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Mashahoor Shayar
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zaalim -
10th July 2002, 01:04 PM
zaalim thaa vo aur zulm kii aadat bhi bahut thii
majabuur them ham un se muhabbat bhi bahut thii us but ke sitam seh ke dikhaa hi diya hamne yuun apni tabiyat mein bagavat bhi bahut thii vaaqif hi na thaa rasm-e-muhabbat se vo varna dil ke liye thodi si inaayat bhi bahut thii yuun hi nahi mashahuur-e-zamanaa mera qaatil us shaqs ko is fan mein mahaarat bhi bahut thii kyaa daur-e-gazal thaa ke lahuu dil mein bahut thaa aur dil ko lahuu karne kii fursat bhi bahut thii har shaam sunate the hasinon ko gazal ham jab maal bahut thaa to sakhavat bhi bahut thii bulavaa ke ham 'aziiz' ko pashemaan bhi bahut hain kya kijiye kambakht kii shohrat bhi bahut thii anjane me muzko wo shayar bana gaya |
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18th August 2002, 03:05 PM
kya baat hai sagar saab!waa!subhanalla!!
maza aa gaya!! |
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Bahut Aachhe saahab |
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Bahut Aachhe saahab -
21st August 2002, 10:57 AM
Waah Sagar sahab,
aapki ye ghazal waqai bahut achhi hai, yooNhi likhte rahiye. Regards Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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4th September 2002, 08:59 PM
waah sagar saab!
aap to ustad hai shayri kay! kya khoob likhga hai! aapki agli rachna ka intezaar rahegaa! |
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Birha Tu Sultan
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27th September 2002, 05:49 AM
sagar sahab.....
mazrat chahta huuN lekin janaab "kaleem ajiz" sahab ki iss ghazal ke do ashaar aur haiN...aapki ijaazat ke saath maiN pesh kar raha huuN ghazal ka matla yuuN hai har chaNd gham-o-dard ki keemat bhi bahut thi lena hi padaa humko zaroorat bhi bahut thi go tarq-e-taa'lluQ meiN sahuulat bhi bahut thi lekin na huaa humse ke Ghairat bhi bahut thi aadaab maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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