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Hota Yeh Dil - 8th September 2006, 11:55 PM

Hota yeh dil kagaaz ka
To dard itna phir hota na,
Kaat ke hazaar tukdon main
Usko udaa deti havaa main.

Hota yeh dil patthar ka
To dukh main itna jeeti na,
Samundar main phenk kar,
Usko doobte hue dekhti main.

Hota yeh dil paani ka
Na woh sataata phir mujhe itna,
Nadiya main bahaa deti usko,
Sahil se milaa deti main.

Magar hota yeh dil tera to
Udaas itni na rehti main,
Mehsoos karti pyar tera,
Jiske liyain tadapti hoon main.


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wah anupama bohat khubsurat jazbaat hain aur dard bhi bohat acha likha hai
   
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bahut khoob.. - 9th September 2006, 05:33 PM

wah anupama bahut khub likha hai


aise hi likhte rahiyega

thahre hui pani me pathar mat maro

isse koi or bhi peta hai

yon udas hokar mat batho anupma

appko dekhkar koi or bhi jeta hai

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10th September 2006, 02:03 AM

Aap ka bahut shukriya jo mere is sher ko padh kar aapne tareef likhi.



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10th September 2006, 10:00 AM

ANUPAMA BAHOT HI ACHHI PESHKAS HAI


AUR BAHOT HI UMD HAI AAPKA YE LIKHA HUA , UMMID HAI AAPKI AGE AUR BHI PESHKAS PADHNE KO MILEGI LIKHTE RAHIYEGA........


AAPKA DOST DHAVAL


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11th September 2006, 10:18 AM

Dhavalji,

Shukriya...



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hi - 11th September 2006, 10:48 AM

you have written nice...



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Re: Hota Yeh Dil - 11th September 2006, 11:34 PM

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Originally posted by Anupama18
Hota yeh dil kagaaz ka
To dard itna phir hota na,
Kaat ke hazaar tukdon main
Usko udaa deti havaa main.

Hota yeh dil patthar ka
To dukh main itna jeeti na,
Samundar main phenk kar,
Usko doobte hue dekhti main.

Hota yeh dil paani ka
Na woh sataata phir mujhe itna,
Nadiya main bahaa deti usko,
Sahil se milaa deti main.

Magar hota yeh dil tera to
Udaas itni na rehti main,
Mehsoos karti pyar tera,
Jiske liyain tadapti hoon main.
hi anupama didi aapko mein didi bol sakti hu kya achha lagta hai.

hmmmm!!!!!! aapka likha bhi achha lgta hai. kyuki aap likhti hi itna pyara hai. sach me mujhe bahot aur bahot pasand aya.

ummid hai aap unhi likhti rahengi.

agar aapko etraz na ho to aapki
choti bahan aur dost
pooja


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Re: Hota Yeh Dil - 11th September 2006, 11:49 PM

Originally posted by Anupama18
Hota yeh dil kagaaz ka
To dard itna phir hota na,
Kaat ke hazaar tukdon main
Usko udaa deti havaa main.

Hota yeh dil patthar ka
To dukh main itna jeeti na,
Samundar main phenk kar,
Usko doobte hue dekhti main.

Hota yeh dil paani ka
Na woh sataata phir mujhe itna,
Nadiya main bahaa deti usko,
Sahil se milaa deti main.

Magar hota yeh dil tera to
Udaas itni na rehti main,
Mehsoos karti pyar tera,
Jiske liyain tadapti hoon main.


Hota gar yeh dil miTTi ka
to ouss par phool ugaa deti
Jiss ki khushbou bankar
saanson mein samaa jaati


Padhkar ek choti si gustaki kiye bina na reh saka...!

Badiya likha hai aap ne...!

Likhte rahiye



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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Aapki gustakhi ne to is sher ko aur bhi achcha kar diya!

Aapka addition mujhe pasand aaya.



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