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main taaron se ghar ko sajounga jab tum milne aaogi....(nazam)
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main taaron se ghar ko sajounga jab tum milne aaogi....(nazam) - 28th July 2006, 11:00 AM

dosto apni ek nazam pesh kar raha hoon jis main kisi ke aane ka intzaar hai or uske aane pe is dil ka kaya haal ho wo main is main byaan kar raha hoon.......


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28th July 2006, 11:11 AM

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28th July 2006, 04:24 PM

raj ji..

sach kahu?
lagta hai aapne kisi se beinthaan mohabbat ki hai..
jiski tadap aapke nazmo mein saaf dikhti hai..
is nazm ko pad ke na jane kyu palkein bheeg gai..
par ek shikayat hai..
kya unke mil jane ke baad aap unhein aur humein chod kar chale jaenge? nahi na? to marne ki baat kyu?
yu kahie ki aap jee uthenge jab wo milne aaengi..

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hi - 11th August 2006, 06:24 PM

gulzar bhai app pehli daffa meri post par aiye main appka khairmaqdam karta hoon appko meri nazam pasand i iske liye main appka shukarguzaar hoon.....umeed karta hoon appka saath yu he milta rahega.......raj........


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main taaron se ghar ko sajounga jab tum milne aaogi....(nazam) - 11th August 2006, 08:30 PM

veer ji bahot achhi nazam likhi hai aapne. aur kuch nahi kaungi bas itna kahungi ki aapka likha hame bahot pasand aata hai. aapke liye hamare dil me hamesha jagaha rahegi

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hi - 14th August 2006, 05:27 PM

raj ji..

sach kahu?
lagta hai aapne kisi se beinthaan mohabbat ki hai..
jiski tadap aapke nazmo mein saaf dikhti hai..
is nazm ko pad ke na jane kyu palkein bheeg gai..
par ek shikayat hai..
kya unke mil jane ke baad aap unhein aur humein chod kar chale jaenge? nahi na? to marne ki baat kyu?
yu kahie ki aap jee uthenge jab wo milne aaengi..

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nisha ji appko meri nazak achi lagi appka bhut bhut shukria.....yaha tak pyar ki baat hai....haan main kisi se bhut mohabat karta hoon lakin wo meri kabhi nahi ho sakti......bass uski baatain hee is zindagi ka sarmaya hai........raj......


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hi - 26th August 2006, 11:27 AM

veer ji bahot achhi nazam likhi hai aapne. aur kuch nahi kaungi bas itna kahungi ki aapka likha hame bahot pasand aata hai. aapke liye hamare dil me hamesha jagaha rahegi

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pooja app dosto ki badaulat hee raj ka wajood kayam hai gar app ka saath na ho raj kab ka bikhar gaya hota....appko meri nazam achi lagi main appka shukarguzaar hoon.....raj.....


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