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5th January 2004, 08:38 PM
MARGHATIS 4900 KABRISTAANIS 2200
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showth...=8&pagenumber=8 Naye team members ke liye yeh link ha regulations ka... Banjara Bhai it is sweet of you to be persistant like that...kya pata ek din i will relent...aapko shayad apni ahmiyat ka ilm nahin...aur shayri aapki hamesha khoobsurat hoti hai...hey, are you trying to fish out compliments from Paras...LOL...yeh lijiey aapke liye chand lines... sabhii ko dekho nahii.n hotaa hai nasiibaa raushan sitaaro.n jaisaa sayaanaa vo hai jo patajha.D me.n bhii sajaa le gulashan bahaaro.n jaisaa ho o o o ... kaagaz ke phuulo.n ko bhii jo mahakaa kar dikhalaae ek ba.njaaraa gaae, jiivan ke giit sunaae ham sab jiine vaalo.n ko jiine kii raah bataae  Arre Marghatiyo, Kabristaaniyon...where are you bhai...zarra yahan bhi nazar daaliye na huzoor...Shimul...tum kahan chalin gayin...Sweden se tau maine socha tum laut aayi ho...Plz aaja ki intezzar hai... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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5th January 2004, 08:40 PM
MERI CHSME NAM MERA SATH DE IK BACHPANE KI KHWAHISH JAGI
MAIN KHOB KHAILON MATIYON PE.BARISHON MAIN SAFAR KARON kabhi mekade main dhondo tujhe. masjidon main mangon tujhe din khwab khwab basar karon ,raat jag jag sehar karon  Yeh banjar bhai kee post hai...plz continue.... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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5th January 2004, 10:50 PM
bahut khoob banjar bhai..aapke aakhri post ke word 'raat' se aaghaaz karte hai...
baat kuch aur thi lekin yeh baat rahi baaki woh guzar gayi phir bhi woh raat rahi baaki nam aankhon se dekhe the chanchal sapne khwaab guzre phir bhi woh saugaat rahi baaki...  -mast Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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6th January 2004, 03:23 PM
Hum Khwaab lafz lekar apna ek kalaam likh rahe hain.. waise to is nazm me 16 lines hain.. magar rules ko follow karne ke liye hum isme se 12 lines hi likh rahe hain.. don't mind
 Chaand ke rath par, Jo sawaar aaye, Woh Khwaab haseen, Tere naam karti huun. Raat ke aanchal par, Jo sitaare jagmagaaye, Woh amber mazeen, Tere naam karti huun. Har pal is dil par, Tu basar paaye, Woh manzar shireen, Tere naam karti huun.  |
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8th January 2004, 05:30 AM
MARGHATIS 5000 KABRISTAANIS 2300
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showth...=8&pagenumber=8 Naye team members ke liye yeh link hai regulations ka... KYA HUA? WHERE'S EVERYONE? ARRE BHAI AAYIYE NA AUR IS LINK KO BADHATE RAHIEY... Shimul, kahan hain aap, kayi dinon se nazar nahin aayin? Sakhi aur Talib, my right arms...where are you two? Ghayal Bhayyia, Mast, Arvind Sony...guys you just have to pop in sometimes...aur bhi naye log jo participate karna chahte hon...plz feel free to write something...and we will put you either in Marghat or Kabristaan...lol...a position sure to be coveted...lol... so long.....paras Yeh Banno ji ne likha tha... Chaand ke rath par, Jo sawaar aaye, Woh Khwaab haseen, Tere naam karti huun. Raat ke aanchal par, Jo sitaare jagmagaaye, Woh amber mazeen, Tere naam karti huun. Har pal is dil par, Tu basar paaye, Woh manzar shireen, Tere naam karti huun. pls continue from here.... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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8th January 2004, 07:15 PM
Banno ki nazm se Khwaab lafz lekar aage badh raha huun..
Bahut haseen khwaab dekh raha tha,ik khila gulaab dekh raha tha Dekh raha tha main Gulshan e Bahara..tera chehra benakaab dekh raha tha Achaanak neend toot gayi..sapna mera choor hua.. ..tu to mujhse duur hi tha.. tera chehra bhi mujhse duur hua |
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9th January 2004, 12:45 AM
Thanks to you. Sabko meri Adaab, hope you all are well. I had net problems, that's the reason I couldn't come online.
Paras Jee, thanks. I don't want to say much about your say, you do what you think is best. haan, yeh aur baat hein ke mein keya mehsoosh kee. Afshan Jee, gana bohot achhi thi, love the song. sabka hi likhha hua bohot achha laga. I have gone through all. Dekh lafhj se age karti hu. Talat Mehmood Jee ke awaz meh. Dekh lee teri Khudai baas mera dil vhar gaya. Teri rahmat chup rahi.......mein rote rote maar gaya, Dekh lee teri Khudai....... Mere Malik keya kahu Teri duwaoka fareb, mujhpe yu saaya ke mujhko gharse beghar kar gaya. Dekh lee teri Khudai....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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9th January 2004, 02:38 PM
good one ghayal ji
post se lafz..KHUDAI le kar..aik sher ---------_________----- laho dast se tarahsa tha jine kabhi main ne wohi pathar karne lage dawe khudai k... agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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9th January 2004, 02:53 PM
hi aal..
apni post se lafz dast le kar... ------_______----- manga nahi tha kuch jasarat se ziada ham ne mere daste talab ko na ghor se dekha tum ne chalo bata do us tawiz ka matlab kiya tha meri kalai per juki ankhon se jo tha bandha tum ne ...agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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9th January 2004, 02:56 PM
apni post se lafz...tawiz le kar
-----______------- bandh lain hath pe sene pe saja lain tum ko ji main ata hay k tawiz bana lain tum ko is kadar tot k tum pe hmain piyar ata hay bhar lain bahon main mar hi dalain tum ko dil main ik ajab si uthti hay khwahish kar k munna sa hwaon main uchalain tum ko (written by SYED WASI SHAH) agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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9th January 2004, 03:14 PM
mere sabhi dost or khan boss........
khan n hota to is budhhu ka yaha aan akabhi n hota...... so mere aane ki kisi ko khushi ho to khan ke hawaale karna. ek baju taalibji ne brif ans; likhwana sikhaya to yaha to khan ne jo meri left-right li hai woh maie hu jaanti hu. khair........ koshish karti hu...... khan ne jo likha hai oos maie se dil labz le kar........: dard ban kar dil maie aana koi tumse sikh jaaye jaane- aashik ho ke jana koi tumse sikh jaaye ----- daag dahelvi |
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9th January 2004, 03:24 PM
hi aal..
meena ji..kmal karti hain aap.... aap k ane ki khishi hmain bhi bohat hay..ham kis k hwale karain...? meena ji ki post se lafz DIL le kar..hmari site k aik new member k chand ashar hain..jo hmain bohat ache lage...un se ijazat le kar... -------______-------- uski aas mei.n jo dil ke aas-pass hai bevajah hee aankh mei.n paani udaas hai usne jaane kaun se lahze mei.n baat kee uske har ik lafz kaa kaisaa libaas hai .... ;____-------written by...RAHUL SAHIB...in APP KI SHAYRI.. plz aal read this.. agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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9th January 2004, 03:33 PM
khan bahi,
tumhari khushi mere hawaale...... lol aakhir ladli bahna jo hu. hu na? khan se dil labz le kar....... baat woh baat ho jo dil maie asar kar jaaye, yunh to kahne ke liyae ahlay-sukhan lakhao.n hai. ------- daag dahelvi |
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9th January 2004, 03:41 PM
nice one meena ji
lafz bat le kar age chalte hain... ----____----- tum raat k kisi pehar chat per a jao agar mere dil ki batain sab chand tume se kah de ga agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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9th January 2004, 03:53 PM
apni post se lafz..CHATT ..LE KAR
BASHIR BADAR SAHIB ka ...... .AAG LEHRA KAR CHALI HAY USE ANCHAL KAR DO TUM MUJHYA RAAT KA JALTA HWA JANGAL KAR DO CHAND SA MISRA AKELA HAY MERE KAGAZ PER CHATT PE A JAO MERA SHER MUKAMAL KAR DO TUM MUJHAY CHOR K JAO GAY TO MAR JAON GA YUN KARO JANE SE PAHLE MUJHAY PAGAL KAR DO agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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9th January 2004, 04:03 PM
khan bahi se kagaz labz le kar.....
aaye kya kya yaad, nazar jab padti hai oon daalano par, ooska kagaz chipka dena ghar ke roshan daano par. ----- jaan nisaar akhtar  |
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9th January 2004, 04:16 PM
shimul ki yaad aani hi hai.. jab koi filmi gajal yaad aani hai.....
shimul ho sake to batana yah kisne likhi hai... muje to itna pata hai yah sulakshna pandit ne gaayi hui hai...... nazar labz ko le kar aage badhhti hu..... maana teri nazar maie, tera pyaar hum nahii, kaise kah de ke tere talabgaar hum nahiii... |
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9th January 2004, 11:26 PM
meena ji bahut khub..shiml ji ko pata karna hoga ki behtareen lafz kiske hai....par aapke nagme se lafz 'pyaar' ko churakar maine kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai..batayeiga ki kaisi lagi....
teri mohabbat ka kabhi zikr kahi hota hai khudbakhud naam mera hi chala aata hai tu lakh dur sahi hai juda bhi mujhse phir bhi har saans par dil yeh dhadak jaata hai baat kismat ki hai 'pyaar' ka yeh dosh nahi tu nahi phir bhi ek naam sa reh jaata hai nahin furqat mein behta aankhon se paani bas tera pyaar kabhi yunhi chalak jaata hai khudbakhud naam mera hi chala aata hai bas tera pyaar kabhi yunhi chalak jaata hai....... -mast Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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10th January 2004, 12:04 AM
Meena Jee, keisi hein aap? Ab toh aap bilkul thikh thakh hongi. Gana suni toh bohot hein aur aapne jo likhhi hein woh bhi suni hein. Lekin kishka likhha hua hein yeh toh mujhe nehi pata. Romance Jee ko zaroor pata hoga.
Mast Jee, aapka likhha hua hamesha hi achha hota hein. I wouldn't say much & hope you all can understand. Yes, if you know me then. Shukriya. Take care. God bless you all. Mera lafhj se age karti hu. Mera Pyaar tere jeevan ke sang rahega Meri aankhon meh tera hi rang rahega sang rahega mera Pyaar....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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10th January 2004, 02:03 AM
unho ne mehfil sajayee hue hai mere pyar ko barbaad kiye hue,
hum bhi jo hai gham se gehra rishta kiye hue, chont khane ki aadat si hogayee hai aik arsa beet gaya khushyo se kinare kiye hue. ab kab tak un se alag reh paye gay, dar badar bhatakte hai unka naam liye hue..... |
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10th January 2004, 06:54 AM
MARGHATIS 5400, KABRISTAANIS 3000
KABRISTAANI— Meena, banjara ji, tanhaai, happy, Parasaxena, roopali, khushi, sanjoo, talkingeyes, piya, Banno, Maikash, ghayalparwana, arnab, MARGHATI— sakhi, talib, manoj kureel, arvindsony, bhadsha-E-gham bindiya, ambar, shakeel shaikh, mushi bhai, manish bansal, madh-e-ghum, shimul, mast, sofia saaed kuch bandishein hain yahan sher ya poem post karne kee… Maximum length 12 lines (your own or borrowed). Celebrating zindagi, pyaar, dosti, ma-baap, vagairah vagairah. No no words, maut, chita, shamshaan, vagairah vagairah. Must use one of the words from last post, just any. We will have two teams…1 Marghati 2 Kabristaani (when you post a sher, if you are not already in a team, Sakhi will assign you a team, and occasionally we will post points as well as team members’ names). ok guys this is getting out of hand here...meena jee aur khan bhai...apni hee post ke saath janaab phir se aap nahin kuch likh sakte...you have to wait until someone writes...pehle tau aaye nahin...ab aaye ho tau janaab chapar phaadh ke...waah...  kya kehne...aapka kabristaaniyon ko aage badhaane ka yeh tarikaa bhi pasand aaya...lol...Dekhiey janaab aapki disqualified posts se humne points nahin kaate itna shukr keejiye...yeh aap dono Kabristaaniyon ko mehaj warning hee dee jaati hai...aayinda fine ho jaayega haan...khan bhai paras ke naam ek aur....haan haan.... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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10th January 2004, 07:00 AM
Meena ji aur Sofia Saeed jee ko main apni kursi kee haisiyaat se...LOL.
welcome karna chaahoongi...aap aaye janaab tau is bazm mein rang khil gaye...khushiyan behak gayin...aur na jaane kya kya ho gaya...yoonhi nazar-o-karam farmaati rahiyega...Shimul jee ne yeh likha tha... Mera Pyaar tere jeevan ke sang rahega Meri aankhon meh tera hi rang rahega sang rahega mera Pyaar....... pls yahan se thread continue kijiey.... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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10th January 2004, 04:15 PM
aapa
kya haal hai apka ?? aur mere sabhi paayr pyare dostin ka kya haal hai new yr mein haan??? mein to apko bhut miss karti hun. mein jeevan word le raghi hun.. jeeven se bhari teri ankhe majboor kaein jeene ke liye sagar bhi tarste rahte hai tere roop ka ras peene ke liye jeevan se bhari teri ankheee tasveer banaye kya koi kya koi likhe tujh pe kavita rango chando mein samayegi kis tarh se itni sundrta ek dhadkan hai too dil ke liye ek jaan hai too jine ke liye sakhiiiiiii with lovशब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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10th January 2004, 07:42 PM
priye sakhu,paras ji aur sabhi doston....kaise hai aap sab......mein 1st time is bazm mein shirkat kar raha hoon.....
mein "tasveer" shabd le raha hoon....yeh ek behas pyara geet hai jisko Talat Mehmood saheb ne apni larazti aawaz bakshi hai.... tasveer banata hoon tasveer nahin banti,,, tasveer nahin banti... ek khawab sa dekha hai taabeer nahin banti... tasveer nahin banti.... bedard mohabbat ka itna sa hai afsana.. nazron se mili nazrein mein ho gaya deewana ab dil ke behelne ki taabeer nahin banti... tasveer nahin banti........ dam bhar ke liye meri dunia mein chale aao pyasi meri nazron ko ek jhalak dikha jao mujhse to meri koi taqdeer nahin banti tasveer nahin banti..... -Manoj Kureel karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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10th January 2004, 09:06 PM
Hi,
my word is tasveer Badi muddat se mere dil me ye tasveer baitee hai Badi muddat se mere dil me ye tasveer baitee hai Uski zulfo ke saayo mein meri taqdeer baitee hai ..." Love Is God. Love is worship. Love is Everything...... |
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11th January 2004, 06:10 PM
hi all...
thanks again meena ji....ane ka...parastar sahiba...yeh bat i think rules main nahin btayi gayi hay....or galat bat hay....thik hay aap kahin to ham jeet waise hi aap k nam likh dalte hain... or aap ne hmara pahle sher pasand nahi aya is liye dosra kahan likh payain gain..itni kahan okat hmari..or itne kabil nahin ham.. anyw ay...i will take care of that next time... Dont u think k istarah mukabla one sided hi chalta rahe ga..baki aap jaisE kaho... lafz..TASWEER le kar aik sher... "KHIYALON MAIN TERE ROOP KO MUJASSAM KAR K HAY MASHGHALA PAHRON TERI TASWEER DEKHNA'''' (written by...ABDUL RAUF RUFI) agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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11th January 2004, 08:41 PM
MARGHATIS 5700, KABRISTAANIS 3100
Banjaara Bhai...Khan Sahib... arre aap tau yoonhi naraaz ho gaye...aur aap bhool gaye main na jeetoongi na haroongi...main to ab shamshaan se bahar hoon..na marghat mein na kabristaan mein...waise dheere se kuch kahoon? apke is sher ne tau hamein pehle hee jeet liya hai...LOL..hum pehle bhi taareef kar chuke hain...hamein bahut bahut bahut hee pasand aaya tha...sachhiiiii.... [/COLOR] KHAN SAMJHE GA K SHAYRI POHANCH CHUKI HAY MANZIL KO PARAS..GAHRA TERI ANKHON SA IK SHER AGAR BAN JAYE KOI Aur hamne uske uttar mein aapko yeh lines bhi bheji theen...yeh geet aapkee nazar kiya tha... ...sabhii ko dekho nahii.n hotaa hai nasiibaa raushan sitaaro.n jaisaa sayaanaa vo hai jo patajha.D me.n bhii sajaa le gulashan bahaaro.n jaisaa ho o o o ... kaagaz ke phuulo.n ko bhii jo mahakaa kar dikhalaae ek ba.njaaraa gaae, jiivan ke giit sunaae ham sab jiine vaalo.n ko jiine kii raah bataae Aur mere pyaare khan Bhai...agar us rule mein choot de dee na tau main bata doon...marghatiyon ke paas ek shimul hee kafee hai...uske pas tau gazalon ka, geeton ka khazana hai...woh ek ke baad ek sher...chutki mein hee pesh karti jaayeigi...bataayiye I have to be fair...nahin tau mujhe moderator kee kursi se bhi resign karna padega....LOL...ab be a good sport, sportsmanship dikhaayein aur apne kabristaaniyon ko lalkaarein ki aakar muqabla jeetein...maidaan tau sabka hai... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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11th January 2004, 08:47 PM
Aur khan Bhai ne yeh likha hai....
"KHIYALON MAIN TERE ROOP KO MUJASSAM KAR K HAY MASHGHALA PAHRON TERI TASWEER DEKHNA'''' (written by...ABDUL RAUF RUFI) plz continue... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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12th January 2004, 03:42 AM
Dear Khan Jee, aap aisi baate karenge yeh umeed nehi thi. Have you seen me posting two at a time? If every one starts doing so then just guess what will happen! I hope you can understand what I ment. Bura nehi maniyega. Yeaha 2 groups hein, your group can come anytime and post here but atleast wait till another person reply first.
Thanks. Take care. God bless you. Teri lafhj se age karti hu. Duet song. Teri umeed tera intezar karte hein, aye sanam hum toh sirf tumse Pyaar karte hein....... Jaan hum bhi tumpe jaan nisar karte hein, aye sanam hum toh sirf tumse Pyaar karte hein....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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12th January 2004, 08:11 PM
My Word is Umeed
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Aaj ujaali ki kiran kho gayi zindagi veraan se ho gayi, gaye woh din jab humne unse umeed rakha Aaj yeh khoob ho gaya ki humain dosti se nafrat ho gayi  ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Love Is God. Love is worship. Love is Everything...... |
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12th January 2004, 08:32 PM
bahut khoob arvind ji...'zindagi' word ko lekar aage badhte hai...kuch kal shaam ko likha tha pesh hai...
hua na dard tere zindagi se jaane ka tere na hone ka is dil mein ehsaas bhi hai bahut junoon tha humko bhi tujhe paane ka teri yaadon ki kabr ka ehtaraat bhi hai kya hua karta hai haqeqat aur hasrat ka rishta zindagi nahin aur jeene ka ilm saath bhi hai... -mast Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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12th January 2004, 08:43 PM
Bohot khub likhha hein aapne. Now it's my turn, right? Here you go. Dard lafhj se age karti hu.
Singers are Mehdi Hassan & Runa laila. Darde dil kish ko sunaye koi humraaz nehi saaj chhera hein magar ish meh bhi awaz nehi darde dil kish ko sunaye....... Tere milne ki tamanna meh jeeye jaata hu zindegi ka mere ab aur koi raaz nehi darde dil kish ko sunaye....... Hum ko bigree huyi taqdeer pe keya kehna hein hum toh tere hein sanam aur koi naaz nehi darde dil kish ko sunaye....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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13th January 2004, 08:13 PM
shimul ji word chehra ko lekar yeh likha hai...
dhalte suraj mein bhujte din ki saanson mein neele aakash mein badte badal ki tarah aur kabhi behti nadiya mein chalte amrit ko dekha humne tujhe nazuk chitwaan ki tarah phir kabhi jo haseen chand ne nazuk saansein bikhre taare bhi teri un yaadon ki tarah sard saahil pe aati huyi chanchal lehren aur kabhi shaant madosh saagar ki tarah yunhi chalti hai yeh harkat mere seene mein meri chahat yunhi badti hai har din ki tarah phir kabhi jaakar bhi aata hai dubaara suraj tera chehra haseen rukh naaye pal ki tarah.... -mast Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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13th January 2004, 08:44 PM
Dear Mast Jee, bohot khubsurat. Aise hi likhte rahiyega. Shukriya.
Tarha lafhj se age karti hu. Aap toh aise na the film ki gana. Tu ish tarah se meri zindegi meh shamil hein jaaha bhi jaau yeh lagta hein teri mehfhil hein tu ish tarah se meri zindegi meh shamil hein....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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13th January 2004, 08:48 PM
My Word is Zindagi...
Koi Aaasaa'n Nahi Aabaad Karna Ghar Mohabbat Ka, Yeh Unka Kaam Hai Jo Zindagi Barbaad Kartay Hai. Love Is God. Love is worship. Love is Everything...... |
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13th January 2004, 08:57 PM
Arvind Jee, achha likhha hein aapne. Shukriya. Likhte rahiyega.
Zindegi lafhj se age karti hu. Calcutta Mail film. Zindegi hein keya Pyaar ke beena Pyaar bhi hein keya aapke beena....... jeene ki yeh umange khushio ki yeh tarange inhmeh keya rang hoga aa jee aapke beena zindegi hein keya....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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13th January 2004, 09:06 PM
Hi Shimul ji
jab song ke baat chali he hi to hum ko yeh song yaad aaya hi..word hi Rang Bumbro, Bumbro Shyam Rang Bumbro Aaye Ho Kis Bagiya Se, Hohoho Tum Bhanwre O Shyam Bhanwre Khushiyon Ko Saath Laaye Mehndi Ki Raat Mein Tum Leke Saugaat Aaye Ho, Kaajal Ka Rang Laaye Nazrein Utaarne Ko Baaghon Se Phool Laye Raste Sanwaarne Ko Love Is God. Love is worship. Love is Everything...... |
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13th January 2004, 09:21 PM
Arvind Jee, aap jeise shayar toh mein hu nehi, keya karu!
Aapka likhha hua gana achha hein. Rang lafhj se age karti hu. Bollywood Hollywood film ki gana. Rang rang mere rang rang meh rang jaayegi tu rang sang sang mere sang sang meh sang ayegi sang Rang rang mere rang rang meh rang jaayega tu rang sang sang mere sang sang meh sang ayega sang Rang sang mera miljaayega aang aang tera khiljaayega....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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14th January 2004, 08:22 AM
MARGHATIS 6500, KABRISTAANIS 3100
KABRISTAANI-- Meena, banjara ji, tanhaai, happy, Parasaxena, roopali, khushi, sanjoo, talkingeyes, piya, Banno, Maikash, ghayalparwana, arnab, MARGHATI— sakhi, talib, manoj kureel, arvindsony, bhadsha-E-gham bindiya, ambar, shakeel shaikh, mushi bhai, manish bansal, madh-e-ghum, shimul, mast, sofia saaed kuch bandishein hain yahan sher ya poem post karne kee… Maximum length 12 lines (your own or borrowed). Celebrating zindagi, pyaar, dosti, ma-baap, vagairah vagairah. No no words, maut, chita, shamshaan, vagairah vagairah. Must use one of the words from last post, just any. We will have two teams…1 Marghati 2 Kabristaani (when you post a sher, if you are not already in a team, Sakhi will assign you a team, and occasionally we will post points as well as team members’ names). gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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14th January 2004, 08:28 AM
Mast Sahib...aap yellow munh lagana phir bhool gaye naa? Koyi baat nahin sirf -100 point hee lose kiye aapki team ne...jo kaafi aage badh chuki hai...lagta hai Kabristaan ka darwaaza phir se khatkaana padegaa...plz ismein hamari madad kijiey aur un logon ko maidaan main le aayiye...Banno jee bhi nazar nahin aa rahi hain...papa arvind, shimul, mast main aapki bahut aabhaari hoon jo aap samay nikal kar yahan aate hain...likhte rahieyga...
Shimul aapne meri pasand ka gana likh kar dil khush kar diya... Rang rang mere rang rang meh rang jaayegi tu rang sang sang mere sang sang meh sang ayegi sang Rang rang mere rang rang meh rang jaayega tu rang sang sang mere sang sang meh sang ayega sang Rang sang mera miljaayega aang aang tera khiljaayega....... pls continue... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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