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Aaj raat vo Chaand tanha tanha sa lagta hai
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Love Aaj raat vo Chaand tanha tanha sa lagta hai - 13th January 2003, 10:44 AM

dosto a feeling sharing with u alllll...pesh hai


Aaj raat vo Chaand tanha tanha sa lagta hai,
soya hai jahhan sara aur mera bebas dil jagta hai.

Yaaad kaRta hai tujhey aahain ye bharta hai,
Apni hi soch me duba sa, aankhon num karta hai.

hai tu us chaand ki tarha jo lagta aankhonn ke saamne hai,
chu nahi sakte tujhey par har roz jee bhar ke chahtain hai!!

Teri hi baatain hai bas teri hi yaadain hai,
aur kya hai is zindagi mein, ye tanha si raaatain hai !!


...........Priyaaa.........


Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


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13th January 2003, 10:47 AM

Priyaa,
Gazal yeh tho fir hume bhi yaadon me legaye.. aur kyaa kahen,
Hume yeh sher bahuti achcha lagaa

Teri hi baatain hai bas teri hi yaadain hai,
aur kya hai is zindagi mein, ye tanha se raaatain hai !!

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BAHUT ACHHE - 13th January 2003, 10:57 AM

PRIYA JI,

Hamesha hi intezaar rehta hai mujhe aapki post ka . padhkar dil kahin kho jaata hai. Waise hamesha hiu kehta hun aur aaj fir keh raha hun ke aap likhti bahut achha hain. Keep it up.


hai tu us chaand ki tarha jo lagta aankhonn ke saamne hai,
chu nahi sakte tujhey par har roz jee bhar ke chahtain hai!!


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thanks - 13th January 2003, 11:02 AM

dear pyasa ji aap hamesha ki tarha apna naam nahi bataye kya bat hai yaar>? areey jaise aapke mere likhne ka intzaar rehta hai( ia m honored for real
mujhe aapke reply ka aapke shayri,com par aane ka intzaar rehta hai aur bahut dil ko sukun milta hai aapke yaha dehkar..aapke reply padhkar aapne apna favorite ques nahui pucha hehe whenever u ask me ur fac question i jus smile

lots of luv to you
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keep smiling and hey i always say zindagi raho to phir milainge ..may god bles su and give u not only a long but also a happy life this is my dil se dua for u !!!!


Baag rahe to phool bhi khilainge
ZINDAGI RAHE TO PHIR JARUR MILAINGE

AAPKI PRIYA.


Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

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hi - 13th March 2005, 03:00 AM

thanks bijli ji for liking these lines

Priya


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Re: Aaj raat vo Chaand tanha tanha sa lagta hai - 13th March 2005, 03:03 AM

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Originally posted by LuvPriya
dosto a feeling sharing with u alllll...pesh hai


Aaj raat vo Chaand tanha tanha sa lagta hai,
soya hai jahhan sara aur mera bebas dil jagta hai.

Yaaad kaRta hai tujhey aahain ye bharta hai,
Apni hi soch me duba sa, aankhon num karta hai.

hai tu us chaand ki tarha jo lagta aankhonn ke saamne hai,
chu nahi sakte tujhey par har roz jee bhar ke chahtain hai!!

Teri hi baatain hai bas teri hi yaadain hai,
aur kya hai is zindagi mein, ye tanha si raaatain hai !!


...........Priyaaa.........
Hi Priya,

Chaand....

Duniya soye aur hum jaagein
yehi hota hai pyaar mein

gustakhi dil karta hai
saaza aankhon ko milti hai

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7th May 2005, 09:54 PM

priyaji

chaand se mohabbat ho gayi hai
kyun pooche koi to
hhumara jawab yeh hoga ki

chand mein hi hum unki suart dekhte hain
lagta hai ki woh mere kareeb hain

tahe dil se shukriya
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7th May 2005, 09:59 PM

Khoob se aage kya KahuN..bas


Jalne ko to jalte hai yun phool par parwaane bhi
Ek mein parwaana hoon aise ki phool bhi na miltaa hai

Aaj raat vo Chaand tanha tanha sa lagta hai,
soya hai jahhan sara aur .........

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