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Exclamation Mehboob, Raqeeb Ko Baghal Mein Bithaaye Huay..!! - 18th May 2015, 01:22 PM
taaza hawa meiN tafreeh ke liye aaye huay!
mehboob, raqeeb ko baghal meiN bithaaye huay

woh jin ki khaatir hum ne barbaad kar di zindagi
bethe haiN shoq se kisi aur ka dil behlaaye huay

tohfa-e-aqeedat laaye thay un ke liye door se!
yahaN to woh ghairoN ka ghar basaaye huay

hamara harra bharra dil dasht ka manzar hua
aas ke sabhi phool bhi aaj murjhaaye huay

kal ke aashna pal bhar meiN huay na-aashna
jaane kese sulagtay dil ko hum samjhaaye huay

un ki khushi meiN kyuN na shareek hoN hum!
apni zaat ko sar-e-aam un per lutaaye huay

kal tak mere shaanoN pe sir tha jis dil-ruba ka!!
ruteN badli to woh auroN ke naaz uthaaye huay

dil-lagi ik din jaaN ka rog bun ke nigal jaaye gi
kab socha tha hum bhi hoN ge jaaN se haaray huay

us shaks ko dikhaaya tha in haathoN meiN jis ne!
aaj woh najoomi bhi hum se sir chupaaye huay



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Waah! Waaah.....har ek sher dard ki dastaan hai ...bahut hee khoob bayangi hassan jii....pur asar kalaam... dil tak pahunche ehsaas.....
bahut sari daad aur mubarakbaad meri taraf se....
likhte rahein...bazm me raunak late rahein...

salamat rahein..


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18th May 2015, 01:31 PM
Hassan bhaii

Namaste

Bhai kya kahuun bas Ghazal ko paDhtaa hi gayaa..dil jeet liaa aapki ees Ghazal ne...daad hi daad ...

Aapka

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Waah! Waaah.....har ek sher dard ki dastaan hai ...bahut hee khoob bayangi hassan jii....pur asar kalaam... dil tak pahunche ehsaas.....
bahut sari daad aur mubarakbaad meri taraf se....
likhte rahein...bazm me raunak late rahein...

salamat rahein..
Madhu jee..

Khaak alfaazoN kii pazeeraayi ke liye behad manoon hooN!

aagy bhi aise hii saath ki umeed rahe gii..

salamat rahen ..

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20th May 2015, 10:24 AM
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taaza hawa meiN tafreeh ke liye aaye huay!
mehboob, raqeeb ko baghal meiN bithaaye huay

woh jin ki khaatir hum ne barbaad kar di zindagi
bethe haiN shoq se kisi aur ka dil behlaaye huay

tohfa-e-aqeedat laaye thay un ke liye door se!
yahaN to woh ghairoN ka ghar basaaye huay

hamara harra bharra dil dasht ka manzar hua
aas ke sabhi phool bhi aaj murjhaaye huay

kal ke aashna pal bhar meiN huay na-aashna
jaane kese sulagtay dil ko hum samjhaaye huay

un ki khushi meiN kyuN na shareek hoN hum!
apni zaat ko sar-e-aam un per lutaaye huay

kal tak mere shaanoN pe sir tha jis dil-ruba ka!!
ruteN badli to woh auroN ke naaz uthaaye huay

dil-lagi ik din jaaN ka rog bun ke nigal jaaye gi
kab socha tha hum bhi hoN ge jaaN se haaray huay

us shaks ko dikhaaya tha in haathoN meiN jis ne!
aaj woh najoomi bhi hum se sir chupaaye huay


HSN bhai...bahut khoobsurti se aapne ehsaaoN ko jubaan di hai...aur tasveer ke saath kya combination hai...!

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20th May 2015, 10:24 AM
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Bohut khoob.

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21st May 2015, 01:19 PM
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Hassan bhaii

Namaste

Bhai kya kahuun bas Ghazal ko paDhtaa hi gayaa..dil jeet liaa aapki ees Ghazal ne...daad hi daad ...

Aapka

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Dhaval bhai ..

Pasandeedgi aur mohabbatoN se nawaazne ky liye teh-e-dil se shukriyaa!

salamat rahen..

milte rahen ..

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taaza hawa meiN tafreeh ke liye aaye huay!
mehboob, raqeeb ko baghal meiN bithaaye huay

woh jin ki khaatir hum ne barbaad kar di zindagi
bethe haiN shoq se kisi aur ka dil behlaaye huay

tohfa-e-aqeedat laaye thay un ke liye door se!
yahaN to woh ghairoN ka ghar basaaye huay

hamara harra bharra dil dasht ka manzar hua
aas ke sabhi phool bhi aaj murjhaaye huay

kal ke aashna pal bhar meiN huay na-aashna
jaane kese sulagtay dil ko hum samjhaaye huay

un ki khushi meiN kyuN na shareek hoN hum!
apni zaat ko sar-e-aam un per lutaaye huay

kal tak mere shaanoN pe sir tha jis dil-ruba ka!!
ruteN badli to woh auroN ke naaz uthaaye huay

dil-lagi ik din jaaN ka rog bun ke nigal jaaye gi
kab socha tha hum bhi hoN ge jaaN se haaray huay

us shaks ko dikhaaya tha in haathoN meiN jis ne!
aaj woh najoomi bhi hum se sir chupaaye huay
Wah...Bahut khoob miyaaN, yun maaniye ki shar sher mein ek tasveer ban rahi thi...muqarrar ghazal huyi hai bhai. Alfaaz kam honge iski tareef mein, yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa


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taaza hawa meiN tafreeh ke liye aaye huay!
mehboob, raqeeb ko baghal meiN bithaaye huay

woh jin ki khaatir hum ne barbaad kar di zindagi
bethe haiN shoq se kisi aur ka dil behlaaye huay

tohfa-e-aqeedat laaye thay un ke liye door se!
yahaN to woh ghairoN ka ghar basaaye huay

hamara harra bharra dil dasht ka manzar hua
aas ke sabhi phool bhi aaj murjhaaye huay

kal ke aashna pal bhar meiN huay na-aashna
jaane kese sulagtay dil ko hum samjhaaye huay

un ki khushi meiN kyuN na shareek hoN hum!
apni zaat ko sar-e-aam un per lutaaye huay

kal tak mere shaanoN pe sir tha jis dil-ruba ka!!
ruteN badli to woh auroN ke naaz uthaaye huay

dil-lagi ik din jaaN ka rog bun ke nigal jaaye gi
kab socha tha hum bhi hoN ge jaaN se haaray huay

us shaks ko dikhaaya tha in haathoN meiN jis ne!
aaj woh najoomi bhi hum se sir chupaaye huay
kyaa baat hai hassan saahab.......... ummdah aashar se sajaay hai aapne bazm ko...... behad haseen lage aapke sher.... likhte rahen....

Shaad.....

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