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ashQ aankhoN se tapak paday sar-e-shaam dheere dheere
aatish-e-ishq meiN sulag utha dil-e-badnaam dheere dheere

sar-e-shaam = about evening

nihaayat Khamooshi se hote gaye woh dil per qaabiz
nikamma yeh dil hua un ka ghulaam dheere dheere

dil-e-daghdaar ko boht naaz tha kabhi apni wafaooN per
mohabbat per bhi chaa gaya abhaam dheere dheere


abhaam = haze, uncertainness (dhundh)

hum tou samjhe the unhieN apni zindagi ki zamaanat!
woh karte rahe hamare kafan ka intizaam dheere dheere

jahan un ko dekha tha hum wohin hue panaah-guzeen
khatam ho gaye jaawani ke din tamaam dheere dheere

panaah-guzeen = refugee

Waah Hasan bhai waah ..

aaap ki ghazal per ke sulge mere armaan dheere dheere ..

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ashQ aankhoN se tapak paday sar-e-shaam dheere dheere
aatish-e-ishq meiN sulag utha dil-e-badnaam dheere dheere

sar-e-shaam = about evening

nihaayat Khamooshi se hote gaye woh dil per qaabiz
nikamma yeh dil hua un ka ghulaam dheere dheere

dil-e-daghdaar ko boht naaz tha kabhi apni wafaooN per
mohabbat per bhi chaa gaya abhaam dheere dheere


abhaam = haze, uncertainness (dhundh)

hum tou samjhe the unhieN apni zindagi ki zamaanat!
woh karte rahe hamare kafan ka intizaam dheere dheere

jahan un ko dekha tha hum wohin hue panaah-guzeen
khatam ho gaye jaawani ke din tamaam dheere dheere

panaah-guzeen = refugee
Bohut khoob mere bhai kya qatilaana tarike se jazbaaton ko zubaan di hai. Dheere dheere aapne dil chalni kar diya.

Yunhi likhte rahiye



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dheere dheere bahut achee bahut pyaree baat kah dee waah


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Shukriya Mast ji

chaliye iss baar ka shabd hai


Zindagi

ummeed hai iss shabd se mere sabhi doston ke mann mein bohut saare vichaar aayenge aur humein bohut he khoobsoorat Kalaam padne ko milenge.

Sarika jii aapki aamad ne to jaise mahfil me jaan daal di hai...sabhi ke kalaam ek se ek badhkar...waah maza aa gaya padhkar....
aur bahut hee achcha word diya aapne...jaise hee kuch likh payi aap sab se share karoongi...



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kya baat hai, bahut khobbsurati se ehsaas bayaan kiye hai sabhi ne........


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.....Sunita Thakur.....

यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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Wah wah!

Aur aap bhi le aaye iss mehfill Mein muskaan dheere dheere....

Har baat Ki tarah phir se sixer....
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Waah Hasan bhai waah ..

aaap ki ghazal per ke sulge mere armaan dheere dheere ..

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Yunhi likhte rahiye
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Khaak alfazoN ko pazeeraayi bakhshne ky liye behad
manoon hooN!

salamat rahen ..


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5th May 2015, 07:13 PM

Zindgi par ek nazm dil me aayi vo aap sab ki khidmat me pesh kar rahi hoon...

Main badal gayi hoon...
haan main badal gayi hoon...

Zindgi ke is safar me
hai door bahut jana.
Insaan ko samajh loon
itna to chal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Jab sath chalna chaha
thokar bahut hai khayi..
Akele chali hoon jabse
girkar sambhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Us pyaar ki kasak
dil me rahegi baki.
Par khwabon khyalon se
aage nikal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Shikwa nahi hai koi
na ummeed hee kisi se..
Zindgi hai khoobsoorat
main isme dhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..
.



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Zindgi par ek nazm dil me aayi vo aap sab ki khidmat me pesh kar rahi hoon...

Main badal gayi hoon...
haan main badal gayi hoon...

Zindgi ke is safar me
hai door bahut jana.
Insaan ko samajh loon
itna to chal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Jab sath chalna chaha
thokar bahut hai khayi..
Akele chali hoon jabse
girkar sambhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Us pyaar ki kasak
dil me rahegi baki.
Par khwabon khyalon se
aage nikal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Shikwa nahi hai koi
na ummeed hee kisi se..
Zindgi hai khoobsoorat
main isme dhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..
.
Khoobsurat nazm huyi hai madhu Ji bahut khoob. Ismein zidd bhi nazar aayi aur takraar bhi khud se nazar aaya zindagi apni sharton par jeena aasaan nahi aur badalna kabhi majbori hoti hai to kabhi zaroorat. Bahut khoob ehsaason ko alfaaz diye aapne. Bahut khoob ab is mehfil ki hidaayaton ke tehat guzaarish karunga ki zindagi par aapse ek ghazal mile is bazm ko.

Intezaar mein.



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Zindgi par ek nazm dil me aayi vo aap sab ki khidmat me pesh kar rahi hoon...

Main badal gayi hoon...
haan main badal gayi hoon...

Zindgi ke is safar me
hai door bahut jana.
Insaan ko samajh loon
itna to chal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Jab sath chalna chaha
thokar bahut hai khayi..
Akele chali hoon jabse
girkar sambhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Us pyaar ki kasak
dil me rahegi baki.
Par khwabon khyalon se
aage nikal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Shikwa nahi hai koi
na ummeed hee kisi se..
Zindgi hai khoobsoorat
main isme dhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..
.
Kya baat kya baat kya baat

Aksar badalti zindagi ke saath thoda badalna hi padta hai. Magar khud KO bhool jaane Ki hadd tak nahi.
Isi par ek vichaar aaya hai
Main zindagi hun, pal pal badalti hun libaaz
Tu sang chal par mat badal, zinda rakh apni har ek aas.


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Zindagi - 6th May 2015, 12:39 AM

DostoN,

Yeh to nahi kahunga ki zindagi par likha hai par apne khayaalat mein is lafz ko zaroor rakh paaya hoon, gaur farmaiYeGaa




Unki gali se aaj phir behake huye nikle the ham
Parchaaiyan maujood thi par nabz ne toda tha dum

khwaab jhoot mooth ke bhi mere peeche aa gaye
Main akelaa tha nahiN unpar bhi hua tha sitam

zindagi kis naam se ab tera hoke mein rahuN
shukr toota to sahi yeh ehde-wafaa ka bhram

aashnaaii ab tere ehsaan ka hai shukriyaa
Nabz-e-Bismil* hoon tera chahta hajaat-e-Marham**

*pulse of wounded
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उनकी गली से आज फिर बहके हुए निकले थे हम
परछाइयाँ मौजूद थी पर नब्ज़ ने तोडा था दम

ख्वाब झूट मूठ के भी मेरे पीछे आ गए
मैं अकेला था नहीं उनपर भी हुआ था सितम

ज़िन्दगी किस नाम से अब तेरा होके में रहूँ
शुक्र टूटा तो सही यह एह्दे-वफ़ा का भ्रम

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aap sab ne ek se badhkar ek kalaam likhe hain .. khaaskar ke madhu ji ne, mast bhai ane aur hassan bhai ne...... aap sab ke kalaam dil ko chute hue nikal gaye aur bas main bebaak ho gaya....... kafi waqt baad aaya sdc isliye ye thoda der se padh raha hoon.....

koshish karuunga ke jald hi is me apni do chaar sher shaamil kar sakoon.... khush rahen aaap sab.. aur bazm ko jaan dete rahen.... shukiyaa

shaad......


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Jab sath chalna chaha
thokar bahut hai khayi..
Akele chali hoon jabse
girkar sambhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Us pyaar ki kasak
dil me rahegi baki.
Par khwabon khyalon se
aage nikal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..


Madhu jee..

waaaaaah... be-misaal jazbaat inayat kiye haiN aap ne meHfil ko ...

likhte rahiye ..


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DostoN,

Yeh to nahi kahunga ki zindagi par likha hai par apne khayaalat mein is lafz ko zaroor rakh paaya hoon, gaur farmaiYeGaa




Unki gali se aaj phir behake huye nikle the ham
Parchaaiyan maujood thi par nabz ne toda tha dum

khwaab jhoot mooth ke bhi mere peeche aa gaye
Main akelaa tha nahiN unpar bhi hua tha sitam

zindagi kis naam se ab tera hoke mein rahuN
shukr toota to sahi yeh ehde-wafaa ka bhram

aashnaaii ab tere ehsaan ka hai shukriyaa
Nabz-e-Bismil* hoon tera chahta hajaat-e-Marham**

*pulse of wounded
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उनकी गली से आज फिर बहके हुए निकले थे हम
परछाइयाँ मौजूद थी पर नब्ज़ ने तोडा था दम

ख्वाब झूट मूठ के भी मेरे पीछे आ गए
मैं अकेला था नहीं उनपर भी हुआ था सितम

ज़िन्दगी किस नाम से अब तेरा होके में रहूँ
शुक्र टूटा तो सही यह एह्दे-वफ़ा का भ्रम

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नब्ज़-ए-बिस्मिल हूँ तेरा चाहता हजात-ए-मरहम
Mast bhai ..

Gehri soch aur almiya liye aap ka yeh kalaam nihayat pur-soz hy...

bohat umdah janab... beshumar daad haazir hy!

meHfil sajatay rahiye ..


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Exclamation 6th May 2015, 10:52 AM

DostoN...

Masroofiyat ki bina per kaafi din hue kuch naya mukammal kalaam likh nahi paaya ...
arse baad kuch naya likha hy .... lafz zindagi per aik 'koshish':-


seedha dil per waar karte ho!
bahaane beshumaar karte ho...

dil jo le gaye ho hamara!
bolo kis per nisaar karte ho?

nazar ke teerooN kii..
kahaN yalghaar karte ho?

yalghar : attack

hamari to raakh kar dii
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Masroofiyat ki bina per kaafi din hue kuch naya mukammal kalaam likh nahi paaya ...
arse baad kuch naya likha hy .... lafz zindagi per aik 'koshish':-


seedha dil per waar karte ho!
bahaane beshumaar karte ho...

dil jo le gaye ho hamara!
bolo kis per nisaar karte ho?

nazar ke teerooN kii..
kahaN yalghaar karte ho?

yalghar : attack

hamari to raakh kar dii
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jigar ko taar taar ‘HSN’!
kyuN baar baar karte ho?


Waaaah...hassan jiii ham bhi kab se aapka kalaam padhne ke intzaar me the aur ye is peshkash to bas kamaal hee hai...bahut khoob ehsaas aur adayagi.....
bahut sari dilli daad aapko is behtareen kalaam ke liye...
khush rahiye...



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Gehri soch aur almiya liye aap ka yeh kalaam nihayat pur-soz hy...

bohat umdah janab... beshumar daad haazir hy!

meHfil sajatay rahiye ..
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Masroofiyat ki bina per kaafi din hue kuch naya mukammal kalaam likh nahi paaya ...
arse baad kuch naya likha hy .... lafz zindagi per aik 'koshish':-


seedha dil per waar karte ho!
bahaane beshumaar karte ho...

dil jo le gaye ho hamara!
bolo kis per nisaar karte ho?

nazar ke teerooN kii..
kahaN yalghaar karte ho?

yalghar : attack

hamari to raakh kar dii
zindagi kis ki bahaar karte ho?

jigar ko taar taar ‘HSN’!
kyuN baar baar karte ho?


Wah wah kya asardaar baat kahi hai bhai. Bahut khoob ashaar huge hai zindagi par kis safaai se kalaam keh Gaye aap. Masha Allah yunhi likhte rahiye.



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Khoobsurat nazm huyi hai madhu Ji bahut khoob. Ismein zidd bhi nazar aayi aur takraar bhi khud se nazar aaya zindagi apni sharton par jeena aasaan nahi aur badalna kabhi majbori hoti hai to kabhi zaroorat. Bahut khoob ehsaason ko alfaaz diye aapne. Bahut khoob ab is mehfil ki hidaayaton ke tehat guzaarish karunga ki zindagi par aapse ek ghazal mile is bazm ko.

Intezaar mein.
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Kya baat kya baat kya baat

Aksar badalti zindagi ke saath thoda badalna hi padta hai. Magar khud KO bhool jaane Ki hadd tak nahi.
Isi par ek vichaar aaya hai
Main zindagi hun, pal pal badalti hun libaaz
Tu sang chal par mat badal, zinda rakh apni har ek aas.

Bahut khoob sher sarika ji..aur sach baat kahi aapne...
Shukriya pasand karne ke liye...



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DostoN,

Yeh to nahi kahunga ki zindagi par likha hai par apne khayaalat mein is lafz ko zaroor rakh paaya hoon, gaur farmaiYeGaa




Unki gali se aaj phir behake huye nikle the ham
Parchaaiyan maujood thi par nabz ne toda tha dum

khwaab jhoot mooth ke bhi mere peeche aa gaye
Main akelaa tha nahiN unpar bhi hua tha sitam

zindagi kis naam se ab tera hoke mein rahuN
shukr toota to sahi yeh ehde-wafaa ka bhram

aashnaaii ab tere ehsaan ka hai shukriyaa
Nabz-e-Bismil* hoon tera chahta hajaat-e-Marham**

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परछाइयाँ मौजूद थी पर नब्ज़ ने तोडा था दम

ख्वाब झूट मूठ के भी मेरे पीछे आ गए
मैं अकेला था नहीं उनपर भी हुआ था सितम

ज़िन्दगी किस नाम से अब तेरा होके में रहूँ
शुक्र टूटा तो सही यह एह्दे-वफ़ा का भ्रम

आशनाई अब तेरे एहसान का है शुक्रिया
नब्ज़-ए-बिस्मिल हूँ तेरा चाहता हजात-ए-मरहम
Waaaah...
Kya khoob ghazal huyi hai mast ji..pur asar ashaar.....



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DostoN..

Zindagi par 4th ghazal ke intezaar mein aankhen muntazir hai....

Jald hi bazm aage badhayeiN...



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Pyaare doston......

Mast saahab ke huqum ki taameel karte hue ek apni ek purraani likhii ghazal pesh karnaa chahungaa jiska unwaan bhi zindagee hai.. ummeed hai aap ki nazre inaayat hogee...

TaariqiyoN ke saaye me le Aai hai Zindegi,
Apne liye to jaise abb Tanhaai hai Zindegi.

Jo tum nahi to Raat ki KhaamoshiyaN bhi nahi,
Tum ho sanam to subho ki AngDaai hai Zindegi.

Kuch yooN judaa se ho gaye humse hamaare sabhi,
Aisaa lage bin jism ke Parchaai hai Zindegi.

Dekhoge to AasaaN bahot aaye nazar ye Tumhe,
Utroge to rakkhe bahot Gahraai hai Zindegi.

Duniyaa se bachtaa phiruN saaya chupaata rahuN.
Ruswaa kiyaa ik dost ne, Sharmaaii hai Zindegi.

Husne-Sanam aur Zindegii ke ek hi marhale,
Wo Bewafaa hai 'Shaad' to harjaai hai Zindegi.

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Pyaare doston......

Mast saahab ke huqum ki taameel karte hue ek apni ek purraani likhii ghazal pesh karnaa chahungaa jiska unwaan bhi zindagee hai.. ummeed hai aap ki nazre inaayat hogee...

TaariqiyoN ke saaye me le Aai hai Zindegi,
Apne liye to jaise abb Tanhaai hai Zindegi.

Jo tum nahi to Raat ki KhaamoshiyaN bhi nahi,
Tum ho sanam to subho ki AngDaai hai Zindegi.

Kuch yooN judaa se ho gaye humse hamaare sabhi,
Aisaa lage bin jism ke Parchaai hai Zindegi.

Dekhoge to AasaaN bahot aaye nazar ye Tumhe,
Utroge to rakkhe bahot Gahraai hai Zindegi.

Duniyaa se bachtaa phiruN saaya chupaata rahuN.
Ruswaa kiyaa ik dost ne, Sharmaaii hai Zindegi.

Husne-Sanam aur Zindegii ke ek hi marhale,
Wo Bewafaa hai 'Shaad' to harjaai hai Zindegi.

Shaad.....
Muqammal bhai....aapki shirkat se dil mein khusbuu se mehak uthi hai zindagi ko lekar kya likh daala hai aapne bhai...masterpeice..



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Pyaare doston......

Mast saahab ke huqum ki taameel karte hue ek apni ek purraani likhii ghazal pesh karnaa chahungaa jiska unwaan bhi zindagee hai.. ummeed hai aap ki nazre inaayat hogee...

TaariqiyoN ke saaye me le Aai hai Zindegi,
Apne liye to jaise abb Tanhaai hai Zindegi.

Jo tum nahi to Raat ki KhaamoshiyaN bhi nahi,
Tum ho sanam to subho ki AngDaai hai Zindegi.

Kuch yooN judaa se ho gaye humse hamaare sabhi,
Aisaa lage bin jism ke Parchaai hai Zindegi.

Dekhoge to AasaaN bahot aaye nazar ye Tumhe,
Utroge to rakkhe bahot Gahraai hai Zindegi.

Duniyaa se bachtaa phiruN saaya chupaata rahuN.
Ruswaa kiyaa ik dost ne, Sharmaaii hai Zindegi.

Husne-Sanam aur Zindegii ke ek hi marhale,
Wo Bewafaa hai 'Shaad' to harjaai hai Zindegi.

Shaad.....
Zindgi unwaan kya khoob istemaal hai is ghazal me aur sath hee zindgi ki hakikat bhi bayaan hain...
umdaa kalaam saheb....

Khush rahein.....



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Zindgi par ek nazm dil me aayi vo aap sab ki khidmat me pesh kar rahi hoon...

Main badal gayi hoon...
haan main badal gayi hoon...

Zindgi ke is safar me
hai door bahut jana.
Insaan ko samajh loon
itna to chal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Jab sath chalna chaha
thokar bahut hai khayi..
Akele chali hoon jabse
girkar sambhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Us pyaar ki kasak
dil me rahegi baki.
Par khwabon khyalon se
aage nikal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..

Shikwa nahi hai koi
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Zindgi hai khoobsoorat
main isme dhal gayi hoon..
Haan main badal gayi hoon..
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Zindagi se pyar bhari bateiN bahut luthf aya per ke ise....

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Mast Bhai aap ka kalaam per ke ehsaas he zindagi hua ... bahut acha nibhaya aapne Zindagi ka falsafa.

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Wah Bhai wah Zindagi ko aap ki nazar se dekha aur mehsoos kiya aur paya ki kya kamal hai Zindagi , bemisaal hai zindagi.

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Mast Bhai aap ka kalaam per ke ehsaas he zindagi hua ... bahut acha nibhaya aapne Zindagi ka falsafa.

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Good morning SDC.......bahut bahut mubarakbaad sabko jinhone bazm ko apni haziri se nawaaza hai......Der se aane ke liye muafi ka taalib bhi hoon.......ek choti si koshish aap sab ki nazar......


Teri barhami ne hi jaan li mujhe zindagi se na tha gila !
Tera shauk meri nazar ko tha tu hi kar de dil ka bhi faisla !!

Hai udaas lamhon ka karz youn ke main maut se kya wafa karoon !
Tere uljhanon ka jatan hai ye nahi hota aakhiri faisla !!

Jo zindagi me hai ghul rahi ek khalish bhi hai bahaar bhi !
Main shumaar hoon tere khwab me tu kabhi to mujhse nazar mila !!

Ye sharaab hai ya saraab hai na nasha hai naa hi gubaar hai !
Mere ashq mujhse hi puchkar mujhe na pila mujhe na pila !!

Meri zindagi kya hai zindagi na guzar rahi na thahar rahi !
Ae khuda tu mera hisaab kar mujhe qabr me hi jagah dila !!


Bahut gumraah karna chahta hai aaina mujhko !
Magar wo apni hi fitrat se hardam haar jaata hai !!
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Good morning SDC.......bahut bahut mubarakbaad sabko jinhone bazm ko apni haziri se nawaaza hai......Der se aane ke liye muafi ka taalib bhi hoon.......ek choti si koshish aap sab ki nazar......


Teri barhami ne hi jaan li mujhe zindagi se na tha gila !
Tera shauk meri nazar ko tha tu hi kar de dil ka bhi faisla !!

Hai udaas lamhon ka karz youn ke main maut se kya wafa karoon !
Tere uljhanon ka jatan hai ye nahi hota aakhiri faisla !!

Jo zindagi me hai ghul rahi ek khalish bhi hai bahaar bhi !
Main shumaar hoon tere khwab me tu kabhi to mujhse nazar mila !!

Ye sharaab hai ya saraab hai na nasha hai naa hi gubaar hai !
Mere ashq mujhse hi puchkar mujhe na pila mujhe na pila !!

Meri zindagi kya hai zindagi na guzar rahi na thahar rahi !
Ae khuda tu mera hisaab kar mujhe qabr me hi jagah dila !!
most welcome pankaj jii..
kya khoob kalaam likh diya zindagi par...waaaah...
Aapki aamad se mahfil me raunak aa gayi..
aate rahein..
likhte rahein..........



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Mahfil ko naye lafz ka intzaar hai mast jii.....
aaiye aur safar aage badaiye ...



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Good morning SDC.......bahut bahut mubarakbaad sabko jinhone bazm ko apni haziri se nawaaza hai......Der se aane ke liye muafi ka taalib bhi hoon.......ek choti si koshish aap sab ki nazar......


Teri barhami ne hi jaan li mujhe zindagi se na tha gila !
Tera shauk meri nazar ko tha tu hi kar de dil ka bhi faisla !!

Hai udaas lamhon ka karz youn ke main maut se kya wafa karoon !
Tere uljhanon ka jatan hai ye nahi hota aakhiri faisla !!

Jo zindagi me hai ghul rahi ek khalish bhi hai bahaar bhi !
Main shumaar hoon tere khwab me tu kabhi to mujhse nazar mila !!

Ye sharaab hai ya saraab hai na nasha hai naa hi gubaar hai !
Mere ashq mujhse hi puchkar mujhe na pila mujhe na pila !!

Meri zindagi kya hai zindagi na guzar rahi na thahar rahi !
Ae khuda tu mera hisaab kar mujhe qabr me hi jagah dila !!
Wah Pankaj bhai, behad khoob ehsaas bayaan kiye, ghazal ki technicalities ki nazar se aapko shayad ise ek baar phir dekhna padhe, kyunki mujhe qaafiyaa nahi milaa ismein...

Asardaar koshish aur mehfil mein shirkat ka shukriyaa janaab aur aate rahiYeGaa..



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Mahfil ko naye lafz ka intzaar hai mast jii.....
aaiye aur safar aage badaiye ...
Madhu ji aur baaki doston, mehfil ko zindagi lafz ko dekar aapne ek se ek ghazalien di, aap sabko yeh mehfil mein aage badhaane par mubaarakbad aur shukriyaa adaa karna chahta hoon.

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Asardaar koshish aur mehfil mein shirkat ka shukriyaa janaab aur aate rahiYeGaa..
Mast ji.....shayad maine gaur nahi kiya tha aur mujhe laga ki dusre kism ke couplets bhi allowed hain ....maine abhi check kiya ....ghazal hi likhni thi.......muafi.......silsile se juda iski khushi hai......apna khayaal rakhiyega


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Madhu ji aur baaki doston, mehfil ko zindagi lafz ko dekar aapne ek se ek ghazalien di, aap sabko yeh mehfil mein aage badhaane par mubaarakbad aur shukriyaa adaa karna chahta hoon.

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Hmmm..Wakai thoda mushkil hai ham jaise gareeb logon ke liye.. par aapne example aur meaning diya hai uska shukriya janaab iisse thodi madad zaroor milegi...
chaliye dekhte hain kuch ban paya to hazir honge ham Bhi.......
Sabhi doston ki ghazalon ka intzaar rahega....



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Madhu ji aur baaki doston, mehfil ko zindagi lafz ko dekar aapne ek se ek ghazalien di, aap sabko yeh mehfil mein aage badhaane par mubaarakbad aur shukriyaa adaa karna chahta hoon.

Mehfil ko agla alfaaz thoda uljhaa hua dena chahunga taaki har shayar thoda sochne par majboor ho...

Kaifiyat

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bohat umdah Kaifiyat dii hai bhai ....

is per aik koshish :-



maiN jab bhi sanwar ke baahir nikalta hooN
un se mulaqaat ke liye zaroor jaata hooN

un ke aaankhoN ke samandar ko maiN!
dil meiN sama ke chupa ke rakhta hooN

saaz saare ke saare be-saaz hue jate haiN!
koyal si awaaz un ki jab bhi sunta hooN…

aalam-e-izteraab hota hai waqt-e-rukhsat!
bin paani machli ki manind machalta hooN


aalam-e-izteraab : condition of anxiety
manind : alike

shab-e-hijr meiN pal pal tadapta ‘parStaar’
'ki aag hi nahi rehta, dhuaaN bhi hota hooN'


*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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