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27th February 2008, 01:27 PM
Hi Friends
Aaj aapke saamne kuchh pesh kar raha hun koshish yahi hai kee apko pasand aaye .. Tinka Tinka jo hamne aahiyan banaya tha Usko haathon se khud apne hee jalaya tha harek raah kee manjil hamara ghar nikla gamon ko jaane kisne rasta dikhaya tha Dil ke aaine kee dhundhli see ek tasveer hun main Tera chahra bhi kuchh der najar aaya tha Dil kee awaargi rishton ko na pahchan saki Apna kahte the jinhe dhokha unhi se khaya tha Hazaar gam ke bahane bana ke chhod gaya Jo kushi ban ke meri jindgi main aaya tha Ek arse se jindgi meri talash main hai Tumhari galiyon main main khud ko chhod aaya tha Har ek pal koi ahsaan kar gaya mujh par Ye waqt teri kuchh yaaden samet laya tha In tej lahron ko anish gujar jaane do Yanhi kahin pe ek sailab kabhi aaya tha tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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27th February 2008, 01:32 PM
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hello Anish ji aaj aate hi apka likkha hua padhne ko mila...accha laga padhkar aap ne har baar ki tarah yeh bhi dil ko touch karta hua likkha hai....saare sher aise lag rahe haijaise meri hi kahani ho... or kya tareef karun... bas itna hi ki aise hi likhte rahiyega taek caer jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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27th February 2008, 01:42 PM
hi shweta
aaj to gajal post karte hee aapka reply shayad meri is rachna ko apna inaam mil gaya iske jajbaaton ko juban mil gayi hai aapka meri post par aana mujhe hamesha achha lagta hai apki hosla afjai ke liye shukriya khush rahiye tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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