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Kismat jo BADAL na payeNge -
11th September 2005, 12:22 AM
Adaab sabhi ko ...
Tum haqeeqat ho ya khwaab.. par tumhe sach maan ke jindgi jeeta huN maiN... ki mere aramanoN maiN tumhara aks hai kahiN na kahiN.. jise maiN dekh sakta huN .. chu sakta huN.. par pal bhar maiN simat jata hai wo kahiN... dil roz jee uththa hai.. aur roz.....................!
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Behak na jana, ki hum sambhal na payeNge…
Tere agosh maiN aake phir nikal na payeNge..
Is raat maiN kar lena dil ki hasrateN poori…
Jo gujar gaya ye pal phir pighal na payeNge…
Meri ankhoN mai beh rahe mere jazbat-e-dil…
Padh lo inhe jara ye phir machal na payeNge...
Tere intzaar mai tanhai ko mehfil batate kabse…
ranginiyoN se ab ye armaan behal na payeNge…
apne hashra ki fiqra kya karooN mere khuda…
us katil ko de di kismat jo badal na payeNge…
Janta huN yahi hai manzil teri “saccha_pyar”…
Par Teri judai ka jehar hum nigal na payeNge…
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kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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11th September 2005, 10:27 AM
bhaiya ek aur dil ko choo lene wala kalam bas dil khush ho gaya ise padh kar.bahut hi khoob likh hai aapne.bas aise hi likhte rahiye aap aur hume kuch bhi nahi chahiye.
aapka CHOTA
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Re: Kismat jo BADAL na payeNge -
11th September 2005, 11:00 AM
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Originally posted by sacccha_pyar
Adaab sabhi ko ...
Tum haqeeqat ho ya khwaab.. par tumhe sach maan ke jindgi jeeta huN maiN... ki mere aramanoN maiN tumhara aks hai kahiN na kahiN.. jise maiN dekh sakta huN .. chu sakta huN.. par pal bhar maiN simat jata hai wo kahiN... dil roz jee uththa hai.. aur roz.....................!
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Behak na jana, ki hum sambhal na payeNge…
Tere agosh maiN aake phir nikal na payeNge..
Is raat maiN kar lena dil ki hasrateN poori…
Jo gujar gaya ye pal phir pighal na payeNge…
Meri ankhoN mai beh rahe mere jazbat-e-dil…
Padh lo inhe jara ye phir machal na payeNge...
Tere intzaar mai tanhai ko mehfil batate kabse…
ranginiyoN se ab ye armaan behal na payeNge…
apne hashra ki fiqra kya karooN mere khuda…
us katil ko de di kismat jo badal na payeNge…
Janta huN yahi hai manzil teri “saccha_pyar”…
Par Teri judai ka jehar hum nigal na payeNge…
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dear kunal,
wah dost wah tere likhne ke andaaz ki mein kya tareef karu ki shabh hi nahi rehte tere kalam ki daad dene ke liye. aaj dost tune mujhe khush kiya yeh dua hai khuda se ki teri jholi khushiyon se bhaar de. it was a pleasant surprise to see ur post so oftenly now these days n i m so happy for this. kaha tha na khuda ki razaa mein raazi rehna seek lo n to see ur closed ones smile do watever u can do to get a smile on their face. n today u r the reason of my smile. janti hoon dard hi dard chalkta hi tumhare har alfaas mein but jab woh din nahi rahe to yeh bhi jald hi khatam ho jayenge. i know its not easy buddy but then we have to go miles n miles ahead to make our path more radiant.
now coming to ur writing. as usual tumhein jab jab padhne ka mauka mila ya to ishq ke samundar ki gehraiyon mein doobe hue paaya aur aaj woh waqt hai ki aah nikalti hai tere har alfaas mein ki dil ko cheerta hai tera har ek alfaas. kuch alfaas jodh paayi kunal tumhari is anmol rachna ke liye.
teri justazoo meri khaana-viraani
yehi hai jawani to kya hai jawani
dil mei dard aur ankhon mei pani
dilwalon ki doston yehi hai nishani!
hey kunal as usual loved reading each word of urs. keep flowing ur thoughts ahead to n keep sharing with us. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. jab jab dard bhara kalam padhti hoon khud ko usmein doobe hue paati hu kyoki kahin na kahin mere andhar jo daba hai jab jab aisa kuch padhne ko mile to mano jaise yeh mere hi khayal ho. neways take care n always keep smiling.
ajnabi raaston pe mile nakhuda zindaghi ke
dheere-dheere humein sagar-e-ishq mein dubo gaye
phir ek din aisa aaya gamn-e-toofan "jas"
na raha na-khuda,safeene bhi kho gaye!
with love
urs TQ
mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!
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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….
Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….
Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….
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11th September 2005, 11:49 AM
kunal bhai....kya likha hain aapne...
it really is an amazin post...
woww...it was fantastic to read u...
Tere intzaar mai tanhai ko mehfil batate kabse…
ranginiyoN se ab ye armaan behal na payeNge…
especially this one was too good...
keep writin n keep sharin
take care
Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...
Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun
I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
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Re: Kismat jo BADAL na payeNge -
11th September 2005, 01:32 PM
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Originally posted by sacccha_pyar
Adaab sabhi ko ...
Tum haqeeqat ho ya khwaab.. par tumhe sach maan ke jindgi jeeta huN maiN... ki mere aramanoN maiN tumhara aks hai kahiN na kahiN.. jise maiN dekh sakta huN .. chu sakta huN.. par pal bhar maiN simat jata hai wo kahiN... dil roz jee uththa hai.. aur roz.....................!
_--_--_--_--_--_--_--_--_--_--_--_--_--_--_--_--_
Behak na jana, ki hum sambhal na payeNge…
Tere agosh maiN aake phir nikal na payeNge..
Is raat maiN kar lena dil ki hasrateN poori…
Jo gujar gaya ye pal phir pighal na payeNge…
Meri ankhoN mai beh rahe mere jazbat-e-dil…
Padh lo inhe jara ye phir machal na payeNge...
Tere intzaar mai tanhai ko mehfil batate kabse…
ranginiyoN se ab ye armaan behal na payeNge…
apne hashra ki fiqra kya karooN mere khuda…
us katil ko de di kismat jo badal na payeNge…
Janta huN yahi hai manzil teri “saccha_pyar”…
Par Teri judai ka jehar hum nigal na payeNge…
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kunal bhaiya........
apki tareef karne ki hamari aukaat shayad hi kabhi ho paaye..........par phir bhi yahi kahungi ki apki shayri me jo dard milta hai wo shayad hi kisi aur ke kalaam me mile......aksar royi hoon apki shayriyaan padhkar......apki shayri dekhkar kabhi kabhi soch me pad jaati hoon ki pyar kisiko kis hadd tak shayar bana daalta hai.........
apse bahut kuch seekhungi......zaroor.........
do keep on writing.......
with lots of love,
KaSaK.......
~A tease in heart~
Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii,
Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN ..
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12th September 2005, 12:24 AM
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bhaiya ek aur dil ko choo lene wala kalam bas dil khush ho gaya ise padh kar.bahut hi khoob likh hai aapne.bas aise hi likhte rahiye aap aur hume kuch bhi nahi chahiye.
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Lucky...
Shukriya .. mere kalaam tumhare dil main utar ke jagah banate hai... aise hi sath dete rehna ...
tumhara apna
kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
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Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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12th September 2005, 10:00 AM
Tere intzaar mai tanhai ko mehfil batate kabse…
ranginiyoN se ab ye armaan behal na payeNge…
Hello my sweet brother
Kaise ho .....ek baar phir itna dard bhara likh diya.... ....upar quote ki hui lines were very touching......bahut kuch kehti hay tumhari rachna...di ki daad kabul karna...yuun hi likhtey rehna....di ki daad to sada tumharey sath hay
Keep Smiling :-)
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Re: Re: Kismat jo BADAL na payeNge -
13th September 2005, 03:50 PM
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dear kunal,
wah dost wah tere likhne ke andaaz ki mein kya tareef karu ki shabh hi nahi rehte tere kalam ki daad dene ke liye. aaj dost tune mujhe khush kiya yeh dua hai khuda se ki teri jholi khushiyon se bhaar de. it was a pleasant surprise to see ur post so oftenly now these days n i m so happy for this. kaha tha na khuda ki razaa mein raazi rehna seek lo n to see ur closed ones smile do watever u can do to get a smile on their face. n today u r the reason of my smile. janti hoon dard hi dard chalkta hi tumhare har alfaas mein but jab woh din nahi rahe to yeh bhi jald hi khatam ho jayenge. i know its not easy buddy but then we have to go miles n miles ahead to make our path more radiant.
now coming to ur writing. as usual tumhein jab jab padhne ka mauka mila ya to ishq ke samundar ki gehraiyon mein doobe hue paaya aur aaj woh waqt hai ki aah nikalti hai tere har alfaas mein ki dil ko cheerta hai tera har ek alfaas. kuch alfaas jodh paayi kunal tumhari is anmol rachna ke liye.
teri justazoo meri khaana-viraani
yehi hai jawani to kya hai jawani
dil mei dard aur ankhon mei pani
dilwalon ki doston yehi hai nishani!
hey kunal as usual loved reading each word of urs. keep flowing ur thoughts ahead to n keep sharing with us. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. jab jab dard bhara kalam padhti hoon khud ko usmein doobe hue paati hu kyoki kahin na kahin mere andhar jo daba hai jab jab aisa kuch padhne ko mile to mano jaise yeh mere hi khayal ho. neways take care n always keep smiling.
ajnabi raaston pe mile nakhuda zindaghi ke
dheere-dheere humein sagar-e-ishq mein dubo gaye
phir ek din aisa aaya gamn-e-toofan "jas"
na raha na-khuda,safeene bhi kho gaye!
with love
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Aaj tumhare pyar ne mujhe khamosh kar diya hai ... itna kuch likh dala ki kuch samajh bhi nahi aa raha...kis baat ka jawaab duB .. sach tum jaisa dost milna bade kismat ki baat hai ... aur aaj tumhe sath pake dil khushiyoN ki bulandiyoN par haia... bas yuN hi sath dete rehna ... aur kya mangu tumse
tumhara apna
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17th September 2005, 11:38 AM
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kunal bhai....kya likha hain aapne...
it really is an amazin post...
woww...it was fantastic to read u...
Tere intzaar mai tanhai ko mehfil batate kabse…
ranginiyoN se ab ye armaan behal na payeNge…
especially this one was too good...
keep writin n keep sharin
take care
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Shukriya chote bhaiya
Well aapka sath milta rahe to kalam ki bayani kabhi na ruke
bas yuN hi sath dete rehna ..
tumhara apna
kunal
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Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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17th September 2005, 11:42 AM
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kunal bhaiya........
apki tareef karne ki hamari aukaat shayad hi kabhi ho paaye..........par phir bhi yahi kahungi ki apki shayri me jo dard milta hai wo shayad hi kisi aur ke kalaam me mile......aksar royi hoon apki shayriyaan padhkar......apki shayri dekhkar kabhi kabhi soch me pad jaati hoon ki pyar kisiko kis hadd tak shayar bana daalta hai.........
apse bahut kuch seekhungi......zaroor.........
do keep on writing.......
with lots of love,
KaSaK.......
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Yun aukat jaise shabd ke sath khilwad na karo ... yahaN ... kyuNki humme darze kab se banne lage ... humme agar koi ranking hai to bas wo hai adab ki ... tareef ki aur daad ki ... bas khayal rakhna hai apne se badoN ki izzat ka ... aisa phir na kehna .. hrdya maiN tees si hoti hai warna ... umeed hai tum samjhogi ...
tumhara apna
kunal
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Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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17th September 2005, 11:45 AM
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Tere intzaar mai tanhai ko mehfil batate kabse…
ranginiyoN se ab ye armaan behal na payeNge…
Hello my sweet brother
Kaise ho .....ek baar phir itna dard bhara likh diya........upar quote ki hui lines were very touching......bahut kuch kehti hay tumhari rachna...di ki daad kabul karna...yuun hi likhtey rehna....di ki daad to sada tumharey sath hay
Keep Smiling :-)
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MaiN accha huN ... par shayad dil accha nahi... dard pe likha kya karooN kuch aur nazar aata bhi to nahi ... nas aap aayin ... accha laga ...
aapka apna
kunal
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Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
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17th December 2005, 08:55 AM
Kunal ji,
Tumhara dard bhara kalam parh ke aankhein humhari bhi nam ho gayi. yeh dard bhi na kabhi humhara pichha nahi chhorta. tumhare ehsaas parh ke achha laga. tumhare iss kalam pe meri daad kubul kar lo. yun hi aage bhi likhte rehna!
Tumhari,
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Kunal Ji Aapko Jab Jab Padhti HUn Kuch Naya SIkhne Ko Milta Hai........kehna nahi chahiye lekin aapke ye dard bhare alfaaz mujhe hamesha kuch na kuch sikha jaate hai .........zindagi se ek nayi pehchaan karva jaate hai meri.........likhte rahiye.....
Zindagi Ne Diya Nahi Mokka Humko
Mahobaat Bhara Dil Humbhi Rakhte The
Aaj Vo Ho Gaya Hai Kisi AUr Ka Kya Kahe
Kal Jisko Chori Chori Se HUm Takhte The
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17th December 2005, 03:31 PM
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Kunal ji,
Tumhara dard bhara kalam parh ke aankhein humhari bhi nam ho gayi. yeh dard bhi na kabhi humhara pichha nahi chhorta. tumhare ehsaas parh ke achha laga. tumhare iss kalam pe meri daad kubul kar lo. yun hi aage bhi likhte rehna!
Tumhari,
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Divangi....
Kisi ka naam na lekar use ek khayal ki tarah bulana mujhe humesha pechida hi laga hai .. par koi baat nahi ... ye hi samajh lenge tum divangi ho ... jiski koi had nahi ... jo cha jaye to khud pe shumaar na rahe .. aur dard ka kya hai ye na ho to jeena jeena na ho ... line to yaad hoNgi .. Ki ab to aadat si hai mujhko aise jeene maiN ...
Sath dene ke liye shukriya .. aur jo ab kadam mila liye hai humare sath to sath hi rehna ...
tumhara apna
Kunal
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Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
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17th December 2005, 03:35 PM
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Kunal Ji Aapko Jab Jab Padhti HUn Kuch Naya SIkhne Ko Milta Hai........kehna nahi chahiye lekin aapke ye dard bhare alfaaz mujhe hamesha kuch na kuch sikha jaate hai .........zindagi se ek nayi pehchaan karva jaate hai meri.........likhte rahiye.....
Zindagi Ne Diya Nahi Mokka Humko
Mahobaat Bhara Dil Humbhi Rakhte The
Aaj Vo Ho Gaya Hai Kisi AUr Ka Kya Kahe
Kal Jisko Chori Chori Se HUm Takhte The
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meri bisaar hi kya hai .. jo kisi ko kuch sikha sakuN... aap mujhme khali kalam main se alfaaz padh leti hai ye bohat hai mere liye ... warna hum koi hasti nahi jo kisi ko uch sikha sake ... abhi jto jana bhi nahi ki kalam pakdeN kaise... aur zindgi ki kahani to azeeb-o-gareeb hai .. kabhi lagta hai jaan li .. aur kabhi ... lagta hai ki bohat kuch hai ... aise main mere ye khak alfaz kya bayani kareN.... jo aapko jindgi ki haqeeqat samjhayeN ... khair aapka likha pasand aaya ... yahi kahuNga .. aap khud ek adad shayra hai ...
Kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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17th December 2005, 06:29 PM
Bahoot achha likha hai Bhaiya.. aise hi likhate rahiye
with lots of love
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Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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17th December 2005, 08:58 PM
yaar aise sher likh kar too dil se aansu nikaal deta he.......... fir bhi carry on bye take care monti
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17th December 2005, 09:10 PM
monti ji,
ye ik sher nahi ik gazal hai.. jo dil se likhi gayi hai
sorry kunal.. apki taraf se meine keh diya ...
bahut hi pyara likha hai...
likhte raho yu hin.. kyunki apko padkar koi jeeta hai...
SHWETA
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai
uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai
kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...
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apna gam phir bhi kam hai
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17th December 2005, 09:15 PM
bahaut acche kunal.....ab sabhi ne itna kuch kehdiya hai toh ab kya keh sakti hoon,aisa haalaat me mera kuch kehna mayne na rakkhe ga......apna khyaal rakkho jaan aur likhte raho.
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
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Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."
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17th December 2005, 09:22 PM
taaja taaja dil tutaa he ish liye sher or gajal me fark nahi samajh sakta ........... aap logo ka aashirwaad raha to jaldi he samajh jaaunga.. ok ............... soorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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17th December 2005, 11:38 PM
Meri ankhoN mai beh rahe mere jazbat-e-dil…
Padh lo inhe jara ye phir machal na payeNge...
Tere intzaar mai tanhai ko mehfil batate kabse…
ranginiyoN se ab ye armaan behal na payeNge…
wah kunal jee kya khoob lihka hai aapne.... you have given words to emotions..good work...keep it up.....nice lines...
Sager.....
Her pal dekta hoon,
dharti ko aasma se milte huye,
her pal dikh jati hai isliyat mujhe.....
aur rah jata hoon bus yehi kahte huye......
shitiz yeh nahin hai,
SAGER tere aasma se pyar ki
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18th December 2005, 07:12 AM
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Divangi....
Kisi ka naam na lekar use ek khayal ki tarah bulana mujhe humesha pechida hi laga hai .. par koi baat nahi ... ye hi samajh lenge tum divangi ho ... jiski koi had nahi ... jo cha jaye to khud pe shumaar na rahe .. aur dard ka kya hai ye na ho to jeena jeena na ho ... line to yaad hoNgi .. Ki ab to aadat si hai mujhko aise jeene maiN ...
Sath dene ke liye shukriya .. aur jo ab kadam mila liye hai humare sath to sath hi rehna ...
tumhara apna
Kunal
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Kunal ji,
Devangi kaho ya divangi kya farq padta hai. aur haan, tumne hi post kiya hai kalyug ka gaana hindi lyrics section... woh line yaad hai mujhe... ki ab to aadat si hai mujhko aaise jeene maiN... Nice song. Take care!
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19th December 2005, 12:36 AM
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Bahoot achha likha hai Bhaiya.. aise hi likhate rahiye
with lots of love
aapka Beta
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Shukriya beta...
tum sath deti rehna yuN hi
Tumhara bhai
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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Re: dear fnd rakhi -
19th December 2005, 12:37 AM
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yaar aise sher likh kar too dil se aansu nikaal deta he.......... fir bhi carry on bye take care monti
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Arre mere yaar..
mere dil ke haalat tujhse chupe kab hai .. meri aah maiN to tu waise bhi royega ... mera dil jo hai tu... par tu na roiye ... warna mujhe sambhalega koun..
Tera bhai
Kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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Re: hi -
19th December 2005, 12:39 AM
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monti ji,
ye ik sher nahi ik gazal hai.. jo dil se likhi gayi hai
sorry kunal.. apki taraf se meine keh diya...
bahut hi pyara likha hai...
likhte raho yu hin.. kyunki apko padkar koi jeeta hai...
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Shewta ...
Shukriya side lene ke liye ... use abhi gazal aur sher maiN antar nahi maaloom likh hi chuka hai wo... shhukriya pasand karne ke liye ...
dekha mere yaar gham ke mare hum aur tu hi nahi
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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19th December 2005, 12:40 AM
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bahaut acche kunal.....ab sabhi ne itna kuch kehdiya hai toh ab kya keh sakti hoon,aisa haalaat me mera kuch kehna mayne na rakkhe ga......apna khyaal rakkho jaan aur likhte raho.
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Meri faru...
Tumhare alfaaz kitne keemti hai tum janti ho ... par koi baat nahi tum aayi ye kya kam hai... aise hi sath deti rehna
Kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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bhaut khoob -
19th December 2005, 09:06 AM
kunal ji
aapki kavita ke ek ek sabd jeese dil mai utarte chle gaye .bhaut hi achhi likhi hai .aise hi likhte rahiyega aur hum jeese naye logon ko kuch sikhate rahiyega.aapko padkar bahut hi achha laga.
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Re: shweta g.......... -
19th December 2005, 04:47 PM
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taaja taaja dil tutaa he ish liye sher or gajal me fark nahi samajh sakta ........... aap logo ka aashirwaad raha to jaldi he samajh jaaunga.. ok ............... soorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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Arre mere yaar ,,,.. tujhe sab muaaf hai ... samjha ....
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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19th December 2005, 04:48 PM
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Meri ankhoN mai beh rahe mere jazbat-e-dil…
Padh lo inhe jara ye phir machal na payeNge...
Tere intzaar mai tanhai ko mehfil batate kabse…
ranginiyoN se ab ye armaan behal na payeNge…
wah kunal jee kya khoob lihka hai aapne.... you have given words to emotions..good work...keep it up.....nice lines...
Sager.....
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Sager
Dil ka haal sune dil wala ... shayad tabhi aapko mere alfaaz emotion maiN nazar aaye ...
shukriya sath dene ke lie
Tumhara kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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19th December 2005, 04:52 PM
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Kunal ji,
Devangi kaho ya divangi kya farq padta hai. aur haan, tumne hi post kiya hai kalyug ka gaana hindi lyrics section... woh line yaad hai mujhe... ki ab to aadat si hai mujhko aaise jeene maiN... Nice song. Take care!
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Sahi Kaha
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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Re: bhaut khoob -
19th December 2005, 04:55 PM
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kunal ji
aapki kavita ke ek ek sabd jeese dil mai utarte chle gaye .bhaut hi achhi likhi hai .aise hi likhte rahiyega aur hum jeese naye logon ko kuch sikhate rahiyega.aapko padkar bahut hi achha laga.
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Shrdh
Ye to aapki jarra nawazish hai jo khak alfazoN ko itna maan diya.. aur maiN kitni baar likh chuka huN .. maiN kya koi hasiyat rakhta huN jo kisi ko kuch sikha pauN.. ye sab to aapke samne hai .. chun sakeN to chun lijiyega... aur kya kahun ... baaki banda khidmat maiN humesha rahega... aapka apna
kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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