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29th July 2008, 10:51 AM
tamaam dostoN ko meraa salaam!!
nazm kahnaa mere liye teRhi kheer hai (yuN to ghazal meiN bhee :tees maar khaa: naheeN huN Smiley ) .. par is baar aik apaahij naujawaan se mulaaqaat huee jiskee Hauslaa dekhte hee bantaa thaa. so aik nazm uske naam!! apne mashwaroN se nawaaziyegaa! shukriyaa!! ================================================== === tiree daryaa dilii kaa shukriyaa sad_haa! magar ai dost! apaahij huN to kyaa yeh hoNsalaa TooTaa naheeN ab tak, sahaaraa tere kaandhoN kaa abhee mujhko naheeN darkaar, abhee kuchh jaan baakee hai, use jee luN phir aa jaanaa! maiN buzdil to naheeN laikin kabhee yeh aaNkh nam ho to, maiN khud se haar jaauN aur iskaa mujh ko gham ho to, tire kaandhe ki mujhko tab zarurat hoN to aa jaanaa, miree him'mat kee baisaakhee agar TooTe to aa jaanaa! mujhe rone ko teraa aik kaandhaa hee bahut hogaa, magar ik aur bhee tujh se guzaarish hai mire pyaare, ki ik din aur apnaa besh-qeemat waqt adaa karnaa, woh ik pal jis pe apnaa ikhtiyaar hotaa naheeN hai tab, ki yeh saaNsoN ki Doree jab jigar se chhuTa'tii hai tab, tuu apne saath us pal teen kaandhe aur le aanaa, abhee kuchh jaan baakee hai, use jee luN phir aa jaanaa! |
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29th July 2008, 01:40 PM
Dheer bhaiya:
namaste!! aapki naZm ko jab paRhaa tou usski gehrA'ii jaan ke hi lagtaa hai ki aapne uss iNsaan ke dil ko kitanaa jaanaa haii.. aapki yeh naZm dil meN Ghar kar ga'ii.. maiN ees par aapko waah waahii naheeN duuNgaa.. balkii ees ehsaas ko hum sab tak pahuNchaane ke liYe maiN aapkaa ShuKraGuzaar rahuuNgaa ..! YuuNhii liKhate rahiYe... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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29th July 2008, 01:50 PM
Mind Blowing Dear ... superb !!!
 Dili daad kabool kijiyee ...appki is kavish per mere lakhooN salam ajj mere alfazoN meiN woh dum hi nahi ki kuch bayan ker paaieN keep writing ... Khush rahieN duago Mujeeb Reps +++++ |
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29th July 2008, 02:59 PM
dheer bhai aik aik shabd jehan ko hila gaya kitna khuub wayaa kiy hai apne uus sahasi aur swabhimani ko,par mujhe jo hila gayi wo meri khud ki kahai ki buzdili aur kayarta hai,kita kuch hai mere paas fir bhi jo nahi usko rota he dil,superb,likhte rahe dheer bhai,khush rahe,sukriya share karne ke liye....baagi
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29th July 2008, 03:29 PM
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30th July 2008, 02:28 PM
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shukriyaa dhaval! apnaa khayaal rakhnaa!! dheer |
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30th July 2008, 02:30 PM
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aapkee himmat afzaayee ke liye tahe dil se mamnoon huN. take care dheer |
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30th July 2008, 02:33 PM
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30th July 2008, 02:34 PM
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30th July 2008, 03:15 PM
dear dheer.....aaj aapki likhi hue nazam padi....sach kahti hoon behad acchey ahsaas haiN...bahut gahrai hai aapki nazam meiN....dil se daad kabool kijiye with Reps ++
duao.n ke saath aapki diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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30th July 2008, 10:50 PM
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lajawab Dheer ji ..............  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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31st July 2008, 10:36 AM
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..apnaa khayaal rakhiyegaa]dheer |
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1st August 2008, 10:30 PM
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mujhe rone ko teraa aik kaandhaa hee bahut hogaa, magar ik aur bhee tujh se guzaarish hai mire pyaare, ki ik din aur apnaa besh-qeemat waqt adaa karnaa, woh ik pal jis pe apnaa ikhtiyaar hotaa naheeN hai tab, ki yeh saaNsoN ki Doree jab jigar se chhuTa'tii hai tab, tuu apne saath us pal teen kaandhe aur le aanaa, abhee kuchh jaan baakee hai, use jee luN phir aa jaanaa! bohat khoob dheer ji ahsasaat bohat pur asar rahe yunhi likhte rahiyega apna bohat khayal rakhiyega apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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2nd August 2008, 02:37 AM
6 taareeKh to india pahuNch raha huuN aur lagta hai aapse milna hi paDega!!
is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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bhut khub -
2nd August 2008, 12:38 PM
dheer bhai ko raj ka adaab....bhai mere tune kamaal ke khyal pesh kiye hain or rawangi to bemasaal hai.....bhut umdaah.....raj.....
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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4th August 2008, 10:48 AM
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4th August 2008, 10:49 AM
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ise maiN apnee khush-naseebee samjhungaa! maiN aapko aik khat likh rahaa huN jis meN apnaa phone number bhej rahaa huN. is se mulaaqaat meiN aasaanee rahegee. shukriyaa dheer |
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4th August 2008, 10:51 AM
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kaise haiN aap? baRe bhaai kee taareef mil jaayeiN to kyaa kahne .. dil garden garden ho gayaa .. apna khayaal rakhiyegaa ..... dheer |
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10th August 2008, 12:25 PM
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Dheer sahab ek lambe arse ke baad aapka ye kalam pad raha hoon... yakeen maniye ki is baat ka mujhebehad afsos hai ki main itne lambe samay se is mahfil se door kyun raha... bahut kuch badla hai yahan.... per aapki shayrii main jo painapan aur barikiya.n aayin hai sach dil khush ho gaya..... kaise tareef karoon mere pass shawd hii nahi hai.n...... bus dil se nikalii huyii daad hazir karta hoon. ese hi hamesha likhte rahiyega..... shukriyaa.... aapka dost dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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11th August 2008, 11:10 AM
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der aayad durust aayad ... har insaan apnee zindagee ke pech o kham meiN uljhaa huaa hai aur iskaa koee ilaaj naheeN hai. so gilaa nah kareN. jo waqt mayas'sar hai usee se khush honaa paRega. aapkee daad o tehsin ke liye tah e dil se aapkaa shukraguzaar huN. apnaa khayaal rakhiyegaa!! Dheer |
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