................................  ..Ghazal.. lajawaab hai, as always........................ Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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14th March 2011, 06:31 PM
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behad umdaa khayalaat rahe ... tamaam ghazal ke .... ek umdaa soch nazar aati hai har ashaar meN ... tahe dil se humari daad bhi qubuul kareN ... aise hi behtreen kalaam se bazm roshan karti raheN ... khush rahen ... ! duaaoN ke saath ... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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14th March 2011, 07:37 PM
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 zainy..................................  wese raziya jee main kahna chaunga ke mujhe yaqeen nahi magar, ke aap paagli ho.. kyonki koi paagal aise khayaal laa hi nahi saktaa... wese shaq to mujhe taha thodaa pahle ke aap kaafi dard me doobi rahti ho... Bas isiliye thodi koshsih karta hoon haNsee mazaaq karne ki taaki is dard ki shiddat me thodi narmi aa jaae... Allah paak se Duaaen hain ke aapka dard kam ho jaae aur aapko sukoon mile... Aameen.. aapka bhai.. shaad. |
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14th March 2011, 08:10 PM
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ek sher yaad aagaya.. Inhi pagal dimagoN me hazaro khushiyo ke lach'che haiN hame pagal hi rahne do hum pagal hi achche haiN...NM kyun Razia ji.. sahi hai na..?? .................... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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14th March 2011, 08:14 PM
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waah waah zainy saahibaa , kya khoob sherni ko Vidhwaa kiya hai...... theek hai bhai jab aap dono itna force kar hi rahe hain to chaliye main maan leta hoon ke aap dono .................... ho. ( ab apne muh se kaise kahun paagal.  ) |
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Asak yasmeen saheba.....kaisi hain aap?....achanak aapke kalaam per nazar padhi....bohat acha laga padhker....behad khoobsurat ghazal hai...aapki or se nayi peshkash ka intezaar hai........ Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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