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Lightbulb maine ek aansu baha diya - 2nd May 2007, 09:43 PM


ek garm hawa ke jhoke ne kal raat achaanak jaga diya,
soye the kayi armaan abhi usne unko bhi jaga diya.

shayed vo sapno mein aayein,ye soch ke mai soya tha magar,
lagta hai duniya valon ne sapno par pahra laga diya,

vo mode siskate hai ab bhi hum sath-sath chalte the jahan,
unko bhi duniya vaalon ne apna ye kissa suna diya.

phir gooji thi sahnai kahi,jode mein saja tha koi kahin,
apni kismat ka khyaal aaya,maine ek aansu baha diya

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ek garm hawa ke jhoke ne kal raat achaanak jaga diya,
soye the kayi armaan abhi usne unko bhi jaga diya.

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bahut khoob....yu hi likhtey rahiye....!

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BAHUT KHUB AARYAN JI

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ek garm hawa ke jhoke ne kal raat achaanak jaga diya,
soye the kayi armaan abhi usne unko bhi jaga diya.

shayed vo sapno mein aayein,ye soch ke mai soya tha magar,
lagta hai duniya valon ne sapno par pahra laga diya,

vo mode siskate hai ab bhi hum sath-sath chalte the jahan,
unko bhi duniya vaalon ne apna ye kissa suna diya.

phir gooji thi sahnai kahi,jode mein saja tha koi kahin,
apni kismat ka khyaal aaya,maine ek aansu baha diya

--Aryan


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ek garm hawa ke jhoke ne kal raat achaanak jaga diya,
soye the kayi armaan abhi usne unko bhi jaga diya.

shayed vo sapno mein aayein,ye soch ke mai soya tha magar,
lagta hai duniya valon ne sapno par pahra laga diya,

Waaah...kya baat khi hai...


vo mode siskate hai ab bhi hum sath-sath chalte the jahan,
unko bhi duniya vaalon ne apna ye kissa suna diya.

phir gooji thi sahnai kahi,jode mein saja tha koi kahin,
apni kismat ka khyaal aaya,maine ek aansu baha diya

Waaahh...

Hi Aryan,

Ek baar bahut hi khoobsurat kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne... meri daad kubool kijiyega... aise khoobsurat kalaam aage bhi likhte rahiyega... apna khayal rakhiye...


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nice - 9th May 2007, 10:36 AM

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ek garm hawa ke jhoke ne kal raat achaanak jaga diya,
soye the kayi armaan abhi usne unko bhi jaga diya.

shayed vo sapno mein aayein,ye soch ke mai soya tha magar,
lagta hai duniya valon ne sapno par pahra laga diya,

vo mode siskate hai ab bhi hum sath-sath chalte the jahan,
unko bhi duniya vaalon ne apna ye kissa suna diya.

phir gooji thi sahnai kahi,jode mein saja tha koi kahin,
apni kismat ka khyaal aaya,maine ek aansu baha diya

--Aryan
aryan ji bhut khub .....kyaa andaaz hai bhut acha lagga aapko parna......

phir gooji thi sahnai kahi,jode mein saja tha koi kahin,
apni kismat ka khyaal aaya,maine ek aansu baha diya

meri daad kabool kijiyega.........raj...........


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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14th May 2007, 09:14 PM

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ek garm hawa ke jhoke ne kal raat achaanak jaga diya,
soye the kayi armaan abhi usne unko bhi jaga diya.

SAHI LIKHA HAI <<<<<<KEEP IT UP,,,,,,,,

kisor ji namaskar

yakin maniye ki jab koi daad deta hai to likhne ke ummid mein mano par lag jaate hai..............ekbaar phir se sukriya..

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ek garm hawa ke jhoke ne kal raat achaanak jaga diya,
soye the kayi armaan abhi usne unko bhi jaga diya.

shayed vo sapno mein aayein,ye soch ke mai soya tha magar,
lagta hai duniya valon ne sapno par pahra laga diya,

vo mode siskate hai ab bhi hum sath-sath chalte the jahan,
unko bhi duniya vaalon ne apna ye kissa suna diya.

phir gooji thi sahnai kahi,jode mein saja tha koi kahin,
apni kismat ka khyaal aaya,maine ek aansu baha diya

--Aryan
aryan ji

bahut dard mein likha hai aap ne apna kalaam. mano aapne humare dil ki baat kahi ho.

aapko padhna acha laga.

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aapki partikriya k liye sukriya.
aage bhi intzaar rahega mujhe aapke jabaab ka.....

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ek garm hawa ke jhoke ne kal raat achaanak jaga diya,
soye the kayi armaan abhi usne unko bhi jaga diya.

shayed vo sapno mein aayein,ye soch ke mai soya tha magar,
lagta hai duniya valon ne sapno par pahra laga diya,

Waaah...kya baat khi hai...


vo mode siskate hai ab bhi hum sath-sath chalte the jahan,
unko bhi duniya vaalon ne apna ye kissa suna diya.

phir gooji thi sahnai kahi,jode mein saja tha koi kahin,
apni kismat ka khyaal aaya,maine ek aansu baha diya

Waaahh...

Hi Aryan,

Ek baar bahut hi khoobsurat kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne... meri daad kubool kijiyega... aise khoobsurat kalaam aage bhi likhte rahiyega... apna khayal rakhiye...
pulkit ji ko mera namaskar

aapse mili pratikriya ka bahut bahut sukriya

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bahut dard mein likha hai aap ne apna kalaam. mano aapne humare dil ki baat kahi ho.

aapko padhna acha laga.

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agar kisi se kisi ka dard milta ho to use "HUMDARD" kahte hai....................to aaj se hum dono humdard hue.......... najm par pratikriya ke dhanyabaad.

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