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Love Ehd-e-wafa. - 28th October 2003, 06:26 PM

Sapnon main saja kay rakha tha.
Palkon pay bitha kay rakha tha.

Aik chaand say sunder chehrey ko.
Saanson main basa kay rakha tha.

Cheen na lay koi mujh say usay.
Rasmon say chupa kay rakha tha.

Apney dil say us ka piyaar.
Sadiyoun say laga key rakha tha.

Kitni hi mileen periyaan bhi mager.
Ankhon ko jhuka kay rakha tha.

Bujhney na diya ulfat ka diya.
Qasmon say jala kay rakha tha.

Her qadam mujhay tanhaee mili.
Zakhmon ko bhula kay rakha tha.

Bus ehd-e-wafa hi shaiki ney.
Hathon main uttha kay rakha tha.
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29th October 2003, 09:25 PM

Assalam u alaikum shakeel ji
its a very good nazm

Kitni hi mileen periyaan bhi mager.
Ankhon ko jhuka kay rakha tha.

but this sher is fantastic
keep writing like this
   
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29th October 2003, 11:03 PM

Khubsurat sa kalam hein. Bohot Pyaar aur dard bhi hein. Waise yeh toh hote hi hein Pyaar meh, kyu? Aise hi likhte rahiyega. Shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. Allah Hafiz.


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Love 30th October 2003, 12:25 AM

bohat shukriya pasandeedgi ka mango jee.

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Hello shimul jee shukriya pasand aaya mera likha Waisay bina dard kay mohabbat kaisi.

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