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Words Can't Explain My "feelings" - 23rd May 2005, 02:42 PM

hello friends.....here is a nother post.....tell me vat u feel.....this is very very special to me....so tell me ur opinion friends


Words Can't Explain My "FEELINGS"



I'm missing you,
From the moment u left me
I've had no other thoughts
I've been thinking about you day n nite
The times we spent
The moments we shared
Ah life was so beautiful then
They say I have to forget you
But how can I forget you????
What will I be without you????
I don't know how to cry
Coz you have always made me smile
I try to smile even now
But tears are all that I have
Words can't explain
How much I love you
Words can't explain
How much I miss you
Words can't explain my agony
Words can't explain this poem
   
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Re: Words Can't Explain My "feelings" - 23rd May 2005, 03:13 PM

Words Can't Explain My "FEELINGS"

I'm missing you,
From the moment u left me
I've had no other thoughts
I've been thinking about you day n nite
The times we spent
The moments we shared
Ah life was so beautiful then
They say I have to forget you
But how can I forget you????
What will I be without you????
I don't know how to cry
Coz you have always made me smile
I try to smile even now
But tears are all that I have
Words can't explain
How much I love you
Words can't explain
How much I miss you
Words can't explain my agony
Words can't explain this poem [/B][/QUOTE]

And your feelings have explained the words...Kartik ji!

Keep it up and take care...

Amanush...



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Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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23rd May 2005, 03:43 PM

I'm missing you,
From the moment u left me
I've had no other thoughts
I've been thinking about you day n nite
The times we spent
The moments we shared

Very well written!!


Ah life was so beautiful then
They say I have to forget you
But how can I forget you????
What will I be without you????
I don't know how to cry
Coz you have always made me smile
I try to smile even now
But tears are all that I have

Amazing!! Very nice Words!!


Words can't explain
How much I love you
Words can't explain
How much I miss you
Words can't explain my agony
Words can't explain this poem

Beautifull!!

Hi Karthik!

Another beautiful piece of poetry.. Soft, Simple n flowing beautifully.... Do keep writing so wonderfully... TC!


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23rd May 2005, 05:20 PM

Hi KArthik,

Wonderful brother...
Keep up the good work...
Hope to read more of your work...

Take Care
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23rd May 2005, 06:39 PM

the poem is too good. i am a new user.new to this site.

i've found a few writers very interesting. one among therm is u.
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gr8 work. keep writin.


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24th May 2005, 02:03 PM

hello amanush ji
thanks for readin it
bye take care
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24th May 2005, 02:07 PM

hello rohin bhayya
i am feelin very happy tht u liked my post
thanks a lot
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24th May 2005, 02:09 PM

hello pulkit ji
i am glad tht u liked my post
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24th May 2005, 02:17 PM

hello akaash
u find me to b one of the interestin riters in shayri.com??????thts a great compliment....but i dont think i deserve it yet
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hi - 26th May 2005, 04:30 AM

my dear Kartik
sach me....ur feelings have explain these words of intense pain and luv...shayad kehna aasan hai aur karna bahut mushkil...par un yaadon ko gale se laga kar...aakhir kab takk?? there has to be a time for ever......pichla yaad rakh kar aage koyi badh nahi sakta. so try to move ahead my dear...and i am sure u will find true luv waiting for you.

Luv ya
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26th May 2005, 09:18 PM

well....thanks priya for ur reply.....ur words show a lot of care...thanks for tht
hmm ya i hav to move on...but not sure if my luv will b waitin for me
thanks again ...felt nice readin ur reply
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