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31st August 2017, 12:17 AM
Ek arse ke baad lautna hua hai sdc mai
Kuch pesh kar raha hu , glti ho to maaf kare... Maanta nahi ye dil meri baat , kya karu Bas me nahi ab jazbaat , kya karu Na rahte kabu me alfaaz mere Aati hai jab teri yaad , kya karu Har pal tuje dekhne ko jee chahta hai Par mushkil hai ab mulakat , kya karu Na nind hai raaton me , na din me chain hai Ajeeb se hai ye halaat , kya karu Ki ab to aao sama jaao mujme tum Jal raha hai "CHIRAG" or lambi hai ye raat , kya karu ....... |
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31st August 2017, 11:34 AM
joshi ji aapka istaqbaal karti hun bazm me....bahot achche lage ishq me doobe huye apke ye ehsaas...yun hee hamare sath apne jazbaat share karte rahiyega...
Aate rahiye.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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5th September 2017, 09:05 AM
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bahot khoob bahot sunder peshkash joshi ji...... aapke sher lajawab hain.. aate rahiye likhte rahiye Maanta nahi ye dil meri baat , kya karu Bas me nahi ab jazbaat , kya karu Shaad........ |
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16th September 2017, 07:13 AM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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17th September 2017, 08:41 AM
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Itne umda peshkash ke liye sukriya.... उन बीते लम्हों के याद ना दिलाया करो
दिल में सुलग रही आग को ना हवा दिया करो |
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28th September 2017, 10:30 AM
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28th September 2017, 10:32 AM
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Aapka saath milta rahega to muje bhi bhot kuch sikhne milega .. |
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5th October 2017, 09:05 AM
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zarra nawaazi ke liye tahe dil se shukriyaa.... ise uupar waale ka karam kahiye jo nacheez ek zariya ban sakaa aur aap ne likhnaa kaayam rakhaa... apni khoobsurat peshkash se mahfil ko sajaate rahiye.... aate rahiye Shaad...... |
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5th October 2017, 04:30 PM
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Behetreen kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne..... aur sachchaai jhalak rahi hai poori ghazal me... God bless you. keep writing and sharing .  Khuda Jaane Kitne Qatl-e- Aam Honge. 8447849114 kabir.shayer@gmail.com |
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1st August 2019, 09:11 PM
bohot khoob
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