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Smile You are all of this to me! - 15th April 2003, 08:49 PM

You're the tought that starts each morning,
the conclusion of each day.
You are in all that i do,
and everything i say.

You're the smile on my face,
the twinkle in my eye.
The warmth inside my heart,
the fullness in my life.

You're the hand that's laced in mine,
and the coat upon my back.
My friend, my love,
my shoulder to lean on.

You're my silly, mature, caring,
thoughtful, bright and honest guy.
The one who holds me tightly,
when i need to cry.

You're the dimple in my cheek,
the ever-constant tingle in my soul.
The voice that makes me weak,
the happiness of my life.

You are all I've wanted,
you are all i need.
You are all I've dreamed of,
you are all of this to me.

Rimjhim


"It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone..."

Isn't that true??? ;-)
   
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16th April 2003, 10:52 AM

gr8 piece of poetry rimjhim...
and let me tell u that this compliments comes rom Piyush and if u r a poet then it can't be impossible that u haven't heard my name before....just give a lil' bit of strain to ur memory and u are definately going to recall that who am i...check out my english poems to in 'english poems' section...nice work...
   
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18th April 2003, 12:41 AM

nice work rhimjhim ji...
nicely expressed,
keep writin
riddhi


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hi - 19th April 2003, 03:06 PM

hi
i must say its really great work,
its really hard to find words to express
love feeling in that fashion but its really great work
i must apprisiate it in fact all must,
thanks bye 4 now
khan banjara'''
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