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Ek ghazal pesh e khidmat hai...aapki raey ki muntazir huuN
Behr: 212 212 212 212 mutadarik musamman salim Mukhtasar si mulaqaat ka ShukriyaH! Bikhre bikhre se jazbaat ka ShukriyaH! Ye udaasi ye gham,uspe aankheN bhi nam TooTi bikhri meri zaat ka ShukriyaH! Kaun haiN aap ,aur kaise aana hua’a Aapke in sawaalaat ka ShukriyaH! Yaad jab bhi kiya,khwaab me aa gaye Moutabar aise lamhaat ka ShukriyaH! Aaya saawan bhi ab, tum na aaye magar Aisi bemaani barsaat ka ShukriyaH! Zakhmi dil, bebasi aur tanhaaiyaN Ujre ujre se haalaat ka ShukriyaH! Chand bhi jaane kyuN saath roya mere Dard me bheegi is raat ka ShukriyaH! Jhoote waade, jafaa, dillegi , berukhii Aah me lipti saughaat ka ShukriyaH! Ranj deke mujhe muskuraatay rahe Aap ki sab inaayaat ka ShukriyaH! Zainy mashkoor mamnoon hai aapki ShukriyaH! Saa’b har baat ka ShukriyaH!.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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8th April 2013, 07:49 AM
Chand bhi jaane kyuN saath roya
mere Dard me bheegi is raat ka ShukriyaH! Zainy jee...umda ghazal hui hai....ye lines dil ke kareeb rahin..... एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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8th April 2013, 12:11 PM
zainy :
namaste bahot hi khoob aur dilkash Ghazal kahi hay aapne . . dil ko behad pasand aayiin aapki yeh Ghazal dil se daad aur duaaen khush rahiye apnaa khayaal rakhen duaaon ke saath ijaazat aapka Dhaval |
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8th April 2013, 02:34 PM
Zainy Sahibaa Aadaab!
Bahut khoob jee bade dinoN baad aapne koi gazal toH likhi... iske liye humari taraf se shukriyaa... Gazal achche tarannum meiN rahi yeH baat khoob rahi... , par ashaaroN meiN zyaada gehrai nazar nahi aayi... means jaise kalaam ki ummid thi aapse woH nahi milaa... Wel meri dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Likhate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye... Khuda Hafez...  |
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8th April 2013, 07:55 PM
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Wallaah Zainy saahiba.. kya baaat hai....bahot aala ... bahot khooobsurat kalaam ke saath tashreef laain hain aap.... Is laajwaab peshkash se kuch sher chun kar tareef karna is kalaam ki beadbii hogii... poori ghazal hi mujhe behad pasand aai.... likhtii rahiye.. Khush rahiye... Shaad.... |
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8th April 2013, 08:06 PM
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9th April 2013, 11:50 AM
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Bahot Si DAAAD Qabool Farmaaiye …. 6th Sher Ke Misra oola Me Lafz “Yeh” Hataa Den To Mere KHayal Me Ziaada Rawaani Aa Jaaye Gi…. Sada KHush Rahiye Aur Likhti Rahiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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9th April 2013, 04:41 PM
maine kaha ji shukriya shukriya,
pyara pyara likhne ke liye shukriya... Dear Zainy......bahut pyara sa likha hai tumne...hame sabhi ashyaar pyare lge .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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9th April 2013, 04:45 PM
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Aapne jo raey di 6th sher ke baare me,...mera andaaza hai ke "yeh" lafz nikaalne se sher be behr ho jaayega... Zakh2mi1dil2, be2ba1si2 aur2 yeh1 tan2haa2i1yaN2 Ujre ujre se haalaat ka ShukriyaH! Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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9th April 2013, 04:54 PM
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aur rakhne se bhi nahi hoga bebeher..... ap jaisa chahe kar sakti hain.....general rakhna ho to 'ye' nikal dijiye aur stress dena ho to 'ye' rahne dijiye. |
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9th April 2013, 04:59 PM
is it?....
did not know that....... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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9th April 2013, 05:03 PM
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aapne 'aur' ka wazn 2 liya hai...use aap au2 r1 le lijiye...  aur 'ye' nikal dijiyeab aap ke thought ke hisaab se choose kijiye ki 'ye' rakhna hai ki nahi. |
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9th April 2013, 05:22 PM
Zidd Sahab .... Aap Ka Mashkoor Hun Jo aap Ne Wazaahat Ki
Mujhay Personally "YEH" Nikaal Kar Parhnay Me Ziaada Rawaani Lagi... Is Liye Kaha Tha, Baaqi Ab Zainy Ji Ki Marzi Hai Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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9th April 2013, 06:21 PM
Lo ji abhi nikaal dete haiN, maine bhi tou bas behr ki wajah se add kiya tha, just to fill that 212 gap....
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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9th April 2013, 07:31 PM
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bahut khoob zainy jee aapki ghazal hamesha ki tarah bahut khoobsoorat hai dil se daad hazir hai kabool farmaayen radhe radhe Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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11th April 2013, 10:00 PM
Ek achi ghazal ke liyN bhut bhut mubarak ho,saare hi aashaar bhut hi khoob khe haiN aapne hamesha ki taraH, daad paish e khidmat hai qubool farmaaiye Zainy saheba
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12th April 2013, 04:12 AM
originally posted by Zainy
Ranj deke mujhe muskuraatay rahe Aap ki sab inaayaat ka Shukriya Subhanallah......bahut khoob. rajinderseep |
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12th April 2013, 02:58 PM
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Bohat bohat shukriyah Aru ji................... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th April 2013, 01:25 AM
Aadaab !
appka kalaam to din ba din to nikharta jaa raha hai or andaaz to waisy hi mashaALLAH bahut acha hai . youNhi likhti rahieN aik achi ghazal per daad qabool fermaaieN zor e qalam aur zyada |
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13th April 2013, 06:17 AM
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end kiya .... itna hi kahunga , waah maza aga gaya... sanjay sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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13th April 2013, 12:23 PM
Zainy mashkoor mamnoon hai aapki
ShukriyaH! Saa’b har baat ka ShukriyaH! shurkiyaaH Zainy Saheba... is ghazal k liye shukriyaaH... dil baagh baagh ho gaya pha'd kar.. aise hi behtreen kalaam ru-ba-ru karaati rahiye ga, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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13th April 2013, 03:01 PM
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Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th April 2013, 03:03 PM
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Bahut mashkoor hooN aap ki nawaazish ke liye. .. khawish sahab...koshish jaari rahegi ke aagay se aur bhi acchha likhun.. duaoN ki guzarish Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th April 2013, 03:06 PM
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Alfaaz hi nahi milte aapka shukriyah ada karne ke liye sameer sahab...jis jazbe se aap sabhi ki hauslafzai farmate hain ..har ek itna wasi dil nahin hota ..aapki mohabbat ko salam aapke jazbe ko salam ..shukrguzar hoon aapki.. duaoN ki guzarish.... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th April 2013, 03:08 PM
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 regards......... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th April 2013, 03:10 PM
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Bahut bahut shukriyaH, di Mujhe khushi hai ke aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi............ Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th April 2013, 03:12 PM
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Housla afzaayi ka bahot bahot shukriyaH RAJINDER JI..... yuhi saath dete rahiye........ Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th April 2013, 03:16 PM
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sab se pehle to bazm ko yaad rakhne ka shukriyah.. dusra shukriyah aap meri ghazal per tashreef laaye. hausla afzaai, daad aur duaoN ke liye teesra shukriyah...... khush rahiye.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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14th April 2013, 02:41 AM
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MashaAllah! Gem! A pure gem! Both the ghazal and the way it's been crafted! Well kya kahayn simply superb!! I won't say as usual coz this one is one of your very best(taking nothing away from your collection of previous jewels)! Awaiting your next masterpiece! Dhayron daad qaboul farmayayn!! Khoobsoorat kahee baat shukriyaa, Aalaatareen qayaalaat ka shukriyaa! Mushkil haye tareef lafzaon mayn, Qalamband jazbaat ka shukriyaa!! Ahmad |
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17th April 2013, 07:50 AM
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Aah me lipti saughaat ka ShukriyaH! very very nice behad khoobsurat ghazal bani hai har ek sher kamaal hai dileeeeeeee daaaaaaaaaaaaaad .................................................. ......... |
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17th April 2013, 10:54 AM
Kaun haiN aap ,aur kaise aana hua’a
Aapke in sawaalaat ka ShukriyaH! daad.... Mere khayaal se ab tak ki undoubtably aapki sabse behtareen ghazal hai ye... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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18th April 2013, 01:49 AM
Masha Allah, bahot acchi koshish..likhte rahiye!
ke kitne kheemti gouhar nikalte hai khazaane se~ |
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18th April 2013, 07:51 AM
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KhoobSurat Ghazal Se Ru Ba Ru Karane Aur Laajawaab EhsaasaaT Kaa ShukriyaaH Dilee Mubaaraqbaad Zainy JI !!!  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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19th April 2013, 06:32 PM
Ye udaasi ye gham,uspe aankheN bhi nam
TooTi bikhri meri zaat ka ShukriyaH! Yaad jab bhi kiya,khwaab me aa gaye Moutabar aise lamhaat ka ShukriyaH! Aaya saawan bhi ab, tum na aaye magar Aisi bemaani barsaat ka ShukriyaH! Zakhmi dil, bebasi aur tanhaaiyaN Ujre ujre se haalaat ka ShukriyaH! wah khoobsurat ashaar laajawaab ghazal .................................... 
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Shukriyah huzoor. .. mujhe khushi hai ke aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi daad qubool ki..... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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4th September 2014, 04:40 PM
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hausla afzaai ke liye bohat bohat bohat shukriyah. ... Der se reply ke liye sorry. .I keep forgetting replying on my own writings.. Yuhi saath dete rahiye.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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Aap ki tareef se hamara bhi dil garden garden hogaya. ... Yuhi saath dete rahiye... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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