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Mere Mehboob ka husN hai..... - 7th April 2010, 04:22 PM
Chalo ab kuch padlo meri taraf se.............
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Mere Mehboob ka husN hai Maah-e-Noor* se KahiN Zyada
Khuda ney bakhsha hai usse Jamaal, Hoor se Kahin Zyada

Yun tou ekhlaas-e-Parastaar* ki Koi Sarhad nahi hoti
Bebaak* wo chahti hai mujhe, dastoor* se KahiN Zyada

Duuba hua'a rehta hooN un sarshaar* se ankhoN meiN
Muddat se hai ye Kaifiyat, Makhmoor* se KahiN Zyada

Kuch aysa asar karti hai woH Jaan-e-Jigar mujhpar
Wijdaan* mein rehta hooN, Suroor* se KahiN Zyada

Dhokey meiN na aana ye be-saakhtahgi* hai uski
Paaya hai usne Faehm*, Shau'oor* se KahiN Zyada


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ekhlaas = sincerity
parastaar = lover/worshipper
bebaak = boldly
dastoor = law/rule
sarshaar = most miscievious
makhmoor = intoxocated/drunk
wijdaan = ecstasy/intense delight
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7th April 2010, 06:36 PM
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Chalo ab kuch padlo meri taraf se.............
Phir na kehna ke sirf time waste karta hoon mein yahan members ka....
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Mere Mehboob ka husN hai Maah-e-Noor* se KahiN Zyada
Khuda ney bakhsha hai usse Jamaal, Hoor se Kahin Zyada

Yun tou ekhlaas-e-Parastaar* ki Koi Sarhad nahi hoti
Bebaak* wo chahti hai mujhe, dastoor* se KahiN Zyada

Duuba hua'a rehta hooN un sarshaar* se ankhoN meiN
Muddat se hai ye Kaifiyat, Makhmoor* se KahiN Zyada

Kuch aysa asar karti hai woH Jaan-e-Jigar mujhpar
Wijdaan* mein rehta hooN, Suroor* se KahiN Zyada

Dhokey meiN na aana ye be-saakhtahgi* hai uski
Paaya hai usne Faehm*, Shau'oor* se KahiN Zyada


maah-e-noor = moonlight
ekhlaas = sincerity
parastaar = lover/worshipper
bebaak = boldly
dastoor = law/rule
sarshaar = most miscievious
makhmoor = intoxocated/drunk
wijdaan = ecstasy/intense delight
suroor = pleasure
be-saakhtahgi = artless/naive
faehm = intelligence
shau'oor = wisdom/intellect

Excellent Baqtiar, fantastic piece of creativity.

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7th April 2010, 06:57 PM
wahhh.........baqtiar,............................
kya baat hai koshish jari rakho aise hi time barbad karte raho hum sabka.....

koon kahta hai ke tu dewana hai
ye to madhoshi hai jo tujh par chayi hai...


duaoon ke sath...........

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woooooooooooooooooooooooow......loved it ... awesome yaar... har ek sher kaabil-e-tarif hai.... lafzon ki jaadugari kya kehna.... kyu faaltu ki baaton me time waste karte ho Baqz ... aise kuch likha karo yaar ... maan gaye tumhe yaar... keep it up buddy.....

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8th April 2010, 12:23 AM
Baqz As salam walekum!

Kya baat hai bahut khoob bahut umdaa gazal kahi hai yaar
Dil se tarif kitni bhi karun kam padengi... yaar bahut khoob ek ek lafz
ek ek ashaar bahut hi umdaa kaha ....

Jee chaah raha hai woh 3 Idiot wala dailog kahuN... Per yaad nahi aa raha hai...

Aise hi likhate raho Bhai......

Allah tumhari kalam mein aur bhi zor bakhshe

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8th April 2010, 08:33 AM
Duuba hua'a rehta hooN un sarshaar* se ankhoN meiN
Muddat se hai ye Kaifiyat, Makhmoor* se KahiN Zyada

Nice One......Baqtiar Saheb........ek umdaa khayal....bahut khoob !

dil se daad hazir hai....qubuul farmaayen....
aur mehafil ko raushan ka karte rahen....


yunhi likhte rahen.....
khush rahen....

apna khayal rakhen....
duaaon ke saath.....



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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bahut khoob..dil se daad
duaon ke saath

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woooooooooooooooooooooooow......loved it ... awesome yaar... har ek sher kaabil-e-tarif hai.... lafzon ki jaadugari kya kehna.... kyu faaltu ki baaton me time waste karte ho Baqz ... aise kuch likha karo yaar ... maan gaye tumhe yaar... keep it up buddy.....
blah blah blah....................

Faltu ki baaton mein time waste ahaaaaan.... tumse baat kiye tou zamana hova....

Pata nahi tum zinda bhi ho ya marr gayi.... (bhatakti aatma yahan reply kar rahi ho)
   
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Haan Naaz.... Likhte waqt aina dekh kar aya tha....
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Excellent Baqtiar, fantastic piece of creativity.
Dude Mayoos...........

You write all your work in Hindi... jo mujhe na padni aati hai na likhni..

well usko Roman english mein bhi likha karo... so that others can read and see your work....

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Nice One......Baqtiar Saheb........ek umdaa khayal....bahut khoob !

dil se daad hazir hai....qubuul farmaayen....

aur mehafil ko raushan ka karte rahen....



yunhi likhte rahen.....

khush rahen....


apna khayal rakhen....

duaaon ke saath.....
Mr Mehra..........Kitne cheezein karne ko keh rahe ho phirse dekh lo

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blah blah blah....................

Faltu ki baaton mein time waste ahaaaaan.... tumse baat kiye tou zamana hova....

Pata nahi tum zinda bhi ho ya marr gayi.... (bhatakti aatma yahan reply kar rahi ho)

Baqz.... mai to zinda hi hu aur thik thaak hu..tum kaha mar gaye ho yaar.. waise yaha waha bhatakna to tumhara kaam hai mera nahi..... kisi waqt online bhi maro taaki mai bhi ek faaltu ka kaam karu, tumse baat..

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13th April 2010, 12:09 AM
No, I don't write all my work in hindi, in fact only the titles are in hindi.
so don't be lazy and start clicking on titles

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Dude Mayoos...........

You write all your work in Hindi... jo mujhe na padni aati hai na likhni..

well usko Roman english mein bhi likha karo... so that others can read and see your work....

Glad u liked this ghazal....

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No, I don't write all my work in hindi, in fact only the titles are in hindi.
so don't be lazy and start clicking on titles
Well jab Bus ka number hi samaj mein na aaye... tou usmein chadey kyun...?

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Baqz.... mai to zinda hi hu aur thik thaak hu..tum kaha mar gaye ho yaar.. waise yaha waha bhatakna to tumhara kaam hai mera nahi..... kisi waqt online bhi maro taaki mai bhi ek faaltu ka kaam karu, tumse baat..
Well Ab itna time kis ke paas hai ...........ya yun kahon... Ab kya mere itne burey din agaye hai ke.... Tum se Chat karon........

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13th April 2010, 10:24 PM
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Chalo ab kuch padlo meri taraf se.............
Phir na kehna ke sirf time waste karta hoon mein yahan members ka....
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Mere Mehboob ka husN hai Maah-e-Noor* se KahiN Zyada
Khuda ney bakhsha hai usse Jamaal, Hoor se Kahin Zyada

Yun tou ekhlaas-e-Parastaar* ki Koi Sarhad nahi hoti
Bebaak* wo chahti hai mujhe, dastoor* se KahiN Zyada

Duuba hua'a rehta hooN un sarshaar* se ankhoN meiN
Muddat se hai ye Kaifiyat, Makhmoor* se KahiN Zyada

Kuch aysa asar karti hai woH Jaan-e-Jigar mujhpar
Wijdaan* mein rehta hooN, Suroor* se KahiN Zyada

Dhokey meiN na aana ye be-saakhtahgi* hai uski
Paaya hai usne Faehm*, Shau'oor* se KahiN Zyada


maah-e-noor = moonlight
ekhlaas = sincerity
parastaar = lover/worshipper
bebaak = boldly
dastoor = law/rule
sarshaar = most miscievious
makhmoor = intoxocated/drunk
wijdaan = ecstasy/intense delight
suroor = pleasure
be-saakhtahgi = artless/naive
faehm = intelligence
shau'oor = wisdom/intellect



Baqs
accha laga aapki gazal padkar, khoobsurat ahsaas khoobsurati se bayaan kiye aapne.....yooN hi likhtey rahiye.

god bless u

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Subhan_allah Baqtiar saheb ab main agar apni had se aage badhuga is peshkash ki tareef karne me to aap kahege ke main aapki tang kheech raha hu...........main to bas itna kahuga ke yeh aapka badappan aur saadgi hai jo itna bade shayer hone ke bavjood aap kabhi takubbur nahi karte aur hum sabki hausla afzaiee karte hai...........

Waise to mujhe behr ki itni samajh nahi............par pata nahi q it was natural ke maine aapka poore kalam me radeef me sirf zyda ko padha aur kahin ko pada hi nahi aur jab jab padhne ki koshish ki maza nahi aaya........mujhe to bina kahin ke hi lutf aaya padhne me.

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

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Subhan_allah Baqtiar saheb ab main agar apni had se aage badhuga is peshkash ki tareef karne me to aap kahege ke main aapki tang kheech raha hu...........main to bas itna kahuga ke yeh aapka badappan aur saadgi hai jo itna bade shayer hone ke bavjood aap kabhi takubbur nahi karte aur hum sabki hausla afzaiee karte hai...........

Waise to mujhe behr ki itni samajh nahi............par pata nahi q it was natural ke maine aapka poore kalam me radeef me sirf zyda ko padha aur kahin ko pada hi nahi aur jab jab padhne ki koshish ki maza nahi aaya........mujhe to bina kahin ke hi lutf aaya padhne me.
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28th April 2010, 11:42 AM
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Excellent Baqtiar, fantastic piece of creativity.

ji bhaut khoob............................


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